【正文】 網(wǎng)][來源:Z。要點(diǎn)：李華病了，感覺不舒服，頭痛，疲勞，不想吃東西。畢竟，我們要成長。3．希望人們都能采取有效辦法，控制污染，凈化環(huán)境，保護(hù)生態(tài)平衡。除此而外，粗心的煙民還可能引起火災(zāi)。第五篇：高考書面表達(dá)書面表達(dá)范文例文一：據(jù)說，中國有一半人在吸煙。這是全文要點(diǎn)集中之處，應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料含義，理清大意，將所有要點(diǎn)逐一落實(shí)，并檢查有無遺漏。39。如：1）Our friends are all over the world.（錯(cuò)）→We have friends all over the world.（正）2）My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.（錯(cuò)）→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.（正）語言轉(zhuǎn)換功在平時(shí)。如：3）I am think that I’ll learn how to use a puter.（劃線處去掉am）4）They are decide that they will study harder.（劃線處去掉are）1）He wrote an 800words article yesterday.（劃線處改為800word）2）It is a tenminutes walk from here to there.（劃線處改為tenminute或ten minutes39。1）There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.（劃線部分改為Five hundred）2）A hero es from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.（劃線部分改為ing或去掉es）（2）缺失。因此應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料，找到所要表達(dá)的主旨文意及線索，在線索引導(dǎo)下通暢地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，增加可讀性。要答卷滿意，平時(shí)確實(shí)需要長期的信心的培養(yǎng)，耐心的啟發(fā)，由易到難，從簡單到復(fù)雜，循序漸進(jìn)地堅(jiān)持內(nèi)容、語言、語法、表達(dá)、結(jié)構(gòu)、邏輯和卷面等進(jìn)行規(guī)范地訓(xùn)練，而且訓(xùn)練有素。4．多希望沒有考試，但又不可能，要盡力取得好成績。主要是本人喜歡辦公室工作，相信能勝任秘書工作。5．你的名字小海。在信的開頭告訴Peter你已收到他10月25日的來信，但由于最近一直忙于期中考試未能及時(shí)回信。3．改革開放以來，許多外商到這里投資，經(jīng)濟(jì)增長很快，建立了許多大工廠、一個(gè)大港口。毛主席對(duì)他有高度評(píng)價(jià)。4．學(xué)校設(shè)備優(yōu)良，有體育館、計(jì)算機(jī)室和大圖書館等。參考詞匯：地方劇：local opera乾隆年間：the reign of Qianlong表演：perform劇團(tuán)：troupe1（1分）你昨天去游泳患了感冒，今天早上頭痛，醫(yī)生讓你休息兩天。海卷共享全國卷I的短文寫作題）。，結(jié)合現(xiàn)實(shí)，理由合情合理。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature。不過，09年的話題是涉外的話題征集，有些特點(diǎn)。內(nèi)容包括： 自我簡介 寫信目錄話題：我們應(yīng)該感恩（thankful）推薦的理由 預(yù)?；顒?dòng)成功 注意： 【參考范文】Dear____, I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle often visit your am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the middle school a student, I really want to remend a topic to you is that we should be in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful should be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world。例如：“Film or book, which do you prefer?”（06），請你圍繞“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”這個(gè)問題…（07），“Working Individually or Working in a Team”（08）。注意：報(bào)道的標(biāo)題和記者姓名已給出（不記詞數(shù)）?！緦＜液喸u(píng)】主題與考生學(xué)習(xí)生活或?qū)W校活動(dòng)無關(guān)，但由于是以涉外小區(qū)為背景所開展的社區(qū)活動(dòng)，主題空間更為開闊，因此該主題大體符合高考英語寫作話題的一般思路，可以歸類為外事活動(dòng)。給出要點(diǎn)學(xué)生有話可說。，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。信的開頭已經(jīng)寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。What you did gave us a deep impression and we hope to express our thanks to you for the wonderful days we spent with ：【例句一】對(duì)你的慷慨的幫助，我必須再次表示感謝。如“Let39。文章結(jié)尾的形式也是多種多樣的，常見的有以下幾種：1． 首尾呼應(yīng)，畫龍點(diǎn)睛在文章的結(jié)尾，把含義較深的話放在末尾，以點(diǎn)明主題，深化主題，起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的效 果。英語書面表達(dá)常見的開頭形式大致有以下幾種： 1．開門見山，揭示主題文章一開頭，就交待清楚文章的主題是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎樣 度假)的開頭是：I Spent my last vacation happily．下面是題為“Honesty”(談?wù)\實(shí))一文中的開頭：Honesty is one of the best virtues．An honest man is always trusted and respected．On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a “l(fā)iar”，and is looked upon by honest people． 2．交代人物、事情、時(shí)間或環(huán)境開頭在文章的開頭，先把人物、事件和環(huán)境交待清楚。如“I Cannot Forget Her”(我忘不了她)的結(jié)尾：After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my was sad over her passing away, but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the ． 重復(fù)主題句結(jié)尾回到文章開頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上，達(dá)到強(qiáng)調(diào)的效果。s Go in for Sports”(讓我 們參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng))的結(jié)尾：As we have said above, sports can be of great not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work sound mind is in a sound 39。I must thank you again for your generous help.【例句二】我的感激之情超出了文字的描述。Dear Mr Li, I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to am now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreaming Li, I still remember the days when you taught me English has been improved greatly because of your creative , at one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to for your encouragement。，從總分中減去2分。第一步：審題看要求：本題要求以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。通常，命題以要點(diǎn)形式給出和以漢語題干形式給出，對(duì)考生而言，前者的難度要大于后者。Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly s5【參考范文】Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the ElderlyOn May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly weled, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and , they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it Yue and Zhang Hua were very they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own Chen Jie, School Newspaper【解析】本文仍屬于提綱式半開放性體裁的作文，選材貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際，有利于考生的正常發(fā)揮，考生只要按照所給要點(diǎn)的思路來寫即可。09年不在題中給出標(biāo)題，卻在文中直接給出標(biāo)題，不知何意？不知這個(gè)對(duì)于檢測考生的實(shí)際能力有何幫助？另外，雖然說的是新聞報(bào)道，但實(shí)際上是一個(gè)典型的敘事性質(zhì)的短文寫作。we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a I can say we live in a grateful hope that the activity will be a great success.【解析】這是一篇命題巧妙地書寫體半開發(fā)性提綱式作文。六年來，三次短文寫作，三次郵件（其中兩次電子郵件）。For one thing，I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。適度增加情節(jié)【專家簡評(píng)】 上海卷的一貫特點(diǎn)有以下幾條：題干短，話題一般與學(xué)習(xí)或?qū)W校生活相關(guān)，寫作形式主要是議論性質(zhì)，間或插以混合性質(zhì)，給考生的思維空間大。綜觀2009年高考英語短文寫作試題，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)最重要的一個(gè)特點(diǎn)就是關(guān)于地方或傳統(tǒng)特色話題，也就是母語文化輸出類話題增多（5篇），以前只是在某個(gè)年份、某個(gè)卷種中有這種話題的點(diǎn)綴，現(xiàn)在看來已經(jīng)蔚成風(fēng)氣。你用英語給老師寫一個(gè)請假條。學(xué)生除正式課程外，還有許多選修課，如：油畫、打字、烹調(diào)等。他的一些作品還被選入了中學(xué)和大學(xué)課本。港口與國內(nèi)外許多城市連接。假設(shè)你現(xiàn)在的住址是北京西城區(qū)云梯胡同1號(hào)樓4門2號(hào)。1（1分）張紅從廣告上得知某公司需要一名秘書。如果能得到這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)將十分感謝?？忌峡释丫玫那迦A大學(xué)?，F(xiàn)在，不少學(xué)生對(duì)英語書面表達(dá)不予或不夠重視。為此，應(yīng)注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what39。1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遺漏處加be）2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遺漏