【正文】 nar one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our , no matter how far away or how busy we are, we still try to go home for the moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or ：天津卷 來源：天星更新日期：20130709 點擊：78 第二節(jié)：書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)。個人優(yōu)勢介紹(如性格、特長等)。注意: 。A mother said, “My son is always on the phone, sleeping, out with his friends, or in his never has time to talk to me.” 要求:（1）就此材料發(fā)表你的看法。假設(shè)你是李華,現(xiàn)請用英文給WWF(世界自然保護(hù)基金組織)寫一封信，請他們關(guān)注這一狀況并提供幫助。希望WWF如何幫助(比如:資助江豚保護(hù)項目等)m a student from Chongqing, sincerely, Li Hua 【范文賞讀】Some children are so busy with their own business that they have no time for their , this is anything but rare among today39。m writing to call your attention to the danger finless porpoises are currently affected by human activities, finless porpoises in the Yangtze River are in danger of being our disappointment, only about 1,000 are estimated to be still living at sincerely hope that WWF can play a role in protecting this endangered , a sponsorship will be of great more importantly, we need information from experts in WWF to help us better understand the animal thus being able to take better care of you for your attention and I39。學(xué)生作文主要從內(nèi)容要點、語言使用效果、結(jié)構(gòu)和連貫性、格式和語域及與目標(biāo)讀者的交流五個方面進(jìn)行評價。現(xiàn)在，不少學(xué)生對英語書面表達(dá)不予或不夠重視。用順審準(zhǔn)題義，明確情景，看清要求。為此，應(yīng)注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what39。m afraid, I think等表示過度及連接的詞匯，使之有較強(qiáng)的感情色彩。1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遺漏處加be）2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遺漏處加are）（3）時態(tài)錯誤。（4）語態(tài)錯誤。39。如：1）Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（錯）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）2）Wele you e back to our school to visit.（錯）→You’re wele back to visit our school.（正）另外，不重視掌握單詞，寫作時碰到生詞難句就委婉地去解釋，用模糊定義，語言生澀難懂，文意混亂，表達(dá)不清。簡明扼要，表達(dá)清楚，是關(guān)鍵所在。如：1）He studies very hard and kind.（錯）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）2）He doesn39。t know what to do and how to do it.（正）另外，考試是根據(jù)內(nèi)容和表達(dá)給分的，要點齊全，是直接因素。格式。常識性。整潔文章寫好后，應(yīng)認(rèn)真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小寫及標(biāo)點符號錯誤，謄寫應(yīng)盡可能書寫工整，布局美觀。（提示：雨水、河水、井水??）（提示：人口增加，工業(yè)用水增加，污染??）？ Global Shortage of Fresh Water One possible version: Global Shortage of Fresh WaterMany people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used think that fresh water es from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for an opinion leads to a shocking waste of a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh ,with the rapid growth of the world’s population ,the rising demand for water by industry ,and the serious pollution of our surroundings ,the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh ,in some big cities ,fresh water cannot meet the daily ,to find new ways to save water is an urgent ,we should pass strict laws to control any waste of ,scientists must work even harder to purify sea water and polluted water ,and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh 有關(guān)環(huán)境保護(hù)的英語作文：水資源是有限的人們總以為淡水是取之不盡的，實際上淡水資源是很有限的。所有的動植物都需要水。水，正如你所了解的，有固態(tài)、液態(tài)和氣態(tài)。The Importance of WaterAs we all know, plants and animals need do the people39。t live in them any the same time, thc waste water does great harm to people39。因此，許多地方缺水。環(huán)境日英語作文：關(guān)于河水污染的感想根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇關(guān)于河水污染的感想。，河水會變干凈。但當(dāng)我看到沿著城區(qū)流過的河流時，我感到很惋惜，想了很多。我們急切呼吁采取措施改變這種狀況。但同時，我也注意到我們城市的水污染變得越來越嚴(yán)重了。沒有水人類將無法生存。也就是說，開頭很好，也必然要有一個精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：Obviously（此為過渡短語）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for “顯而見之”，但說無妨，就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了！更多過渡短語：to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型：Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…2． 結(jié)尾萬能公式二：如此建議如果說“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價值的廢話了，因為這里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個很經(jīng)典的虛擬語氣的句型。：社區(qū) munity 第二節(jié)：一、評分原則，按5個檔次給分。二、內(nèi)容要點：下周六上午8：00 至 11：00：采摘蘋果：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前：帶帽子、手套【參考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our munity is going to organize an activity for all the munity Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’ you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of are looking forward to your joining Office 【解析】 本題命制穩(wěn)健，是中學(xué)教學(xué)中最為常見的提綱式作文。理思路：調(diào)整要點，講清本次活動的安排。重點放在要點寫全了嗎？時態(tài)、語態(tài)、動詞的數(shù)、單詞拼寫對了嗎？標(biāo)點符號、大小寫用對了嗎？檢查完后再抄寫在試卷上，注意卷面的整潔。這本身就是一種便利。；；。但這并不就說明該卷乏善可陳。浙江卷前幾年基本上是選擇疑問句式的標(biāo)題作文。09年，除了北京繼續(xù)考了敘事外，浙江也出現(xiàn)了敘事性質(zhì)的文體要求?，F(xiàn)請你用英文給該網(wǎng)站發(fā)送一封電子郵件，向其推薦話題。在寫作中應(yīng)注意如下幾點：“我們應(yīng)該感恩”。就話題而言，近四年都與外事活動或外語學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)?？偟恼f來，重慶卷一直比較謹(jǐn)慎，命題基本上沒有超出全國卷I的范式。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening，because I have liked flowers、grasses etc since I was a little child。What39。學(xué)生在寫作時應(yīng)注意如下幾點：，從四科中選取自己最有把握和有話可說學(xué)科，這是寫作的關(guān)鍵，過渡要自然；，要把握實用性。09年的Guided Writing屬于混合性質(zhì)：陳說+議論?！究傇u】2009年高考英語全國卷地方卷共19套，短文寫作共20篇（上海卷和廣東卷各2篇，寧強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練1（1分）假設(shè)你是你校京劇愛好者協(xié)會的成員，在一次同英國中學(xué)生代表團(tuán)的聯(lián)歡活動中，你協(xié)會將出一個京劇節(jié)目。4．下面演出開始，希望朋友們喜歡。1（1分）李華父親的朋友陳偉是在美國居住多年的華裔。3．學(xué)校很美，有許多花草樹木，兩座教學(xué)大樓，一座宿舍樓。參考詞匯：選修課：elective體育館：gym宿舍樓：dormitory building1（1分）寫信向友人介紹作家魯迅。2．他的小說被譯成多種文字，并被制成電影，如《阿Q正傳》、《祝福》這兩部影片深刻地揭露了舊社會。參考詞匯：創(chuàng)始人：Founder中國文學(xué)：Chinese Literature阿Q正傳：The True Story of AH Q祝福：The New Year’s Sacrifice1（1分）提示：為引進(jìn)外資，進(jìn)一步加快你家鄉(xiāng)A城改革開放。2．解放前是一個小漁村，以漁業(yè)為主，沒有工業(yè)，只有幾所小學(xué)。已有三千人從該校畢業(yè)。告訴Peter每天晚上你都在家，請他給你打個電話告訴你他是否來參加生日晚會，并表達(dá)你盼望見到他的心情。2．吃驚于家鄉(xiāng)的巨大變化。4．我表示羨慕他們，我對父親說，將來大學(xué)畢業(yè)要回老家來，父親也表示說他一退休就來。以下是張紅的簡歷。在過去三年中一直是本校學(xué)生報編輯之一，學(xué)習(xí)成績在班上優(yōu)秀。參考詞匯：職業(yè)學(xué)校：vocational school專業(yè)：major（1分）給朋友小林的一封信，談?wù)労偕?。不得不回絕親戚朋友的邀請，只在除夕時打電話問