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色彩斑斕的,用心去體會(huì)別人為我們所做的一切,世界也將隨之變得更美好。可以在文章中采用直抒胸臆和寄情于人、附情于事、融情于景等間接抒情方法。真切的感受,來(lái)自人與自然、社會(huì)、生活的交流互動(dòng)。其實(shí),要表達(dá)“真摯”的情感,我們應(yīng)該做到以下幾點(diǎn):一、真摯。山東省煙臺(tái))。重慶市綦江二);讓我久久不能忘懷(2010浙江省杭州);少年不知愁滋味(2010湖北省襄樊一);話題“心境”(2010如果你有巧妙的構(gòu)思、生動(dòng)的語(yǔ)言,真摯的情感,那么你的作文就會(huì)脫穎而出。我們可這樣思考:在過(guò)去的人生路上,你都留下過(guò)什么樣的腳印和痕跡?這些“腳印和痕跡”能給我們的生活、學(xué)習(xí)、工作帶來(lái)哪些啟發(fā)?對(duì)自己有何警示、意義?在將來(lái)的人生路上,我們還應(yīng)該留下什么樣的痕跡?怎么留下讓自己最滿意的痕跡?別人的腳印和痕跡對(duì)自己有何影響?充分展開(kāi)聯(lián)想,深挖寫作素材,選取最難忘、最能表現(xiàn)主題的細(xì)節(jié)行文。痕跡從詞性詞義的角度來(lái)考慮,“痕跡”是“某物經(jīng)過(guò)的可覺(jué)察的形跡”,可引申為每天平淡的生活的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴。文中不得出現(xiàn)正式的人名、校名、地名。在文章的關(guān)鍵部分,如開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾等地,要有意識(shí)地使用恰當(dāng)?shù)男揶o方法,或者活用新鮮的“時(shí)尚語(yǔ)言”,鮮活地去記敘生活,去表達(dá)情感。又說(shuō)“動(dòng)人心者,莫先乎情”,只有真情實(shí)感才能打動(dòng)讀者的心。要選擇自己最熟悉的,最有話可講的材料來(lái)寫,這樣才能寫出真情實(shí)感來(lái)。無(wú)論寫議論文還是記敘文,穩(wěn)中求新、穩(wěn)中出奇的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)是把“鑰匙”這個(gè)詞做相應(yīng)的轉(zhuǎn)化,可以是針對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)困難,可以是針對(duì)做事受挫,可以是針對(duì)封閉之門,可以是針對(duì)心靈之鎖,可以是針對(duì)心理障礙……這樣,就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),可寫的內(nèi)容相當(dāng)?shù)呢S富。(2)字?jǐn)?shù)不少于600字。這把鑰匙,總是閃爍著耀眼的光環(huán)。三、閱讀下面文字,按要求作文?!苯杈笆闱椋A主題?!钡降貙懥舜禾斓膸追N代表性事物,也點(diǎn)出了春天的象征意義,比喻和排比并駕齊驅(qū),文采出眾,讀來(lái)既富有詩(shī)意,又具有氣勢(shì)。描寫使畫面生動(dòng)形象,細(xì)節(jié)使畫面真實(shí)可感。柳條上爆出一個(gè)個(gè)嫩芽,綻出勃勃生機(jī),仿佛有無(wú)數(shù)的生命在枝頭律動(dòng)。【寫作導(dǎo)引】,注重感受。”可讓文章呈現(xiàn)出美感,可讓情感呈現(xiàn)出波瀾?!薄案赣H是一本書,一本?濕潤(rùn)?的書。四、圍繞補(bǔ)題,美化語(yǔ)言。,熟悉為先。本題作文,字?jǐn)?shù)要求不少于500字,要在如此短的篇幅中,寫深寫透一個(gè)主題,誠(chéng)非易事?!緦懽鲗?dǎo)引】,靈活補(bǔ)題。(2)請(qǐng)大膽選擇你最能駕馭的文體,用你喜歡的表達(dá)方式寫作?!笆澜缟蠜](méi)有兩片相同的樹(shù)葉,也沒(méi)有兩片不同的樹(shù)葉”。暢游好山好水,猶如欣賞一部傳世名著。由感而悟、由情而理地深入到歷史精神的深處,沉潛到思想的湖底,透視歷史更深刻的真實(shí)。多從創(chuàng)新意識(shí)、深度意識(shí)兩個(gè)標(biāo)桿來(lái)衡量自己習(xí)作的優(yōu)劣,這不失為培養(yǎng)創(chuàng)新思維的一種很好的方法。三、自覺(jué)養(yǎng)成創(chuàng)新精神與深度意識(shí)。例如根據(jù)音響聯(lián)想中來(lái)寫故事,在播放各種音響中進(jìn)行聯(lián)想,進(jìn)行寫作??稍谧x懂課文的基礎(chǔ)上,展開(kāi)合理想像,對(duì)課文內(nèi)容進(jìn)行加工,變換角度,將其進(jìn)行延伸,練習(xí)形式有加寫、補(bǔ)寫、擴(kuò)寫、續(xù)寫、改寫等。一、讀寫結(jié)合,從仿到創(chuàng)?!飳懽鱾淇挤铰浴锵胂窈蛣?chuàng)新,是寫好作文的兩個(gè)重要方法,也是當(dāng)前語(yǔ)文教學(xué)改革的主要趨勢(shì)。湖南長(zhǎng)沙一);那天,我揀到了快樂(lè)的鑰匙(2010四川內(nèi)江一);拾起心中的珍珠(2010,成就佳作。那么,應(yīng)怎樣選材呢?前提還是要注意選擇相關(guān)聯(lián)的兩方面的內(nèi)容。本命題在選材上給了考生很大的寫作空間,但同時(shí)也限制了文章所寫的兩個(gè)方面必須是相關(guān)聯(lián)的,內(nèi)容上應(yīng)兼顧兩個(gè)方面,可以有所側(cè)重,但不可只寫一方,否則會(huì)有偏題之嫌。我們每一個(gè)人都像百合一樣,內(nèi)心深處都渴望人生的價(jià)值能夠得以體現(xiàn),渴望活出不一樣的風(fēng)采,但是我們究竟以什么方式來(lái)實(shí)現(xiàn)自身的價(jià)值,展示自己的風(fēng)采呢?我想只有開(kāi)花!通過(guò)開(kāi)花來(lái)證明自己!也就是成長(zhǎng),不斷地發(fā)展自己,提高自己!三、題目:與要求:(1)先將題目補(bǔ)充完整,再寫作。“我有美麗的花”,多么美妙的夢(mèng)想呀!對(duì)于一朵花而言,還有什么比開(kāi)出美麗的花更使人神往呢?花的美麗就在于花朵的綻放,而相信自己有美麗的花朵,就能夠不斷地戰(zhàn)勝各種挫折,專注地付出努力,實(shí)現(xiàn)心中的夢(mèng)?!緦懽鲗?dǎo)引】——“我要開(kāi)花,是因?yàn)槲抑雷约河忻利惖幕?。擬題示例:《人生剪枝》《為青春剪枝》《為心靈修枝剪蔓》《給成長(zhǎng)之樹(shù)剪枝》二、閱讀下面文字,按要求作文。擬題示例:《削枝為了強(qiáng)干》《學(xué)會(huì)剪枝》《該出手就出手》角度七:“傻孩子”,傻在哪里?傻在只看到一根一根的枝條,忘了它們與整體的聯(lián)系;只看到它們眼前的長(zhǎng)勢(shì),忘了它們最能影響的結(jié)果。擬題示例:《誰(shuí)來(lái)“剪枝”》《給欲望剪枝》《批評(píng)如同剪枝》角度五:小孩子痛惜,爺爺為什么不痛惜?看眼前,果樹(shù)枝條茂盛,長(zhǎng)勢(shì)好;看發(fā)展,剪掉枝條,會(huì)使果實(shí)豐碩,所以爺爺毫不吝嗇。人的時(shí)間和精力是有限的,若想在某一方面取得成就,是否也應(yīng)該如果樹(shù)一樣,剪剪“枝條”呢。我們每個(gè)人生活在世上,由于種種原因的影響,不可能完美得沒(méi)有絲毫毛病,不可能不受到病毒的侵襲,不可能沒(méi)有失誤,不可能沒(méi)有留下遺憾。舍棄曾經(jīng)覺(jué)得是最最重要的部分,卻換來(lái)了別樣的、更為深刻的幸福。擬題示例:《剪枝的學(xué)問(wèn)》《成長(zhǎng)需要大剪刀》《“剪”出的成功》角度二:為什么要剪掉?手中沉實(shí)的剪子,是為果樹(shù)們修理的花剪。做人也一樣,老師的批評(píng),父母的訓(xùn)斥就如那把剪刀,剪去我們的種種錯(cuò)誤?!緦懽鲗?dǎo)引】角度一:剪掉好,還是不剪掉好?只有懂得選擇的人才會(huì)終身受益。光怪陸離的社會(huì)處處都展現(xiàn)著哲理。所以自然中也有著豐富的哲理,需要我們?nèi)ネ诰颉⑷ヌ嵘?。所以我們必須要有點(diǎn)歷史知識(shí),尤其是文化史的知識(shí)。哲理思辨類散文天生與文化密切相連,文化孕育著哲思,展現(xiàn)著哲思?!飳懽鱾淇挤铰浴镄抡n程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)對(duì)初中生寫作的要求是:“要感情真摯,力求表達(dá)自己對(duì)自然、社會(huì)、人生的獨(dú)特感受和真切體驗(yàn)。浙江省溫州);不會(huì)變化的是__________(2010江蘇蘇州);不能沒(méi)有你(2010s must obey the example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across ’t play football on the can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球。面對(duì)這些,我們應(yīng)該心存感恩,感謝祖國(guó)對(duì)我們的厚望和期盼。對(duì)老師心存感恩,因?yàn)樗麄兘o了我教誨,讓我拋卻愚昧。作為他的好朋友,你打算怎么幫他呢?提示詞:give up concentrate on be(bee)interested in【范文】Li Hua spent too much time playing puter games and he fell behind a good friend of his, I must do something to help , I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons should spend most of his time on his study instead of puter , I must tell him that playing puter games too much is bad for his health, especially for his he must give it can play more sports with him after he will bee more interested in sports than puter then I39。信息提示:健康飲食。請(qǐng)你給大家講一個(gè)最值得你回憶的故事。提示詞:智能手機(jī) smart phone, 二維碼 the QR code范文:Dear Jim,I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bikemobike mentioned in your latest ’s very convenient to use if you have a smart you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park is being a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as to ride a mobike with you in , Li Hua四、現(xiàn)在全世界都在倡導(dǎo)“低碳生活”(lowcarbon life),即:降低二氧化碳的排放,采取低能量、低消耗、低開(kāi)支的生活方式。范文Leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help to others devoted all this life into his beloved career as , myself, was totally shocked by his is human nature。你的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷一定積累了許多成功的經(jīng)驗(yàn),從聽(tīng)、說(shuō)、讀、寫談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh。怎樣學(xué)好英語(yǔ)是我們一直在探索的問(wèn)題?!焙?jiǎn)單表述你對(duì)雷鋒的崇敬之情,為什么向雷鋒叔叔學(xué)習(xí)以及你在日常生活中是如何幫助他人的。請(qǐng)你給Jim回信,內(nèi)容包括: (如:APP查看車輛、掃碼開(kāi)鎖等)。提示詞語(yǔ):be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse范文Lowcarbon life is good for help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a , I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the think it’s my duty to live a lowcarbon even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the I suggest we should reuse books as long as we’d better not spend much money on expensive everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better 、初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了,三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)當(dāng)是怎樣的呢?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文,首句已給出。范文I think healthy habits are very important for of us want to be , we should get enough sleep during the can go to bed early and get up up late is bad for our , we must have the right kinds of should eat more fruit and vegetables and less should drink a lot of should have healthy eating , we should do more exercise to build up our , we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at 、李華沉迷于電腦游戲中,影響了學(xué)習(xí)。m sure he will make great progress 、對(duì)父母心存感恩,因?yàn)樗麄兘o予我生命,讓我健康成長(zhǎng)。自從國(guó)家實(shí)施義務(wù)教育以來(lái),書本免費(fèi),食宿免費(fèi),而且還有貧困助學(xué)金等。作為中學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢?請(qǐng)寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文(80字左右)內(nèi)容包含:遵守交通規(guī)則,如走人行道/過(guò)斑馬線。參考詞匯:sidewalk 人行道 zebracrossing 斑馬線【范文】With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic safety is everybody39。四川眉山二);他也很重要(2