【正文】 進(jìn)了人民的心坎里。 　　雷鋒也是幸福的驗(yàn)證者，愛迪生如果是事物上的幸福驗(yàn)證者，那么雷鋒就是精神上的幸福驗(yàn)證者。如今，人們都坐在亮堂堂的屋中盡情地享受著生活的樂趣，有誰能體會(huì)到這電燈發(fā)明家背后的辛酸。在這端，你會(huì)看到它完整的“體形”，使你產(chǎn)生一種視覺上的滿足感，這點(diǎn)是次要的，最主要的是：你在這個(gè)過程中實(shí)現(xiàn)了自己的理想，而且還從中獲得了許多以前得不到的東西。這就是上天賜予你的幸福。有人說，幸福是一種感覺，是對(duì)美好事物的感受。根據(jù)要求寫作?；鬄樾》ā？圩×恕邦}眼”也就是抓住了作文的寫作重點(diǎn)?？梢赃\(yùn)用語言、動(dòng)作、神態(tài)、心理等描寫來突出細(xì)節(jié)描寫。事實(shí)上，生活中，我們或多或少都曾誤會(huì)過別人，也曾被別人誤會(huì)過。要求以“美麗的誤會(huì)”為題，寫一篇記敘文。我聽后馬上羞紅了臉。后來經(jīng)爸爸介紹，才知道她是爸爸的好朋友的女兒，由于她家在搬家，為了不耽誤她學(xué)習(xí)，便委托爸爸讓她在離她學(xué)校很近的我家暫住幾天。我心想：等？等你追上我？再綁架我？我才不會(huì)那么笨呢！于是，我頭也不回就往家的方向跑。過了一會(huì)兒，她掏出了一部手機(jī)，我這才吁了一口氣。一上到車，那女的就在座位上時(shí)不時(shí)地朝我這邊挪動(dòng)?！薄澳悄慵以谀?？”她又問。她匆匆地走過來說：“對(duì)不起，請(qǐng)問你要去哪？”我疑惑極了，我與她并不認(rèn)識(shí)，怎么問這么奇怪的問題。這下可好了！雨下得這么大，怎么回啊。你是否也曾誤會(huì)過他人或被他人誤會(huì)？當(dāng)這個(gè)誤會(huì)消除之后，你是否對(duì)生活對(duì)他人有了新的認(rèn)識(shí)？請(qǐng)以“美麗的誤會(huì)”為題，自定立意，寫一篇不少于800字的記敘文，注意運(yùn)用各種描寫手法，特別要有細(xì)節(jié)描寫，并做到中心明確，重點(diǎn)突出。眾所周知，我們只有寫自己熟悉的人，記自己熟悉的事，談自己熟悉的問題，才能有話可說，有情可抒，有感可發(fā)，才能寫出內(nèi)容充實(shí)、重點(diǎn)突出的好文章來。要切中題旨文意，暗合命題要求?！军c(diǎn)睛】作為命題作文，要充分吸取題目中的隱含信息，確定文章的寫作走向。忽然，我心中充斥了濃濃的暖意，這是家的溫馨帶來的溫暖。素材：，會(huì)一直留在回憶中，也會(huì)彌漫在整個(gè)記憶里，讓我們一直不會(huì)寒冷，這個(gè)記憶叫家，它也叫溫暖。如采用抑揚(yáng)的手法，可先寫因誤會(huì)感覺那話語是多么冰冷，誤會(huì)消除、真相大白后才發(fā)現(xiàn)那是世上最有溫度的話語。從題目中的“記憶的”來看，比較適合寫成回憶性的記敘文或記敘性的散文?！坝洃浀臏囟取笔且粋€(gè)偏正短語，中心語是“溫度”，修飾語是“記憶的”，寫作重點(diǎn)是“溫度”。接著就要分析命題的意思，如表面意思是什么，深層意思是什么，或象征意思是什么。穿著暖暖的鞋，吃著熱熱的魚，感受著母愛和父愛的溫度，這是我記憶中最不能忘卻的溫度。一股暖流頓時(shí)從腳涌上心頭?！薄皨?，我好冷。我房間的燈還亮著，父母房間也透著一絲亮光，這些亮光很容易被人忽略。我急忙去問爸爸。那天晚上，我頂著蕭瑟透骨的寒風(fēng)，疲憊地騎著車回到家?！}記小時(shí)候，母親的懷抱是我的避風(fēng)港，每當(dāng)依偎在她懷抱，總會(huì)感到無限溫暖。在你走過的十五六年的歲月中，總會(huì)有一些人、一些事，一些場(chǎng)景，讓你駐足回首，雖時(shí)空阻隔，卻仍然能感受到永不褪色的溫度。抒情的文字有時(shí)滲透在文章的字里行間，作者憑借所描述的人、事、景、物來傳情達(dá)意，即間接抒情，常見的間接抒情方法有敘事抒情、借景抒情、托物言志三種。側(cè)面烘托，則是借他人他物或環(huán)境，以襯托此人此物此景而顯出精神的一種方法。細(xì)節(jié)雖小，卻往往通過作品給人留下深刻、難忘的印象。要讓記敘文中的人物形象鮮活起來，除了對(duì)人物與事件進(jìn)行敘述以外，還必須進(jìn)行細(xì)致深入的描寫。要領(lǐng)二．塑一個(gè)鮮活的人物。優(yōu)秀的記敘文，往往構(gòu)思精致巧妙，情節(jié)引人入勝，高明的作者都在故事情節(jié)的完整及構(gòu)思的巧妙方面下功夫。抓住了故事性的記敘文，即便文筆一般，文章也差不到哪里去。記敘文的本質(zhì)特點(diǎn)是故事性，記敘文是用來講故事的。雖然不是昂貴的禮物，但俗話說：“禮輕情意重”現(xiàn)在的我，終于了解到了。因?yàn)檫@個(gè)特別的禮物，因?yàn)槟蔷涮貏e的話語，我的心變得不一樣了，我的懦弱變了，從那時(shí)候的我不再輕易掉淚，不再為雞毛 蒜皮的而傷心。記得那天是我在小學(xué)度過的最后一個(gè)生日，當(dāng)他拿著那奇怪的布娃娃給我時(shí)，我百思不解的看著他，因?yàn)槠渌说亩Y物既精致又可愛，而他的卻一點(diǎn)也不引人注目，他 對(duì)我笑了笑說：“這個(gè)娃娃是我親手做的，他哭得很丑吧！就像你一樣，愛哭的你跟它一樣很丑，所以別再輕易掉眼淚，臉上要多多掛著微笑，這樣的你才可愛。希望能寫出更有意義的“禮物”。Cook2: Yes! Yes! Yes!All: Working in the kitchen, Good! Good! Good! (退場(chǎng))第三場(chǎng)服務(wù)生出場(chǎng)Waitress: Hello！I am Sunny. I am a waitress.Waiter: Hello！I am Ricky. I am a waiter.All: Wele! Wele! Wele to our restaurant!Waitress: Please sit down! May I help you?Waiter: Order a dish! Waitress: Serving for you!Waitrer: Pork, beef, mutton. What do you want?Waitess: Fish, crab, shell. Do you like them?Waitrer: water, juice, wine. Have something to drink.All:Oh, delicious! Working in the restaurant, Happy! Happy! Happy!(退場(chǎng))第四場(chǎng)空姐、機(jī)長出場(chǎng)空姐1：Hello！I am Helen. I am a stewardess.機(jī)長：Hello！I am Richard. I am a captain.空姐2：Hello！I am Kelly. I am a stewardess.All: We’re working in the Happy Airlines.空姐1：Good evening！ladies and gentlemen, wele aboard happy Airlines Flight 2011 Nanning to Guilin , Guilin is a beautiful place, We will take off immediately , please be seated, fasten your seat belt, thank you !機(jī)長：Good evening！ladies and gentlemen, this is your captain speaking, we will be landing at Guilin airport after 20 minutes, thank you!空姐2：Good evening！ladies and gentlemen, our plane has landed at Guilin airport , the plane is taxiing, for your safety. Please stay in your seat for the time being. Thank you!All: Wele to Guilin! We look forward to serving you again! Thank you!(退場(chǎng))第五場(chǎng)醫(yī)生護(hù)士出場(chǎng)Nurse: Hello！I am Wendy. I am a nurse.Doctor : Hello！I am Coby. I am a doctor.All: we work in the hospital. We help the patients, if you’re sick, e to see the doctor.Doctor : Have some medicine.Nurse: Get a shot!Doctor : Drink more water, have a good rest.Nurse:You will get well.All: Everybody! Everybody! Nod your head,shake your head, wave your arms, shake your body, Do more exercises! Healthy! Healthy! Healthy!(退場(chǎng))第六場(chǎng)Teachers 出場(chǎng)Art teacher: Hello, I’m Tendy. I am an art teacher. This is my paint brush.English teacher: Hello, I’m Kiki. I am an English teacher. This is my English book.Math teacher: Hello, I’m Jerry. I am a math teacher. This is my triangle ruler.Art teacher: Do you like drawing? Draw with me .Blue sky, white cloud and green tree. My paint brush is dancing, beautiful picture, do you like it?English teacher: Can you speak English ? Do you want to learn ?ABCDEFG ! Hi ! Hello ! How are you ! Nice to meet you ! ABCDEFG!Math teacher:Can you count the numbers ? From 1 to10. 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10. Can you do math? Two plus two is four, four minus one is three. Math is funny.All teachers : Hello children ! Hello children ! Teachers love you ! Like Father ! Like Mother ! We are good friends ! Study well and make progress every day. (退場(chǎng))第七場(chǎng)Scientists出場(chǎng)Scientist1: Hello ! I’m Karan.Scientist2: Hello ! I’m Ryan.Scientist3: Hello ! I’m Sam!All: We are scientists !Scientist1: Oh, look ! Oh, look ! What can you see ?Scientist2 : I see stars ! I see the moon. I see the meteors !Scientist3: Can we live on the moon ?Scientist1: No, no, no.Scientist2: No air !Scientist3 : No water !Scientist2 : No body can live there.Scientist3: We love nature !Scientist1 : We love life !All: We need to protect our nature ! Works are fun ! Fun ! Fun !Fun !(退場(chǎng))第八場(chǎng)Soldiers出場(chǎng)Soldier1 : Hello, I’m Seven.Soldier2: Hello, I’m Victor.Soldier3: Smart.All : We are soldiers.Soldier1 : I’m dressing white. I’m a navy. I can drive a warship, I love the ocean. Soldier2: I’m dressing green. I’m an army. I can drive a tank, Cool! Cool!Cool!Soldier3: I39。s make a wish!Helen: My wish is to be a stewardess.Kelly: I wish that to be an English teacher.Coby: Hey! I want to be a doctor when I grow up!All: I wish that …I wish that …I wish that …Wish angel(Angel): Hi! I am the wishing angel. I can help you!All: Really?Angel: Yes! Though the magic door! Your dreams will e true.All: Great! Yeah! Yeah! Yeah!第二場(chǎng)Cooks出場(chǎng)Cook 1: Hello! I am Mike.Cook 2 :Hello! I am Tony.(one by one)All: We ’re cooks! Cut! Cut! Cut! Cook! Cook! Cook!Cook1: I like cooking!Cook 2: Me too! Me too! Me too!Cook2: Delicious food!Cook 1: Yummy! Yummy! Yummy!Cook1: Do you want to eat?Cook1amp。提示：在你的生活