【正文】 no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。8．（100 詞左右。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。9．（要求:。短文應(yīng)由開頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過程；最后一部分簡要描寫一下自己的感受。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，安排合理。10．（,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫信，邀請(qǐng)他來你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游，題目中列出了文章的提綱，審題可知，短文應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置；然后介紹來這里最好的時(shí)候；接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化，并給出建議。如可以使用簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，易于掌握，不容易出錯(cuò)。短文先對(duì)Dave發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點(diǎn)、文化等，并提出了建議。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。要求：1．語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫、通順；2．短文應(yīng)包括所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯；3．詞數(shù)80詞左右；文章開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。注意表達(dá)的順序。北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是中學(xué)生李華，你的美國筆友 Jim 一周前給你發(fā)了電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的旅游計(jì)劃及其他安排， 但由于某種原因你沒有及時(shí)回復(fù)。t reply to your in time because __________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear JimI39。首先應(yīng)注意內(nèi)容的完整，要包含題目中要求的所有要點(diǎn)，題目只是列出了一個(gè)提綱，沒有規(guī)定要學(xué)生寫什么，因此具體的寫作內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生們自己來發(fā)揮，理由要充分、合理，暑假安排要符合日常生活和學(xué)生的身份。使用簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，點(diǎn)綴并列句和復(fù)合句，長短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏感。短文共分三段，第一段介紹了自己沒有及時(shí)回復(fù)郵件的原因，用了一句話簡潔、明了。文章中簡單句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，長短句結(jié)合，句式不單調(diào)，有節(jié)奏感。還有一些較好的句型和短語，如be busy doing sth, promise to do sth., do something meaningful, plan to do learn more knowledge等等。假如你是李明，你們學(xué)校將開展以How to keep healthy，體育鍛煉和好的生活習(xí)慣等方面寫一篇演講稿。不少于70詞。healthygladspeechis How文章時(shí)態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。最后檢查所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求；檢查段落是否完整，句子表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤。14．（參考要點(diǎn)：（打乒乓、包餃子……）2. 安排理由（非常流行、帶來好運(yùn)……）3. …….Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your ing.Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term． Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China，we arrange a pingpong game for the students．They can learn from each other. What’s more，they’ll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner．In our culture，dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck．I think they will enjoy their time here． I’m looking forward to your ing．Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給英國懷特學(xué)校的校長Green 先生寫一封信，介紹他們學(xué)校的學(xué)生來你校參觀時(shí)的活動(dòng)安排以及理由。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。這一段占篇幅最大，里面使用了較豐富的句式，如Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China, we arrange a pingpong game for the students中Since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句；All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner中動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語；In our culture, dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck中使用了not only…but also...句式。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)流感季通常在每年的10月份到3月份爆發(fā)，據(jù)報(bào)道114個(gè)美國孩子在今年2月死于流感。而It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February./ If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu./ Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。16．（A good book that influenced me a lotBoys and girls, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】Boys and girls,As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.From the book, I learned that whenever we e across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books! That’s all. Thank you!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 為題作演講，向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過的好書。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。北京中考模擬）假如你叫李華，最近你班里的美國交換生Lucy想要感受中國的傳統(tǒng)文化。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I want to……，We are going to……，We can……，Let’s meet at……等句式的應(yīng)用。開頭介紹了我想要邀請(qǐng)你去老舍茶館，接下來介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁矗詈笾赋鑫覀円诤螘r(shí)何地見面。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，為校報(bào)寫一篇有關(guān)的報(bào)道。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。此處all kinds of, choose fr