【正文】 分?jǐn)?shù)。內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包括以下幾點：1. 節(jié)約用水、用電；2. 節(jié)約紙張，循環(huán)使用舊課本，保護森林；3. 節(jié)約糧食，在更多的土地上種樹；4. 不亂丟雜物，保護環(huán)境；要求：短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名；80詞左右提示詞：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won39。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。3．書面表達“小手拉大手,同做文明人。；；；；（自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點）參考詞匯: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in 39。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What39。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。3．詞數(shù)：80—100詞。結(jié)合要點提示，可知本文主要從三個方面進行敘述，注意圍繞要點組織材料，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。5． 假如你是李華, 你的美國筆友Bill給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件, 想了解你的夢想職業(yè)。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢想中的職業(yè)，讓學(xué)生對未來有憧憬，給一部分提示詞，讓學(xué)生有話可說。最后向Bill提出問題，結(jié)束全文。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。要點： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？2. How did he/ she inspire you？要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題，介紹一個曾經(jīng)激勵過你的人。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先要符合題目要求，包括題目中要求的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意上下文的銜接。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，主次分明。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。參考詞匯：霧霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 語言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。因此文章應(yīng)主要分成三段，一個內(nèi)容一段?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結(jié)合自身的實際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句，長短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以“弘揚中國傳統(tǒng)文化”為題征文，請你用英文寫一篇報道，介紹你校上周舉辦的“講中國成語故事”活動并談?wù)勀愕氖斋@與感受。：短語：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。注意：；，書寫工整、規(guī)范；。根據(jù)所給要點寫一篇80100詞左右的英語短文，而且要做到表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。并注意上下文要語句貫通。該文中以下幾個句子用