【正文】 是認(rèn)為包裝越精美，質(zhì)量越好這種錯(cuò)誤的消費(fèi)意識(shí)。重點(diǎn)分析產(chǎn)生此現(xiàn)象的原因有哪些，把最重要的兩三點(diǎn)羅列下來。好的文章，不僅是句子準(zhǔn)確，還要考慮句子的高級(jí)化。比如三個(gè)方法，或者是三個(gè)建議的措施，三個(gè)原因，三個(gè)危害等等。重點(diǎn)在方法、建議的措施上。我們?cè)趯懽魑牡臅r(shí)候分三個(gè)層次，總分總的原則，第一自然段我們一定要進(jìn)行引題部分，第二是分析，第三是總結(jié)。也就是說要保持卷面清晰，給老師留下好的第一印象?！癏ow to”題型已經(jīng)考過三次，重點(diǎn)在如何(how)，也就是說我們重點(diǎn)是方法。這是第一套題。第一篇：大學(xué)英語四級(jí)作文真題解析大學(xué)英語四級(jí)作文真題解析四級(jí)的題型包括論說文、說明文、記敘文。醫(yī)鬧怎么說?我們可以翻成“醫(yī)療的一些問題、爭端或者沖突”等等。大家發(fā)現(xiàn)這道題從審題的難度來講基本長沒有什么難度，基本上是初中、小學(xué)詞匯，題干不會(huì)出現(xiàn)什么問題。首先，獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分是卷面的問題，大家都喜歡美的事物。第一是文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。根據(jù)不同文章的要求，不同文章的題材進(jìn)行分析的過程。注意要加上所謂邏輯關(guān)系詞。再說一下句型的文化。寫好本篇作文的關(guān)鍵在于緊跟題目所列提綱：現(xiàn)象——原因——看法和建議，確定相應(yīng)的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)。第二段重點(diǎn)從公司和消費(fèi)者兩方面論述產(chǎn)生過度包裝的原因。re allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by menting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the ’ve done it hundreds of time.”You39。s opinions vary on this believe that on line shopping is time and money plentiful selection options, they can buy whatever they like at any time others insist that mispurchasing alone is annoying enough, not to mention the credibility of the sellers and the safety of their my opinion, the convenience and excitement of on line shopping is beyond all the meantime, we must always bear in mind that certain traps do exist, so we39。下面說一下這篇文章的有待提高之處：，能看得出該同學(xué)試圖采用議論文的“三段式”（提出問題、分析問題、解決問題）。高分版With the help of the ever rapid development of internet technology, online shopping is ing into fashion in most of shopping is weled by most people due to various the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don39。s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws accordance with the rapid growth of online in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being ：本次四級(jí)作文探討的是最近的熱點(diǎn)話題之一——互聯(lián)網(wǎng)網(wǎng)購。按照四級(jí)作文的要求，考生在第一段時(shí)應(yīng)該總述現(xiàn)象并引出話題；第二段考生應(yīng)當(dāng)從正反兩方面來論述網(wǎng)購，分別鋪陳其優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)；關(guān)于優(yōu)點(diǎn)，網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)很多，考生可擇其最突出顯著的方面來闡述，比如說網(wǎng)購可以節(jié)省很多時(shí)間；網(wǎng)購可以節(jié)省很多成本開支等；其次，缺點(diǎn)方面考生可以把重心放在誠信方面；為了不至于跟優(yōu)點(diǎn)相比，缺點(diǎn)方面太輕，考生可以考慮稍微提一下其他缺點(diǎn)，比如說與傳統(tǒng)購物相比，網(wǎng)購少去了很多砍價(jià)的樂趣；第三點(diǎn)要求考生對(duì)于第二段列出的缺點(diǎn)給出自己的建議。一次性塑料袋帶來的問題。s people buy hot food packed into disposable plastic bags for saving time to wash their dining they are not informed of the chemical material the bags release in high , they are also eating the poisonous stuff while enjoying the tasty 39。整體難度較去年來看，難度不大?！舅募?jí)寫作話題思路】 話題1：畢業(yè)后有的學(xué)生會(huì)選擇創(chuàng)業(yè)，在創(chuàng)業(yè)方面面臨的挑戰(zhàn)分為以下三點(diǎn)。話題2：出國留學(xué)面臨的挑戰(zhàn)，可以從以下三方面進(jìn)行闡述。話題3：在大城市生活主要面臨的挑戰(zhàn)，可以從以下三方面進(jìn)行著手。【四級(jí)寫作話題可用句型】 開頭：1With the rapid growth of......, more and more people choose to.......Nowadays, it is monly ○believed that.......will provides them with many opportunities, but I wonder that people who........are facing more the backdrop of an era characterized with opportunities, the living pressures of people ○has been , every individual who.......faces various :1There are numerous challenges of......, and I would explore only three challenges here.○The first challenge is that......The second one is that the......The last one is that......2As far as I am concerned, there are three main challenges of.......○First of all,......In addition,......At last but not least,......結(jié)尾：1Based on the points discussed above, we may reasonably draw the conclusion that there are ○many challenges of......Dealing with the challenges is not different from conquering a great mountain。va done it hundreds of times.” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 I WritingNothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillNothing runs smoothly in our achieve things successfully, a strong will is is like a people can’t get to the is not because they are lack of vitality but because their will of success is not strong take quitting smoking as an example, some regard it as a piece of make up their minds to quit it in the morning, but in the evening they feel that the smell of cigarettes is throats are sore, their mouths are thirsty, and their hands are the painful mental struggle, they tell themselves that “One cigarette is take one, and the next day I will quit it.” By doing this, they surrender to their weak the end, they have quitted smoking “a hundred times”, but in no time they like quitting smoking, nothing succeeds without a strong be successful in one’s life, a strong will means that you know where you go and you will persist on the road you success belongs to those who overe their weak will and who hang in there until the last minute 文章點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于話題類作文，只看題目 “Nothing Succeeds without a strong will”考生會(huì)覺得比較抽象，難以下手?？傮w上來看，文章思路清晰，采用了生動(dòng)的比喻和形象的心理描寫，語言流暢，用語地道。第二段心理描寫過多，雖然流暢生動(dòng)，但卻使這篇考場作文超過了規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù)，反而成為失分點(diǎn)，這一點(diǎn)要引以為戒。第二段作者則進(jìn)一步深入分析該話語，指出做某事在短期看來很容易，長期來看，恰恰相反，人們做事的結(jié)果也因此總是失敗，原因則在最后一句點(diǎn)出：缺乏毅力。honesty.” The key to integrity is consistencynot only setting high personal standards for oneself(honesty, responsibility, respect for others, fairness)but also living up to those standards each who by and follows moral and ethical standards even when making life39。t make responsible identify risks, we need to know the rules and be aware of the example, one who doesn39。m looking at another39。m just checking my answers, not copying.” We must be honest about our actions, and avoid we fool ourselves into believing we39。d rather hide your actions, that39。t considered what might go consequences of getting caught are serious, and may include a “0” on a test or assignment。and a tarnished fact, when you break a rule or law, you lose control over your life, and give others the power to impose punishment: you have no control over what that punishment might is an extremely precarious and vulnerable may be some matters of life and death, or highest principle, which might justify such a risk, but there aren39。t get caught the first time usually cheats again, not only because he/she is farther behind, but also because it seems “easier.” This slippery slope of eroding ethics and bigger risks leads only to , the cheater gets caught, and the later he/she gets caught, the worse the have been dismissed from school because they didn39。 if there is no curve, cheating “poisons” the classroom, and others may feel pressured to join in.(“If I don39。re trying to teac