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graduating class of 2009.It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers39。文中 not only …but also…,help a lot,share happiness and sadness,do well in,give up, besides,so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.,therefore, be proud of等詞(組)恰當(dāng)使用,使上下文意連接緊密;文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達(dá)了自己愿望與想法,使文章增色不少,值得學(xué)習(xí)。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to bee better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析:本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題,結(jié)合本題所給的寫(xiě)作信息,闡述自己難忘的中學(xué)生活。短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。而I think it39?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練文中運(yùn)用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。 要求:、條理清晰、段落分明、書(shū)寫(xiě)工整;、校名和地名等信息;,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。短文中使用了較豐富的句型,如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won39。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理,層次清晰。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,穿插并列句或復(fù)合句。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主,注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。提示:(1)What was the event?(2)How did you make it?(3)What’s your feeling?要求:(1)發(fā)言稿中須包括所有提示內(nèi)容, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意了條理性,使文章具有層次感,條理清楚。同時(shí)注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性,尤其是表格中的第五項(xiàng)和第六項(xiàng)內(nèi)容。在表格中有非常詳細(xì)的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容,我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達(dá)出來(lái)。一例)。2點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl;let herhave more friends and social activities;and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,對(duì)學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn):1. 表明