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managed to find a parttime job——tutor an orphan.過于絕對化1. For example, almost everybody had watched apples falling from an apple tree but only Newton discovered the Law of Gravity.2. With the development of modern transportation, you can get to any place by plane, by car, by ship, or by bicycle.3. In return, I can also learn a lot from foreign countries so that I can serve my motherland.4. But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find it of no quality and worth nothing.5. In a word, firecrackers should be banned for the benefit of all people!6. Man has been able to cure the diseases which were incapable of being cured.7. With the rapid development of our society, the campus is no longer an ivory tower.邏輯不夠嚴(yán)密1. Though it gives us more convenience, the twoday weekend has quite a few problems.2. Of course, some people have had good luck through “l(fā)ucky numbers”, but I think that that is only a chance.主謂一致1. But now large amounts of water and air has been polluted, which brings about various problems troubling man’s life.2. My ideal job is a teacher.重復(fù)1. Man is faced with more and more problems which threaten man’s existence on Earth.2. People’s opinions about whether firecrackers should be banned vary from person to person.3. During the past thirty years, developing countries have been greatly developed in many aspects.1. We may encounter some problems which need not only natural science but also social science.2. What on earth is the role money playing in our society?3. When I refresh, I will do something which I like.C. 倒裝句1. Only in this way, you can get the true job of achieving your goals.D. 句子的連接與簡練句子的連接a) Second, whoever breaks the regulation should be fined or punished. Then everyone will ply with this regulation.b) The result is that your brain is less and less efficient, your process is slower and slower.c) Community services as well as mass media are both golden chances to practice our ability, through which we can learn to cooperate with people, to contribute our intelligence to the society.d) But in fact, there are also many people who think numbers have nothing to do with luck.指代不明a) Sports and movies are means of relieving depression and violent emotions. This is why they are necessary in a society.b) Leaders of the Women’s Liberation movement have criticized American doctors severely. They are angry – and justifiably so.c) In the Royal Shakespeare production of Othello,