【正文】 good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信，對(duì)他的漢語學(xué)習(xí)提出了一些好的建議。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫完整的句子。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信，告訴他如何學(xué)好漢語，題目中從四個(gè)方面提出了建議。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】Dear Sam,I39。,以使行文連貫。,與同學(xué)們用中文交流。3．近來，美國總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅”。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了動(dòng)詞正確形式的變化。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：文章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)；第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，注意應(yīng)合情合理，與上文很好地銜接。題目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們可以此為提綱進(jìn)行寫作。不開心的事情； 。2．馬上要初中畢業(yè)了，大家都是依依不舍的。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。請(qǐng)你用英語寫封回信，簡(jiǎn)單介紹以下討論結(jié)果：1．節(jié)水節(jié)電． 2．垃圾分類 3．少用紙巾，重拾手帕4．步行、騎自行車或公交出行、參考詞匯：low carbon低碳；tissue紙巾詞數(shù)：100詞左右。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。此處ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。美好的回憶； ；； 。m going to graduate from my beloved school. 【答案】My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。表格中有非常具體的提示，但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語，應(yīng)把他們變成自己的話，并用英語表達(dá)出來。同時(shí)語句之間使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，有層次、有條理。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。要點(diǎn)提示 :,做好筆記。注意 :。Dear Sam ,I39。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能按照漢語的思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。這一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話對(duì)整篇文章做了總結(jié)。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。注意:。、校名等相關(guān)信息。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點(diǎn)齊全，語言簡(jiǎn)練。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以“向時(shí)代楷模學(xué)習(xí)”為主題的英語征文活動(dòng)。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。注意：；，書寫工整、規(guī)范