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rotect the 。首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包含了題目中要求的所有信息,沒有遺漏要點;且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,分成了三段,每一段的中心明確,意思表達清楚、明了。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一,時態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一,根據(jù)表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài),注意謂語動詞的正確形式。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信,告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。6.書面表達假如你是李明,你的英國筆友Jack來信詢問你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣,情況如何。The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in 【答案】 The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【詳解】假如你是李華,你們學校正在進行課堂教學改革,經(jīng)過一段時間的適應(yīng),同學們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化,請你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章,談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語,如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn39。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點:首先文章內(nèi)容完整,層次清晰,短文分三段,第一段先介紹了這個人是誰,第二段描寫了這個人身上的品質(zhì)以及對自己的應(yīng)選;最后一段結(jié)尾??梢院唵尉浣Y(jié)構(gòu)為主,輔以并列句、復(fù)合句。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主來敘述,人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱,注意謂語動詞形式的變化。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warmhearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang. He got the first prize in last year39。請以 “The person who inspired me”為題寫一篇不少于 80 詞的短文,向校報的英語園地投稿。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如make joint efforts,as junior students,for example,obey the traffic rules,run red light,in addition,no longer,in public,a