【正文】 an see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文章中的語句以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。文章主要分成三個部分：第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學(xué)習(xí)漢語這一話題，并介紹寫信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。假如你是大明，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封郵件給他,提一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語的建議。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。語言準(zhǔn)確、得體，表達(dá)自然、流暢。短文分三段，第一段基本是題目中給出的開頭，作者使用一句話引出下文；第二段是主體，介紹了過去美好的回憶以及不開心的事情；最后一段對未來進(jìn)行了展望。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用，提升作文檔次。內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回憶；然后是不開心的事情；最后展望自己未來的高中生活。s unbelievable that I39。請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。開頭介紹了今年端午節(jié)慶祝時(shí)間，接下來介紹端午節(jié)的由來以及慶?；顒樱詈髿g迎大家一起體驗(yàn)這個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：People celebrate……，People hold……，We can watch……，We wele to……等句式的應(yīng)用。本題運(yùn)用句型：It is +形容詞+for sb. to so sth. 【高分句型二】And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 當(dāng)你讀這本書的時(shí)候，你應(yīng)該把它從你的眼睛里移開一英尺。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。所提供的表格中列舉了近視的原因和建議。t spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and puters. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don39。我校學(xué)生的近視問題調(diào)查情況60%的本校學(xué)生戴眼鏡。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。而固定結(jié)構(gòu)But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？談?wù)勀愕南敕ā，F(xiàn)在正在倡導(dǎo)“低碳”生活，只要我們不污染地球的環(huán)境，不浪費(fèi)地球的能源，就能夠讓我們的周圍變得更綠，生活變得更美好。t throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。以下表格是學(xué)校針對本校學(xué)生近視問題做的調(diào)查表，假如你是校報(bào)編輯Jack，請根據(jù)所提供的信息，用英語寫一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告，陳述學(xué)校調(diào)查結(jié)果，并表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)和理由。t keep your eyes work for a long time. Don39。t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eyeexercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eyefriendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from being nearsighted.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)表格中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下如何保護(hù)視力。注意作文中必須包含表格上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎o it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的視力對每個人都很重要。Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Dear fellows, The