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___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Mary,I’m very sorry to say that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday morning. I have to go to see my friend in the hospital that morning. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Sunday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Lin Lei【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息向Mary解釋一下你不能赴約的原因。寫作時(shí),避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。句子that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday 。中央民族大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)昆明五華實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校中考模擬)A good book is important to me要求:1. 緊扣主題,意思連貫,語言通順,書寫規(guī)范?!敬鸢浮緼 good book is important for me. It can not only help broaden my horizons, but also give me inspiration. From the good book, I can learn what others think, and their views about the world. What’s more, I can even live their lives, which are totally different from mine. For me, a good book is really like a good friend, who can teach me how to solve the problems when I am in trouble. A good book helps me a lot, and it is quite important for me in my life.【解析】【分析】本題是命題作文,根據(jù)題目一本好書對我是重要的,自己寫相關(guān)內(nèi)容,可以是你讀了什么書,該書對你產(chǎn)生了什么影響。題目并沒有給過多的提示信息,所以需要學(xué)生自己思索行文內(nèi)容。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。”可見閱讀在每個(gè)人的成長過程中都起著至關(guān)重要的作用。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。11.(,合理安排時(shí)間。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。12.(假如你是李華,你對此很感興趣,準(zhǔn)備投稿,談?wù)勀闳粘5慕涣鞣绞郊澳愕母惺?。而My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other./ I think the best way to municate is the mobile ,使本文內(nèi)容豐富,表達(dá)流暢,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。假如你叫Jack,你所在的小區(qū)正在進(jìn)行“模范家庭”的評(píng)選活動(dòng),請根據(jù)下表提示的內(nèi)容給社區(qū)中心寫一封英文推薦信向他們推薦你的家庭。Dear Sir, I would like to remend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. 【答案】Dear Sir, I would like to remend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me.In my family, we respect each other and take care of each other. We all work hard to make progress.In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family.What’s more, we think it is important to live a green life, so we try our best to make people know the importance of protecting the environment. Now there are lots of trees and flowers around our neighbourhood. It’s really beautiful.Last but not least, my family members like to work for charity. We often volunteer to help people in need. We have sent them lots of donations.I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.Yours FaithfullyJack【解析】 這是一篇圖表,你所在的小區(qū)正在進(jìn)行“模范家庭”的評(píng)選活動(dòng),請根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容給社區(qū)中心寫一封英文推薦信向他們推薦你的家庭。請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息,寫一篇題為“Being a Popular Student”的英語短文,談?wù)勀闶侨绾巫龅摹?.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如first of all,grow up,grow older,marry with,burden on,have to do, take care of,by oneself,have no playmate,the number of等。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確,簡潔。江蘇中考模擬)某英語報(bào)開展“How to deal with the exam stress?”征文比賽,請你根據(jù)表格中的提示內(nèi)容,簡要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn),寫一篇英語短文。t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired.We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end.In my opinion,to deal with stress,we39。分析表格可以看到,這篇作文的內(nèi)容主要有三個(gè)方面,第一個(gè)是適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫ξ覀兪怯泻锰幍?;第二個(gè)是過多的壓力對我們有害;最后發(fā)表自己的看法,如何來應(yīng)對壓力。全文需要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),第一人稱來寫。作者將整篇短文分成了三個(gè)部分,首先寫的是適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫ξ覀冇欣aveweatmayopinion,還用到了提建議時(shí)經(jīng)常用的had18.(Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now. 【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our sc。請根據(jù)表格提示,寫一篇題為“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文,介紹九年級(jí)的學(xué)校生活,并提出希望和建議。和should。但是意思很完整;最后作者發(fā)表了自己的觀點(diǎn),用了短語inandsleepheavy接下來作者寫的是過多的壓力的害處,段首先用however來進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)折,然后使用了一個(gè)復(fù)合句if亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。在每一段中加上具體的內(nèi)容,使段落更加充實(shí)。ll feel relaxed and do well in the exams. 【解析】試題分析:本書面表達(dá)以“How to deal with the exam stress”為題寫一篇作文。2. 表格最后一欄中省略部分須用12句話展開合理想象,作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。點(diǎn)睛:這篇文章使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如in trouble;do sports;On the other hand ;municate with等;When;Besides ;And ;So等的運(yùn)用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理;同時(shí)語言流暢,內(nèi)容完整,是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。 sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do everything for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t mun