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【正文】 in industrialized countries was much greater at years in 1980, pared to years in developing countries. ? than句型 也可以 。 第二段 In Great Britain the numbers in prison have increased steadily from 30,000 in 1930 to 80,000 in 1980. ? 說(shuō)明英國(guó)的情況，上升趨勢(shì) On the other hand in Australia, and particularly in New Zealand, the numbers fell markedly from 1930 to 1940. Since then they have increased gradually, apart from in 1980 when the numbers in prison in New Zealand fell by about 30,000 from the 1970 total. ? on the other hand 引出了澳大利亞和新西蘭的情況， 因?yàn)閮烧叩淖兓闆r類似，均是先降后升再降 ? 表示時(shí)間的表達(dá)： from 1930 to 1940, since then, in 1980, from the 1970 total ? 表示升降關(guān)系的表達(dá)： fall markedly, increase gradually ? 注意將一個(gè)變化階段用介詞短語(yǔ)的形式表達(dá)，如 apart from in 1980 when… 這樣就能夠?qū)⒕渥颖磉_(dá)復(fù)雜 Canada is the only in which the numbers in prison have decreased over the period 1930 to 1980, although there have been fluctuations in this trend. ? 說(shuō)明加拿大的情況，整體上是下降，注意對(duì)有波動(dòng)的表達(dá) although there have been fluctuations in this trend. The figures for the United States indicate the greatest number of prisoners pared to the other four countries but population size needs to be taken into account in this analysis. ? 說(shuō)明了美國(guó)犯罪率高位波動(dòng)的情形，注意 pared to the other countries 修飾的是 the United States ? but population size needs to be taken into account in this analysis 作者還做了一點(diǎn)小小的發(fā)揮 The prison population in the United States increased rapidly from 1970 to 1980 and this must be worrying trend. ? 美國(guó)的變化也是波動(dòng)，但是作者只是談到了 19701980的情況 詞匯句型積累 澳大利亞和新西蘭的變化趨勢(shì)的描述是一個(gè)典型的波動(dòng)詳細(xì)描述，波動(dòng)描述主要涉及到時(shí)間、趨勢(shì)和數(shù)量三個(gè)基本要素，而且需要注意的是，需要將某些波動(dòng)歸納在一起，形成一個(gè)復(fù)雜句，否則句子將顯得過(guò)于瑣碎。 1970年至 1975年一直是緩慢的下降，從平均每周 300克降至 280克；之后，從 1975年至 1985年，下降速度稍有加快，從 280克降至 200克；自此，開(kāi)始逐漸回升，到 1990年攀升到了 240克。接下來(lái)，我們看到的是更強(qiáng)勢(shì)的增長(zhǎng)，到 1990年達(dá)到了圖表上的最高峰 550克。 As we can see from the chart, the weekly expenses of people of different ine levels on hamburgers and fish and chips were relatively higher than that on pizza. The graph indicates that while hamburger and pizza consumption both revealed a general trend of increase, fish and chips showed a trend of fluctuation. 首先，高收入階層和中等收入階層每周在漢堡上的平均消費(fèi)分別是每人 42便士和 33便士， 比低收入階層的 14便士搞出了很多。 ? 這句是典型的表示順序關(guān)系的表達(dá)， hamburgers, followed by fish and chips, then pizza, 其表達(dá)句型為 A, followed by B, then C，這種表達(dá)尤其在餅圖中應(yīng)用尤為廣泛 Low ine earners appear to spend less than other ine groups on fast foods, though fish and chips remains their most popular fast food, followed by hamburgers and then pizza. ? 說(shuō)明了低收入人群的兩個(gè)特征， 第一 是該人群消耗的快餐數(shù)量最少，通過(guò) though這個(gè)從句說(shuō)明了 第二個(gè)特征 ，那就是該人群消耗三類食品的情形。柱狀圖 C1T3 題目 The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report a university lecturer describing the information shown below. The chart shows that high ine earners consumed considerably more fast foods than the other ine groups, spending more than twice as much on hamburgers (43 pence per person per week) than on fish and chips or pizza (both under 20 pence). Average ine earners also favored hamburgers, spending 33 pence per person per week, followed by fish and chips at 24 pence, then pizza at 11 pence. Low ine earners appear to spend less than other ine groups on fast foods, though fish and chip remains their most popular fast food, followed by hamburgers and then pizza. From the graph we can see that in 1970, fish and chips were twice as popular as burgers, pizza being at that time the least popular fast food. The consumption of hamburgers and pizza has risen steadily over the 20 year period to 1990 while the consumption of fish and chips has been in decline over that same period with a slight increase in popularity since 1985. 分析 ： 題目 The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. 兩句話，兩個(gè)圖 第一段 The cha
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