【正文】 d and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進(jìn)行“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，主次分明。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級(jí)詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要符合題目要求，包括題目中要求的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意上下文的銜接。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題，介紹一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過你的人。要點(diǎn)： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？2. How did he/ she inspire you？要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴(yán)密。【詳解】首先，第一句話直接點(diǎn)明作者的觀點(diǎn)，大明是犯錯(cuò)了的。請(qǐng)你就此事給校報(bào)投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”為題，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：簡(jiǎn)述事件；談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，并給Daming一些建議。4． 誠(chéng)信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，也是社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀內(nèi)容之一。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！敬鸢浮縃i,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in idea is that it is not quiteright for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容，寫作要點(diǎn)和要求，給這位家長(zhǎng)回復(fù)。（I think ???；try one39。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2． 最近一份學(xué)生體質(zhì)健康調(diào)查結(jié)果顯示，學(xué)生近視率仍維持在高位水平，且越來越低齡化。s known that it has many advantages.，F(xiàn)irst of all, it39。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bikesharing. Besides, bikesharing helps people take more this way, it39。要點(diǎn)提示：AdvantagesBe convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（減緩交通壓力）Take exercise…Problems Throw away, damage（毀損）, be stolen…Advice Civilized（文明的）, follow the rules, take good care of…注意：1. 短文應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名及地名；3. 詞數(shù)：80100（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示以＂Bikesharing＂為題寫一篇英語短文，表達(dá)自己的看法和建議。s enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, it39。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語，為文章增色不少，.如: It39。寫作時(shí)，考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：首先，闡述共享單車的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；其次，列舉共享單車帶來的問題；最后，根據(jù)問題給出個(gè)人建議。（2）開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)生近視原因：（not enough）、做作業(yè)、用電腦等（for a long time）防止近視的方法：，多進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)（eye exercises）（have the good habit of）個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：如：我認(rèn)為，我們應(yīng)該了解保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，盡最大努力保護(hù)我們的眼睛。3． 寫作假定你是李華，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。3. 提出至少2條建議。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。因此，Lingling很生氣，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫作過程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說自己對(duì)此的看法?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。請(qǐng)以 “The person who inspired me”為題寫一篇不少于 80 詞的短文，向校報(bào)的英語園地投稿。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warmhearted and ready to help others. I