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site facet. We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語 Fruits (而且 fruits 用的非常形象, merits/ virtues) 替換 advantage ( defects 替換 disadvantage ) Every coin has two sides important / good 等 a part of bad effects / influences aspect 各位同學(xué),上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點(diǎn), 作文怎么會(huì)不得高分呢! ,characters, folks代 (people ,persons) 2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的 ), promising (有希望的 ), perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替 good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的 )代替bad 如果 bad做表語,可以有 be less impressive代替 army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替 many. 注:用 many, if not most 一定要小心, many后一定要有詞。s attention代替 attract one39。 ask what you can do for your country. 7:affair ,business ,matter 代替 thing 8: shared 代 mon huge fruits 代替 get much benefit ) 10:for my part ,from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion 11: