【正文】 華的英國筆友Jessica來信說, 她想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。s all． Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。（可聯(lián)系實際，適當發(fā)揮）注意：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓勵大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿正能量。請你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do?本期節(jié)目留言，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；2. 說說你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會充滿正能量。寫作亮點：本文語言精煉，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，簡潔，但是句意表達清楚；同時，本文用了被動語態(tài)、動名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式，使表達生動；用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。參考詞匯：梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates，I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 footballthemed schools by 2020．Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．First，both boys and girls can take part in it．Second，it helps develop team spirit．What’s more，playing football is good for our health．I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．Thank you for your attention．【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題要求按提綱的提示，介紹足球運動并談談自己的夢想。5．書面表達為了配合“足球進校園”活動，你們班開展了一次主題班會。結合要點提示，可知本文主要從三個方面進行敘述，注意圍繞要點組織材料，適當發(fā)揮。3．詞數(shù)：80—100詞。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What39。；；；；（自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點）參考詞匯: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Z