【正文】 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________18．（A（n） _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________19．（How to save time__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________20．（參考詞匯:身心健康：mental and physical health英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。因此首先我們要仔細(xì)思考這個(gè)問(wèn)題，結(jié)合自己的真實(shí)生活，想一想平時(shí)是怎么做的，應(yīng)該怎么做。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章中以第一人稱為主、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)敘述，符合題目要求。3．Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term． Now I’ll introduce s解析：Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term． Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China，we arrange a pingpong game for the students．They can learn from each other. What’s more，they’ll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner．In our culture，dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck．I think they will enjoy their time here． I’m looking forward to your ing．Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給英國(guó)懷特學(xué)校的校長(zhǎng)Green 先生寫(xiě)一封信，介紹他們學(xué)校的學(xué)生來(lái)你校參觀時(shí)的活動(dòng)安排以及理由。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。這一段占篇幅最大，里面使用了較豐富的句式，如Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China, we arrange a pingpong game for the students中Since引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句；All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner中動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)；In our culture, dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck中使用了not only…but also...句式。根據(jù)所提供的提示詞語(yǔ)可知，要求介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日：中秋節(jié)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)把所給的提示問(wèn)題回答清楚就行。由and連接的并列句。s business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，并補(bǔ)充個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。文章可分為三段，第一段表明寫(xiě)信的目的；第二段分析感謝的具體原因；第三段寫(xiě)出你在住家媽媽Sarah家里的感受。[高分句型二]Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您們家里就像住在我自己的家里一樣，這讓我想起了一句話：“天下之大, 家最美好。同時(shí)Why not learn to smile? / Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence./ It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，條理清晰，表達(dá)流暢，是短文的亮點(diǎn)。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如senior high school，go to do，like doing，do some sports，such as，play basketball，play tennis，get on well with，make progress，after school，hope to do，in the free time，e ture等。關(guān)于這個(gè)話題每個(gè)人都會(huì)有自己的看法，題目要求我們?nèi)芜x一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)來(lái)講述，并結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，給出2到3個(gè)理由。高級(jí)句型或詞匯的使用也可以提升文章的檔次，在語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意表達(dá)連貫、流暢。最后一段作者重申自己的觀點(diǎn)，并進(jìn)行了總結(jié)。短文中較好的句型和短語(yǔ)有Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.、After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study.、Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.、There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. 、Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal 。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。要按要點(diǎn)和給出的提示問(wèn)題來(lái)完成寫(xiě)作任務(wù)，但不能生硬的寫(xiě)幾個(gè)句子交待了事，切記，逐條生硬的翻譯，沒(méi)有任何的連接詞。句型變化多，有定語(yǔ)從句的使用，數(shù)量恰當(dāng)，句式豐富，短語(yǔ)多樣。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。此處give sth to sb, thank sb for doing sth, be in trouble, put up, put on, look forward to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。注意電子郵件的格式，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。作文完成后，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏需要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)。要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性；文章必須涵蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱要點(diǎn)，不要遺漏。m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,John【解析】這是一篇提綱作文。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。12．Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers on May 3解析：Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers on May 30. On the day we will give our teachers some flowers to show our thanks and respect. We thank them for helping us when we are in will put up the thanknotes on