【正文】 hile developing the skills to bee socially responsible business I had leaded my team taking a series of social cases among which I would like to share the most unforgettable first programme was the Bangbangjun Program.“Bangbangjun” is a typical Chongqing way to call the luggage porters, who are the migrant from frequent discrimination, they live their lives at the foot of the social are some panies to manage their onsite inspection we found that the situation was worse than our imagination in those and shortages existed everywhere such as in legal security, internal systems, labor rights, and the financial the help of the supervisoras well as lawyers and business consultant we tried to find universal business modes to benefit as more porters as we 3 years’ endeavor we succeeded in bringing the pany with advanced business modes and legal aids, setting up websites and establishing brands, perfecting taxing structure and internal regulations。and EOP(Economic Opportunity Program), in which I took charge of protocoling the framework of their cooperation with primary from my practice experience in SIFE, I had another internship in summer vacation in Beijing’s Intermediate People’s Court, where I had learned basic criminal litigation procedures, connecting processes with public security organ and procuratorial organ and the criminal litigation defending other internship I had was in Bangbangjun Moving Company from 2009~ that pany I helped the staff with my professional advice in checking agreement and pliance。）個(gè)人PS分以下幾點(diǎn)：一：個(gè)人基本信息及情況（包括家庭狀況，學(xué)習(xí)情況，性格，個(gè)人特長(zhǎng)）。四：選擇美國(guó)的原因及錄取后，畢業(yè)后的計(jì)劃總括下此專業(yè)在美國(guó)的排名境況，然后規(guī)劃下自己在此專業(yè)的長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)計(jì)劃以及學(xué)成后的打算。下面是更細(xì)致的PS介紹（可參考）保持真實(shí)性。再次強(qiáng)調(diào)，個(gè)人陳述中不要有那么多的虛詞和空洞的內(nèi)容，一定要有細(xì)節(jié)去支撐你想突出的主題。對(duì)自己有信心。你必須找出一個(gè)主題，這個(gè)主題不僅得將你的個(gè)性特征與經(jīng)歷完美融合形成一個(gè)連貫整體，還要表達(dá)你對(duì)進(jìn)入這所學(xué)校的強(qiáng)烈愿望。人們都不喜歡空頭話，都不喜歡虛的東西。這主要想說(shuō)一下開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾。制造一個(gè)懸念，創(chuàng)造一個(gè)情境等等，都是不錯(cuò)的開(kāi)頭方式。??是否能給人留下深刻印象??所有內(nèi)容是否圍繞這個(gè)主題????第四篇：留學(xué)申請(qǐng)個(gè)人陳述Applicant for Computer Science Program from Tsinghua UniversityPersonal StatementFor nearly one year, when all other colleagues had gone back home after work or to the bars for relaxation, I kept myself busy with the designing, programming, and refactoring I got home every day after ten o’clock in the night, I would read papers of XXX and continue for seeking the universities and professors attractive to me until one o’clock in the sense of responsibility for the pany made me obliged to finish all the projects in my hands before I leave for my yearning for the free American environment which is easy to inspire researchers’ potential made me willing to live such hard life under much greater over two years’ software development work in Beijing Grandsoft Technology Co., Ltd has already helped me accumulate considerable experience in software programming and designing and make some achievements admirable in others’ eyes, I, who will be promoted as a senior development engineer, know clearly that only the xxx program in your department can fully exert my strength and make my pursuit e know that I belong to the kind of people who are able to better realize the life values and meaningfulness while doing certain interesting things, who enjoy challenges and thinking and who are always in pursuit of creative , the work I was taking up now is almost always repetition of what has already ’s why I gave up the achievement without know that I will be able to master the most advanced technology and thoughts in the xxx such a bright and promising field, I believe I will be able to inspire all my ability in facing challenges, and finally bee a top talent to make contributions to the development in the , my studying and working experiences make me very confident in myself to believe that I have got the ability and potential to realize my became interested in puter science in Chongqing Nankai Middle School, a school emphasizing cultivating personal my unusual performance in the National Entrance Examination failed me for entering the Department of Computer Science of Tsinghua clear of my interest and goal,