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rstand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析:本題是一篇給材料作文,要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會(huì)上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。?xiě)作亮點(diǎn):短文開(kāi)頭直奔主題:我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄?;后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞?,生?dòng)具體,條理分明。作為新時(shí)代的中學(xué)生, 如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號(hào)召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”(Live Green, Live Better)? 請(qǐng)以此為題,參考以下要點(diǎn)(可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮), 為??庇⒄Z(yǔ)角”寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英文稿件。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng),一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題,不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。,幫家長(zhǎng)做家務(wù)。;要點(diǎn)齊全;句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)正確、連貫;書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析:短文要制定出度假計(jì)劃,文章需要用第一人稱(chēng)“I”進(jìn)行書(shū)寫(xiě),不可使用“we/ you”等其他人稱(chēng)。用了一些銜接詞besides等,句子過(guò)度自然。“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)(結(jié)果見(jiàn)下表)。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鐾瑢W(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點(diǎn),所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),敘述同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)用第三人稱(chēng),敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱(chēng)??键c(diǎn):材料作文。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn):短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式,如:do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查;respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母;look after照顧;make a good plan for sth為某事做一個(gè)好的計(jì)劃;make some good friends交一些好朋友;keep healthy保持健康。同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會(huì)計(jì)劃未來(lái)……(至少兩條)注意:(1)短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);(2)你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條;(3)詞數(shù):80—100;(4)短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)??键c(diǎn):考查提綱作文。所寫(xiě)的句子要符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法,不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays. 【答案】My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。重點(diǎn)語(yǔ)句:It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around us保護(hù)環(huán)境是每個(gè)人的職責(zé),make full use of充分利用, let’s take action!讓我們行動(dòng)起來(lái)9.同學(xué)們,初中生活即將結(jié)束,本次考試后,盼望已久的假期就要到來(lái)!請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,制定出度假計(jì)劃,可以結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際發(fā)揮。Live Green, Live Better As China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony(追求和諧) between man and nature. But how can we help?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Live Green, Live BetterAs China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony(追求和諧) between man and nature. But how can we help?In recent years,protecting the environment is being more and more important to the