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命題作文首先要做到恰當(dāng)補(bǔ)題。最后把泡好的槐花撒到面上,再放到蒸鍋上。滿滿一籃子了,外婆就顫悠悠地走向廚房。 童年時(shí),每次敲開外婆家的大門,總會(huì)看到外婆坐在一棵高大的槐花樹下帶著老花鏡納鞋底。那時(shí)候,每年我都會(huì)在舅舅家住上一段時(shí)間,但是隨著外婆去世,我越來越害怕去他們家。這些美好的記憶伴隨著我們的成長(zhǎng),流淌在我們的血液中,成為一種精神、一種信念。因?yàn)橹挥袑懽约菏煜さ娜撕褪?,才能有話可說、有情可抒、有感可發(fā)。填充的內(nèi)容就是文章的中心所在,是關(guān)鍵。我不敢撩擾這一份歲月的無(wú)聲與滄桑,但我想,今天與明天之間,也許也只隔著一扇門,我們都站在歲月的門口徘徊,追憶著那些過往的事與過往的人?!卑譀]吱聲,摸了摸那扇小木門,轉(zhuǎn)身便走了。村里的人勸爸爸把屋拆了,我沒肯,當(dāng)然,爸爸也執(zhí)意沒有答應(yīng)。但我偶爾也會(huì)聽到奶奶一個(gè)人埋怨,埋怨那個(gè)糟老頭子去得太早。但稍稍懂事的我想,這老屋的門,承載了太多太多。不經(jīng)意中,爺爺便沒了。他喜歡坐在門口,一口又一口優(yōu)哉游哉地抽著自卷的旱煙。閱讀下面提示,按要求作文。不僅是拿起長(zhǎng)笛,吹奏著。濕潤(rùn)的泥土里,嫩綠的小芽長(zhǎng)出來,那是他們最好的未來。 “每個(gè)夢(mèng)想,都值得灌溉……”熟悉的旋律再次響起。這首歌,喚起我堅(jiān)定不移的信念。我看見了奔騰的黃河,心里頓時(shí)熱血沸騰。此時(shí),我和班里的同學(xué)們,站在后臺(tái),滿懷激動(dòng),期待演出的那一刻。至于寫作素材,這個(gè)只能建議考生挖掘自己的生活體驗(yàn),尋找那些能打動(dòng)自己的材料,盡力去打動(dòng)閱卷老師為好。結(jié)合材料及題目,本題目意在學(xué)生感悟成長(zhǎng),思考人生,懂得感恩。本題以“提示語(yǔ)+命題”的形式出現(xiàn),通過導(dǎo)語(yǔ)或提示語(yǔ),為考生在審題和選材上作出了一定的引導(dǎo),同樣有較大的開放性和自由度。我永遠(yuǎn)愛您,敬您,母親!【解析】【詳解】此題考核根據(jù)要求寫作的能力,以命題作文的方式呈現(xiàn)。說真的,有時(shí)候我真的懷疑我是不是親媽生的,可是看到她里里外外為家庭付出的辛勞,我也知道我的懷疑也只能當(dāng)個(gè)笑話說說!日子一日一日的流淌,我一日一日的長(zhǎng)高長(zhǎng)壯,她卻在一天一天的變老變?nèi)?。她并不美麗,沒有多高的文化,工作也很普通。兒時(shí)的記憶滿滿的都是她。在本學(xué)期的“走進(jìn)他(她),發(fā)現(xiàn)他(她)”的訪談寫作活動(dòng)過程中,我們探尋到了長(zhǎng)輩的很多經(jīng)歷和故事,我們學(xué)會(huì)了從中去體味他人的悲歡、感受他人的情感和情趣、理解他人的思緒和思想,甚至走進(jìn)他人的性情和靈魂……請(qǐng)以你熟悉的一位長(zhǎng)輩作為寫作對(duì)象,選取一個(gè)事件或幾段經(jīng)歷,以“那時(shí),他(她)正年輕”為題,寫一篇文章,體裁不限,700字以上。這道文題的立意就應(yīng)該是積極向上的,雖然成長(zhǎng)路上會(huì)有不如意,但我們也不能因此而悲觀失望,我們要對(duì)未來充滿信心,要做好與困難作斗爭(zhēng)的準(zhǔn)備。這表明寫作有很大的空間和靈活性。學(xué)習(xí)生涯,英雄多不勝數(shù),有誰(shuí)不知“頭懸梁錐刺股”之苦,但有氣節(jié)可將苦倦作甘霖雨露滋養(yǎng)身心,雖處苦境卻夢(mèng)縈著成功的甘甜,竭力汲取書中營(yíng)養(yǎng),為達(dá)成功,不顧食寢,眾人亦云挫折苦,可誰(shuí)知挫折過后使人斗志煥發(fā);品味苦難,令人精神抖擻、步伐堅(jiān)定,是向著成功演奏的天籟我堅(jiān)信,在挫折之火的鍛煉下,我能如寶劍般鋒刃無(wú)比;我堅(jiān)信,在挫折風(fēng)雨抽打之下,我能架起七色之橋;我堅(jiān)信,我可以演繹出成功的天籟;我堅(jiān)信,黎明破曉,在第一縷陽(yáng)光照耀下,我可以在挫折中奮起,長(zhǎng)成參天大樹【解析】試題分析:“在_______中成長(zhǎng)”是一篇半命題作文。挫折是鑄劍的火,“寶劍鋒從磨礪出”經(jīng)歷了火的磨礪,寶劍方能鋒利無(wú)比,正因?yàn)槲医?jīng)歷了火的冶煉,在它粗獷的燒灼下,我將傷口化為痂,感受它精心的實(shí)驗(yàn),考驗(yàn)我是否堅(jiān)強(qiáng)。(3)字?jǐn)?shù)不少于800字。《新竇娥冤》第一幕Aside: it was one night on April in 2010. the palace hall of the Hell was brightlylit, the king of terrors,Yan, was playing his mobile phone in front of the desk .it has been hundreds of years since edou died, the poor woman who was treated unjustly to death penalty. Now it’s in the 21st , great development has taken place, even the hell changed a lot, decorated with electric equipment. Equiped with PC,TV etc. don’t look that scaryYan: though it’s 21st, the medical treatment has improved a lot, the people died from illness are getting less and less, but I still control the death of the humans , only because I’m the king of the Hell!!!(囂張狂笑),how great I am! Right?Aside: after finishing his words, no ghosts replied him. Look around ,there is nobody at all, Yan is kind of angry, shouted for magistrate Yan: any ghost? No ghost !? where have they gone? Pan???Aside: Pan is just the magistrate Pan: (hurried to Yan) Ooo, your majesty, I’m ing! My dearest greatest KAWAYIest majesty, what can I do for you?Yan: (angry) Pan, you must have been playing on ,en?Pan: Oh! no no no, I was wronged, I was even more wronged than Doue! O, by the way, did you remember doue? You must have forgot, afterall you have been thousands of years old, mmemories are not reliable, let me tell you(語(yǔ)速變快,還想繼續(xù)說,岔開話題)Yan:(打斷)how can I forget Doue? The poor woman who was treated unjustly even died.Pan: (接話)oh, you still remember that!Yan: don’t attempt to change the topic. You didn’t surf the Internet? Where are others?Pan: o, my majesty, for it’s 17th April.Yan: (不耐煩)So what? 17th April is not April Fool’s Day.Pan: it’s the sports meeting in BHSF! In addition, it’s weekend today, so all the ghosts has gone to BHSF to watch the matches. I just came back from there, let me tell you, at the first glance I just saw a wave of red, really beautiful.Yan: red?Pan: yes, let me think…right, that’s class 4 grade 1 cheering for the players…Aside: ”before pan finish his words, they hear someone pounding the door, crying, ”I’m guiltless.. ””Yan: who’s that? So noisy, wuchang? To have a lookPan: they haven’t e back.Yan: (怒)so you instead!Aside:the ghost still crying outside, which sounds really scary Pan has to open the door and let him inPan: (不耐煩)stop! What you wannna do, or I’ll sue you for bothering ghost Tao: oh, sir, it’s me, I’m wronged! I’m wronged!Pan: enough! Shut up and follow me.Aside: tao followed pan to the palace hall, Pan stands beside Yan, tao kneeldown in front of them.Yan: you were just the ghost crying outside? Who are you?Tao: My majesty, I’am Tao. I have injustice Yan: Tao? (turn to Pan)do you know him?Pan: (拱手)my majesty, he is just the officer who have treated Doue unjustly.Yan: I see, stand up,TaoTao: thank you,my majesty,I’m wronged——(手舞足蹈)Yan:mind your manners please, I don’t know you at all what’s your injustice?Tao: I’m going to sue Doue, this is my paper(憤恨的,判官直接接過起訴書,遞給閻王,閻王誦讀)Pan: how poor I am! Both of Wuchang are not in , I’m nearly a assistantTao: my majesty, after several 輪回,doue has bee a public prosecutor.She still can’t forgive me, and use her power to beat back, to make meLost all my reputation, finally send me a bullet which went though myhead. Look at my handsome beautiful lovely face was all destroyed Pan: my majesty, doue is wronged, during her several lives, she’s always a kind honest person,you can’t believe him easilyYan: fetch me the 功德簿,let my check it myself(判官遞上功德簿,閻王邊看邊點(diǎn)頭)en,doue is really a kind person.Tao: my majesty, Pan and doue get along with each other well, he’ll sure stand by her!Pan: wanton! You have treated doue unjustly hundreds years ago, now you want to frame her!?Yan: enough, pan, I ask you to go to the man’s world right now, bring doue’s soul herePan: yes, my majesty(轉(zhuǎn)身,無(wú)奈) Ai, still my work, it’s my holiday today! But I have to run for Yan, what’s more, without salary!第二幕Aside:pan e to the man’s world and find douePan: (高興)douedoue!my dear doue? Do you remembered me?Dou: you? Oh, you are the Panguan!Pan: yes, that’s who I am, long time no seeDou: yes, for hundreds of years, you are still so short, haha, BTW(突然嚴(yán)肅)why you for me? Which means, I have died?!?!OMG, I died? A second time? Oh no~ just live for several years, I even don’t have any BF,no, I don’t wanna diePan: cool down! You haven’t died. Yanwa