【正文】 all, it39。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語，為文章增色不少，.如: It39。寫作時(shí)，考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：首先，闡述共享單車的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；其次，列舉共享單車帶來的問題；最后，根據(jù)問題給出個(gè)人建議。（2）開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)生近視原因：（not enough）、做作業(yè)、用電腦等（for a long time）防止近視的方法：，多進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)（eye exercises）（have the good habit of）個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：如：我認(rèn)為，我們應(yīng)該了解保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，盡最大努力保護(hù)我們的眼睛。3．書面表達(dá) 初三的學(xué)習(xí)生活繁忙中有困惑、淚水，也有進(jìn)步、喜悅。t afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement（75%） popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement（25%）spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；（3）文中請(qǐng)勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名、校名和其他真實(shí)信息。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對(duì)者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有層次。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。其次短文中語言得體，句式準(zhǔn)確，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。常 識(shí)歷史悠久，深受喜愛世界杯4年舉行一次好 處男生女生皆可參加利于培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神考生自擬（至少1點(diǎn)）偶 像梅西，有足球天賦夢(mèng) 想考生自擬（至少1點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。構(gòu)思提綱。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。要點(diǎn)： 不重視課外閱讀的原因1. 作業(yè)太多2. 沒有讀書習(xí)慣3. 時(shí)間花在電腦或網(wǎng)絡(luò)上課外閱讀的好處1. 更多地了解世界2. 學(xué)會(huì)如何思考3. 生活更加豐富多彩對(duì)學(xué)?；蛲瑢W(xué)的建議……（至少一點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù): 80個(gè)左右（開頭已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù)）；2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；3. 條理清楚、語句連貫；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。Live Green, Live Better As China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony（追求和諧） between man and nature. But how can we help?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Live Green, Live BetterAs China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony（追求和諧） between man and nature. But how can we help?In recent years,protecting the environment is being more and more important to the whole human beings. It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around middle school students,we can also do a lot of helpful things. For example,we go to school by bike or on can protect environment by not throwing rubbish can save water to make full use of can use materials which do no harm to the can grow more more trees there are,the clearer the sky is,the greener the hills when we have the idea of loving our environment can we make a better place to everyone,let’s take action!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求寫一篇關(guān)于如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號(hào)召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”的文章。重點(diǎn)語句：It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around us保護(hù)環(huán)境是每個(gè)人的職責(zé)，make full use of充分利用， let’s take action!讓我們行動(dòng)起來10．假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護(hù)大象的倡議書。要求：1）恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；2）80詞左右。s contribution （貢獻(xiàn)） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。提出倡議時(shí)可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。