【正文】 s easy to inspire researchers’ potential made me willing to live such hard life under much greater over two years’ software development work in Beijing Grandsoft Technology Co., Ltd has already helped me accumulate considerable experience in software programming and designing and make some achievements admirable in others’ eyes, I, who will be promoted as a senior development engineer, know clearly that only the xxx program in your department can fully exert my strength and make my pursuit e know that I belong to the kind of people who are able to better realize the life values and meaningfulness while doing certain interesting things, who enjoy challenges and thinking and who are always in pursuit of creative , the work I was taking up now is almost always repetition of what has already ’s why I gave up the achievement without know that I will be able to master the most advanced technology and thoughts in the xxx such a bright and promising field, I believe I will be able to inspire all my ability in facing challenges, and finally bee a top talent to make contributions to the development in the , my studying and working experiences make me very confident in myself to believe that I have got the ability and potential to realize my became interested in puter science in Chongqing Nankai Middle School, a school emphasizing cultivating personal my unusual performance in the National Entrance Examination failed me for entering the Department of Computer Science of Tsinghua clear of my interest and goal, I spent quite a lot of time in puter science besides the basic courses required by the I didn’t gain an extraordinary GPA, I succeeded in transferring to the School of , my GPA continued increasing and my foundation in the major was have a good habit in learning and matter how great the pressure was, I would stick to my studies after I finished reading books like Interconnection NetworksAn Engineering Approach and reviewed(Introduction to Algorithms, Computer Networks, Database Systems Concepts) addition, I am very could solve the instability in file transmission by using FTP/HTTP method instead of the original Web Service/COM+ method to cope with different network situations after independentApplicant for Computer Science Program from Tsinghua Universitythinking。美國金融專業(yè)的申請競爭還是非常激烈的，所以個人陳述的寫作力求新穎亮點突出，文章不在長，而在質(zhì)量。nonessential economy began to play an important role in the world, the development of information industry made finance market develop more , finance influenced largely on the daily life of mon people and made mon people more concern the development tendency of finance then before and made out the relevant reaction according to getting information from all aspects, for example, the change of inflation, stock and exchange rate that influenced mon peoples(people’s)lives and economical began to realize that finance in fact was the different(difference)between microcosmic and microeconomic and macroeconomic knowledge through mylearning in the university, and it owned strong practice and was not abstract instance, currency banking, investment and international finance offered many cases and made me realize the meaning of I knew that finance covered a wider scope and researcher needed strong academic background and ability on macrocontrol by practices and analysis of example, I acted as a leader of group, each group represents an enterprise and discussed whether open new produces instead of old produces, I told every member to answer for a part and consult materials, then we talked about them together and found some materials had superposition and didn’t have close logic, even each member had different emphasis and expressions which made me know cooperation was very important in a I held the second meeting to talk about these asked all members to look for materials relevant to this case respectively and then analyzed them the process, we thought about them deeply and fully, finally we got a best this experiment, I became lover finance major than before, because it not only brought me model and data but also interest on(in)connecting knowledge with practices to make data and model each new idea produced different is not a material concept but is social science, which contains a wider am very glad to involving discovering unknown things in this like discussion, many members’ thoughts inspired me and we got satisfied is a social science which embodied human being is the could cultivate our academic taste during the learning symposia and academic discussion the practices we could cultivate intuition added bination with academic background and mathematic theory。幾乎所有學(xué)校都要求提交個人陳述。這對申請者來說是一個絕好的機(jī)會。當(dāng)你通過申請文書來介紹你自己時,你會發(fā)現(xiàn)所面臨的機(jī)遇和挑戰(zhàn)同樣之大。這不僅僅對中國人如此,以英語為母語的人在此類寫作時也會感到十分的頭疼,但是我們中國人還需克服語言的障礙。例如學(xué)校要求五百字內(nèi)完成(In 500 words or less discuss...),則全文最好不要超過五百字。2．”I received extensive training in physics“ 這句話不夠詳細(xì),”My training was in the area of particle physics“就具體多了。（三）不要用語意模糊的句子,如 ”Your esteemed school“應(yīng)代以學(xué)校的名字。（六）態(tài)度誠懇認(rèn)真,不卑不亢。應(yīng)詳讀學(xué)校的介紹,了解其要求,再對自己的學(xué)業(yè)背景、計劃加以考慮,寫出自己的風(fēng)格。s what admissions staff wants to your essay with an attentiongrabbing leadan anecdote, quote, question, or engaging description of your essay with a conclusion that refers back to lead and restates your your essay at。Ten Do39。重要的是給學(xué)校一個專業(yè),認(rèn)真的印象。（四）避免用深奧的字匯,盡量以簡單容易的字來表達(dá)。4．”I am attracted to your department by its brilliant faculty.“應(yīng)說明對於教授的認(rèn)知是從何而來,如在何處讀到某教授的文章而愿受教于他,或某位教授正在從事一項重要研究,與自己欲攻讀的研究領(lǐng)域相同等。（二）寫作時應(yīng)清楚明確。不要像列清單,也不要重覆申請表格已有的資料。一篇好的申請文書要求申請人能夠用一種與其他申請人完全不同方式,巧妙地展現(xiàn)自己的獨特個性和經(jīng)驗。而西方的大學(xué)并不單是通過傳統(tǒng)的考試來考評其申請者的資格,這并不是說他們的錄取標(biāo)準(zhǔn)不嚴(yán)格。個人陳述應(yīng)當(dāng)包含以下內(nèi)容：（一）申請者的學(xué)術(shù)或?qū)I(yè)興趣及背景；（二）欲研究的方向；（三）未來的職業(yè)目標(biāo)。the second was to keep valuta long , I pointed out RMB globalization was the necessity choice of our national economy persisting development and the benefit of currency globalization according to the impersonality requirement of economical globalization development, and RMB globalization would more enlarge the degree for opening to