【正文】 he(trend).,….If we want to do something… , it is essential that…顯然,如果我們想做某事,很重要的是…Only in this way can we… 只有這樣,我們才能…預(yù)示后果:No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that…毫無疑問,除非我們采取有效措施,很可能會(huì)…It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the ,From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the ,:列出解決辦法:Here are some suggestions for handling… best way to solve the troubles is… 解決這些麻煩的最好辦法是…People have figured out many ways to solve this :As far as something is concerned, ….就某事而言,…It was obvious that… 很顯然,….It may be true that…, but it doesn’t mean that… 可能…是對(duì)的,但這并不意味著…It is natural to believe that… , but we shouldn’t ignore that…認(rèn)為….是很自然的,但我們不應(yīng)忽視….There is no evidence to suggest that… 沒有證據(jù)表明…轉(zhuǎn)折詞遞進(jìn) What is more, in addition, besides,總結(jié) in conclusion, to a large extent（在很大程度上）,其它寫得好的模板，看看有無借鑒之處:一、which reveals____________（稍作評(píng)價(jià)）.In my perspective of view, ____________（表明個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)）。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇睂?duì)該現(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。Certificate Craze on CampusIn recent years, getting a certificate has bee a new craze among college students.[1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind.[4]Why does this craze appear?[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this , [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce petition in the job can one make himself more petitive? More certificates at hand, , diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students pel themselves to run from one exam to another.[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it es to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value.【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】[1]祈使句使用恰當(dāng)。[4]設(shè)問句引出原因，容易引起注意。[8]“當(dāng)談到或提及…時(shí)”?！炯丫渑R摩】：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some ：離婚率上升盡管令人難過，但卻是不爭(zhēng)的事實(shí)。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇睂?duì)該現(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。Students’ Pursuit for Famous BrandsNowadays many college students like to pursue famous clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands.[2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as phenomenon has aroused wide attention.[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands.[2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and expect others to admire their high class and good taste.[2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students.[2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.[3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability.[3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class.[3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】[1]“有…傾向”。[6] it為形式主語(yǔ)，不定式為真正主語(yǔ)。not…but連接并列成分。___________________________________________________________________________：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous ：很多同學(xué)經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲，這是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，而不是一種有益的放松方式。保證合理利用貸款并表明還款決心，最后表示感謝。[4]過渡銜接詞語(yǔ)，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。【佳句臨摩】：To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major ：令人更迷惑不解的是，很多飛機(jī)都從大海上離奇消失了。由于拘泥于傳統(tǒng)語(yǔ)法框架，許多初學(xué)寫作的人都喜歡用名詞開頭寫句子。試讀下面這段文章：One thing in particular I remember made me feel grateful toward my mother was that one day I went and asked her for my own garden, and she let me have my own little love it and take care of it loved especially to grow was proud when we had them on our would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came would patrol the rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs, and I would kill and bury “I”。這也就是省略結(jié)構(gòu)所表達(dá)出的英文的緊湊性。Either Sally must be responsible for the matter or we’ll be(responsible for the matter).或者賽麗對(duì)此事負(fù)責(zé)，或者由我們來承擔(dān)責(zé)任。例句：An ensemble that performs B in which the other performs A is excused from the rehearsal after that （樂曲）時(shí)，那麼演奏B（樂曲）的樂團(tuán)就有充分的理由不去彩排了。3）。