【正文】 ersonal skills and handson ability are the basic personal qualities required of a successful financial person, I availed myself of various opportunities to undertake began to invest in the stock market in face of the frustrations at the outset, I audited all the courses of security analysis and investment on campus, read a lot of financial magazines and newspapers and consulted some professors and my was uplifted during such a process, not only in money making, but also in grasping the principles and regulations behind the stock value my experiences in conducting research programs which acted as bridges linking my theoretical knowledge with the larger world where it would be importantly, I got much enlightenment and inspiration from making presentations, like my presentations regarding the parison and analysis of appreciations of Yuan and Yen along with the cases of these presentations, I tried to arrive at flexible and prehensive mand of plicated , I derived selfconfidence and sense of joy in immersing myself in the fields where my interests genuinely other unique assets are attributed to my internships in different units where finance invariably plays an important I worked in China Foreign Exchange and Trade Centre, I gained a full understanding of the trading systems of mercial banks and raised my own proposals which were soon adopted about their function , I found a trader’s work busy but interesting, which allowed me to see my own strength and weakness gauged with the had my professional skills and teamwork spirit honed during my internship in People’s Bank of China where I learned about the functions of the central bank and my prominent performance won recognition from the persons in charge , my onthespot investigations in a goalApplicant for Finance Program from Renmin University of Chinamine enterprise and a copper mine enterprise allowed me to see other fields where finance matters tremendously through my exposure to the financial conditions, profit resources and development trends of the experiences, bined with my bountiful extracurricular activities such as the volunteer position of Beijing 2008 Olympic Games, involvement in organizing exhibitions and shows have prompted me to set my own career goals—pared to the research work, I prefer a more practical I have learned to focus on the way to achieving my goals—to pursue more advanced education in America, the ideal place full of practical opportunities regarding finance and economy as a have long admired your esteemed university for its significant achievements in the teaching and research of program of finance, with its wellstructured curriculum, highlyproductive faculty as well as a multitude of realworld projects matches my academic background and interest hope to work in a worldclass financial institution or a transnational enterprise after the pletion of my master program and your diverse student body and strong alumni work will no doubt bee a stepping stone leading me to my career prepared and determined, I’m convinced that your university is precisely my starting 第四篇：留學(xué)申請個人陳述Applicant for Computer Science Program from Tsinghua UniversityPersonal StatementFor nearly one year, when all other colleagues had gone back home after work or to the bars for relaxation, I kept myself busy with the designing, programming, and refactoring I got home every day after ten o’clock in the night, I would read papers of XXX and continue for seeking the universities and professors attractive to me until one o’clock in the sense of responsibility for the pany made me obliged to finish all the projects in my hands before I leave for my yearning for the free American environment which is easy to inspire researchers’ potential made me willing to live such hard life under much greater over two years’ software development work in Beijing Grandsoft Technology Co., Ltd has already helped me accumulate considerable experience in software programming and designing and make some achievements admirable in others’ eyes, I, who will be promoted as a senior development engineer, know clearly that only the xxx program in your department can fully exert my strength and make my pursuit e know that I belong to the kind of people who are able to better realize the life values and meaningfulness while doing certain interesting things, who enjoy challenges and thinking and who are always in pursuit of creative , the work I was taking up now is almost always repetition of what has already ’s why I gave up the achievement without know that I will be able to master the most advanced technology and thoughts in the xxx such a bright and promising field, I believe I will be able to inspire all my ability in facing challenges, and finally bee a top talent to make contributions to the development in the , my studying and working experiences make me very confident in myself to believe that I have got the ability and potential to realize my became interested in puter science in Chongqing Nankai Middle School, a school emphasizing cultivating personal my unusual performance in the National Entrance Examination failed me for entering the Department of Computer Science of Tsinghua clear of my interest and goal, I spent quite a lot of time in puter science besides the basic courses required by the I didn’t gain an extraordinary GPA, I succeeded in transferring to the School of , my GPA continued increasing and my foundation in the major was have a good habit in learning and matter how great the pressure was, I would stick to my studies after I finished reading books like Interconnection NetworksAn Engineering Approach and reviewed(Introduction to Algorithms, Computer Networks, Database Systems Concepts) addition, I am very could solve the instability in file transmission by using FTP/HTTPmethod instead of the original Web Service/COM+ method to cope with different network situations after independent thinking。過于冗長的文章，并不一定對申請起到助力作