【正文】 task to do everythingpossible to protect our ecological environment and to keep nature in good （2012高考題）春節(jié)是中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。1．污染現(xiàn)已成為全球問題。為了保證人們的身體健康，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)改掉吸煙的壞習(xí)慣。由于吸煙，一些人一直在咳嗽。許多男孩和女孩都有吸煙的習(xí)慣，盡管他們還是中學(xué)生。整潔文章寫好后，應(yīng)認(rèn)真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤，謄寫應(yīng)盡可能書寫工整，布局美觀。常識(shí)性。格式。t know what to do and how to do it.（正）另外，考試是根據(jù)內(nèi)容和表達(dá)給分的，要點(diǎn)齊全，是直接因素。如：1）He studies very hard and kind.（錯(cuò)）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）2）He doesn39。簡明扼要，表達(dá)清楚，是關(guān)鍵所在。如：1）Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（錯(cuò)）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）2）Wele you e back to our school to visit.（錯(cuò)）→You’re wele back to visit our school.（正）另外，不重視掌握單詞，寫作時(shí)碰到生詞難句就委婉地去解釋，用模糊定義，語言生澀難懂，文意混亂，表達(dá)不清。39。（4）語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遺漏處加be）2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遺漏處加are）（3）時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。m afraid, I think等表示過度及連接的詞匯，使之有較強(qiáng)的感情色彩。為此，應(yīng)注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what39。用順審準(zhǔn)題義，明確情景，看清要求。現(xiàn)在，不少學(xué)生對英語書面表達(dá)不予或不夠重視。學(xué)生作文主要從內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、語言使用效果、結(jié)構(gòu)和連貫性、格式和語域及與目標(biāo)讀者的交流五個(gè)方面進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)?？忌峡释丫玫那迦A大學(xué)。2．每天埋頭讀書，復(fù)習(xí)每門必修課，做許多練習(xí)。如果能得到這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)將十分感謝。專業(yè)：經(jīng)濟(jì)管理（business management）。1（1分）張紅從廣告上得知某公司需要一名秘書。有的家還有了摩托車和小汽車。假設(shè)你現(xiàn)在的住址是北京西城區(qū)云梯胡同1號(hào)樓4門2號(hào)。參考詞匯：投資：invest經(jīng)濟(jì)開發(fā)區(qū)：an economiczone港口：port1（1分）11月11日，你將在家里為你的妹妹15周歲開一個(gè)生日晚會(huì)，寫信給你的外國朋友Peter，邀請他來參加。港口與國內(nèi)外許多城市連接。1．A城是一新開發(fā)的經(jīng)濟(jì)特區(qū)。他的一些作品還被選入了中學(xué)和大學(xué)課本。魏明回信介紹魯迅：1．魯迅是著名的中國作家。學(xué)生除正式課程外，還有許多選修課，如：油畫、打字、烹調(diào)等。1．聽說你明年來我校學(xué)習(xí)，我們很高興。你用英語給老師寫一個(gè)請假條。2．1790年，為慶祝乾隆80歲生日，他召集各地方劇團(tuán)來京為他演出，4個(gè)來自安徽的劇團(tuán)在慶典后留在北京。綜觀2009年高考英語短文寫作試題，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)最重要的一個(gè)特點(diǎn)就是關(guān)于地方或傳統(tǒng)特色話題，也就是母語文化輸出類話題增多（5篇），以前只是在某個(gè)年份、某個(gè)卷種中有這種話題的點(diǎn)綴，現(xiàn)在看來已經(jīng)蔚成風(fēng)氣。但對于上?？忌?，材料的提供是否過于豐富了些？！參看一下惜墨如金的歷年上海卷，你就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)上海卷習(xí)慣于提供簡練的題干信息，以利于考生的發(fā)揮。適度增加情節(jié)【專家簡評(píng)】 上海卷的一貫特點(diǎn)有以下幾條：題干短，話題一般與學(xué)習(xí)或?qū)W校生活相關(guān)，寫作形式主要是議論性質(zhì)，間或插以混合性質(zhì)，給考生的思維空間大。For another，after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners e to visit our country。For one thing，I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。假如你是王躍華（不可以用自己的真實(shí)姓名），寫一封申請信，報(bào)名參加其中一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)。六年來，三次短文寫作，三次郵件（其中兩次電子郵件）。上下文的過渡。we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a I can say we live in a grateful hope that the activity will be a great success.【解析】這是一篇命題巧妙地書寫體半開發(fā)性提綱式作文。十七、（）國外某網(wǎng)站舉辦新一輪網(wǎng)上討論活動(dòng)，正面向全球中學(xué)生征集話題。09年不在題中給出標(biāo)題，卻在文中直接給出標(biāo)題，不知何意？不知這個(gè)對于檢測考生的實(shí)際能力有何幫助？另外，雖然說的是新聞報(bào)道，但實(shí)際上是一個(gè)典型的敘事性質(zhì)的短文寫作。目的只有一個(gè)：避免考生出錯(cuò)。Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly s5【參考范文】Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the ElderlyOn May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly weled, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and , they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it Yue and Zhang Hua were very they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own Chen Jie, School Newspaper【解析】本文仍屬于提綱式半開放性體裁的作文，選材貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際，有利于考生的正常發(fā)揮，考生只要按照所給要點(diǎn)的思路來寫即可。十六、（）5月1日，高二（3）班的學(xué)生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去陽光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）開展志愿者活動(dòng)（）。通常，命題以要點(diǎn)形式給出和以漢語題干形式給出，對考生而言，前者的難度要大于后者。第二步：寫作可以先在草紙上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、單詞、短語去表達(dá)，要嘗試最簡單的復(fù)雜句，如用定語從句、賓語從句等，但句式不易過于復(fù)雜，要用一些恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句與句之間、段與段之間過渡自然。第一步：審題看要求：本題要求以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。，從總分中減去2分。社區(qū)委員會(huì)請你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。Dear Mr Li, I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to am now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreaming Li, I still remember the days when you taught me English has been improved greatly because of your creative , at one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to for your encouragement。請你根據(jù)以下提示，給你中學(xué)的英語老師李老師寫一封感謝信，表達(dá)對他的愛戴和尊敬。I must thank you again for your generous help.【例句二】我的感激之情超出了文字的描述。I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for your timely help.【例句三】對你的好客表示誠摯的謝意。s Go in for Sports”(讓我 們參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng))的結(jié)尾：As we have said above, sports can be of great not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work sound mind is in a sound 39。如 “Should We Learn to Do Housework?”(我們要不要學(xué)做家務(wù)?)的結(jié)尾。如“I Cannot Forget Her”(我忘不了她)的結(jié)尾：After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my was sad over her passing away, but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the ． 重復(fù)主題句結(jié)尾回到文章開頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上，達(dá)到強(qiáng)調(diào)的效果。如“An Accident”(一場事故)的開 頭是:It was a rainy and windy sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly was on my way back to , a speeding car came round the ．交待寫作目的的開頭。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎樣 度假)的開頭是：I Spent my last vacation happily．下面是題為“Honesty”(談?wù)\實(shí))一文中的開頭：Honesty is one of the best virtues．An honest man is always trusted and respected．On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a “l(fā)iar”，and is looked upon by honest people． 2．交代人物、事情、時(shí)間或環(huán)境開頭在文章的開頭，先把人物、事件和環(huán)境交待清楚。第一篇：高考英語書面表達(dá)的開頭和結(jié)尾2英語書面表達(dá)的開頭和結(jié)尾一篇文章通?？煞譃槿齻€(gè)部分，即開頭、正文和結(jié)尾。英語書面表達(dá)常見的開頭形式大致有以下幾種： 1．開門見山，揭示主題文章一開頭，就交待清楚文章的主題是什么。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(讀書的快樂)的開頭：People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us ．介紹環(huán)境式