【正文】 . 短文應(yīng)包括以上要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名及地名；3. 詞數(shù)：80100（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bikesharing. Besides, bikesharing helps people take more this way, it39。s known that it has many advantages.，F(xiàn)irst of all, it39。2．親愛的同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，,名城中學(xué)九（1）班的學(xué)生。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。此處go by, e to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。每年統(tǒng)計兩次鳥兒的數(shù)量，以研究鳥兒在數(shù)量方面的變化。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2. 詞數(shù)90左右。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it39。s all. Thank you.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it39。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。3．詞數(shù)：80—100詞。結(jié)合要點提示，可知本文主要從三個方面進(jìn)行敘述，注意圍繞要點組織材料，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。6．　　近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature. 【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以“outdoor activities”為話題，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，寫一篇報刊征文稿。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞（組）的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；本文還采用了豐富的句型，比如：It is +形容詞+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；時間狀語從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯的范文。2. 介紹和你朋友之間發(fā)生的一件令人難忘的事；3. 你是怎樣看待你們之間的友誼的要求：1. 語句連貫通順，文章銜接緊密2. 詞數(shù)801003. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名及姓名Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My best friendFriends are very important in our life. T