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三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活中,你一定遇到過很多老師,現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你選擇其中對(duì)你幫助最大的一位老師,給他(她)寫一封感謝信,談?wù)勀銓?duì)他(她)的印象,回憶一下他(她)是怎么幫助你的,并表達(dá)你對(duì)他(她)的祝福。身為地方百姓父母官,你們將國家賦予的權(quán)力和義務(wù)認(rèn)真的貫徹落實(shí)到為人民辦實(shí)事上,“群眾事無小事”這句話在你們身上展現(xiàn)得淋漓盡致。現(xiàn)在想想也是,女兒是小一班的一份子,這里是他在北京的家啊!現(xiàn)在看著女兒幸福地成長,享受著周圍大家的愛,我們由衷的感到高興。2014年11月15日是女兒四周歲的生日。我和xx媽媽一直在努力實(shí)現(xiàn)北漂的夢(mèng)想,為了讓女兒能和其他小朋友一樣接受良好的教育,我們選擇了aa實(shí)驗(yàn)藝術(shù)幼兒園,這個(gè)選擇讓我們很放心,很安心!長期以來由于我們工作的特殊性對(duì)孩子的作息時(shí)間影響很大,爸爸、媽媽工作到很晚,女兒一直在旁邊玩耍守候。難點(diǎn):寫一封感謝信給你的老師一、創(chuàng)設(shè)情境,導(dǎo)入課題:投影ⅰ,我們一聲中應(yīng)該感謝的人?為什么?二、新課教學(xué)投影ⅱ,感謝信應(yīng)該包括哪些內(nèi)容? 感謝信的結(jié)構(gòu)投影ⅲ舉例子投影iv 當(dāng)堂寫作學(xué)生根據(jù)剛學(xué)的內(nèi)容,當(dāng)堂寫一篇感謝信給你們的老師 教學(xué)反思:通過本次班會(huì)學(xué)生學(xué)會(huì)感謝信的寫法,寫一封感謝信給你的老師園長、小一班全體老師:你們好,我是小一班楊xx的家長。在描寫自己起初對(duì)英語單詞的厭煩時(shí),作者用了一個(gè)how 所引導(dǎo)的賓語從句替代原文的普通句式。當(dāng)然,文章的連貫和語言優(yōu)化方面也還是可以進(jìn)一步改進(jìn)的。同學(xué)們先把相關(guān)短語和詞匯整理一下:?kind, nice, selfless, patient, easygoing, responsible, be strict with…師對(duì)自己的幫助呢?help me with my english/ maths, explain…to me patiently, encourage me never to give up, praise me when i make progress, have a talk with me, take me to the hospital when i am ill, tell me some good ways to learn……接下來,我們看看如何表達(dá)對(duì)老師的感謝和祝福吧。提示詞:kind, help, encourage,thanks, hope本題要求我們給對(duì)自己幫助最大的老師寫一封感謝信,因?yàn)槭亲约河H身經(jīng)歷的,又是寫給自己的老師,同學(xué)們一定有千言萬語要對(duì)他說。文章的幾個(gè)過渡語也是恰到好處: to be honest, little by little等,均在一定程度上增強(qiáng)了文章的連貫性。dear miss wang,i’m glad to write to this moment, words can no longer express my kind and responsible can a teacher be? you just gave me the perfect can clearly remember how much i hated learning new english words at be honest, i really wanted to give soon as you noticed this, you offered to help me by telling me some shortcuts to learn never failed to encourage me even when i made only a little by little, my interest in english grew and now i’m a top student in want to say thanks to will work harder in the future to live up to your hope you can be happy and healthy xiaoming點(diǎn)評(píng):這篇修改后的作文無論在語言表達(dá)以及文章內(nèi)涵方面都是相當(dāng)優(yōu)秀的。 want to say thanks/thank owe my progress/success to your owe you a lot for your help/what you’ve done for ’ll never forget your help and i will remember all the happy times we shared hope you can be happy/healthy, wish you good luck/health!dear miss wang:i’m glad to write to are such a kind and easygoing teacher that we all like remember that at first i hated learning new english words very much and i even wanted to give you noticed this, you had a talk with told me some good ways to remember those words and encouraged me never to give ’ve made greatprogress in english and now i’m a top student in want to say will work harder in the hope you can be happy and healthy ,linda點(diǎn)評(píng):本文信息點(diǎn)齊全,層次比較清楚,語言比較通順,句式也有一定的變化。在情真意切的同時(shí),我們還要格外注意文章的詳略和條理。第一篇:怎么給老師寫感謝信怎么給老師寫感謝信(精選多篇)在初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活中,你一定遇到過很多老師,現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你選擇其中對(duì)你幫助最大的一位老師,給他寫一封感謝信,談?wù)勀銓?duì)他的印象,回憶一下他是怎么幫助你的,并表達(dá)你對(duì)他的祝福。通過審題,我們可以獲知::感謝師恩:對(duì)老師的感謝之情,對(duì)老師的印象,回憶老師的幫助,并表達(dá)祝福。作者首先用一個(gè)so…that 句式將老師隨和、善良的特點(diǎn)勾勒出來,接下來回憶了老師是如何在自己當(dāng)初因討厭背單詞而想放棄學(xué)英語時(shí)對(duì)自己無私的幫助。首先,開頭at this moment, words can no longer express my 的一句話便把作者此時(shí)的激動(dòng)和對(duì)老師的感激之情表達(dá)得很充分。此外,幾個(gè)表達(dá)法也相當(dāng)?shù)氐?、出彩,比如?live up to one’s expectations 表示自己的決心,使得整篇文章的感情更加飽滿、真摯,給人留下了深刻的印象。在情真意切的同時(shí),我們還要格外注意文章的詳略和條理。 want to say thanks/thank owe my progress/success to your owe you a lot for your help/what you’ve done for ’ll never forget your help and i will remember all the happy times we shared hope you can be happy/healthy, wish you good luck/health!dear miss wang:i’m glad to write to are such a kind and easygoing teacher that we all like remember that at first i hated learning new english words very much and i even wanted to give you noticed this, you had a talk with told me some good ways to remember those words and encouraged me never to give ’ve made great progress in english and now i’m a top student in want to say will work harder in the hope you can be happy and healthy ,linda點(diǎn)評(píng):本文信息點(diǎn)齊全,層次比較清楚,語言比較通順,句式也有一定的變化。dear miss wang,i’m glad to write to this moment, words can no longer express my kind and responsible can a teacher be? you just gave me the perfect can clearly remember how much i hated learning new english words at be honest, i really wanted to give soon as you noticed this, you offered to help me by telling me some shortcuts to learn never failed to encourage me even when i made only a little by little, my interest in english grew and now i’m a top student in want to say thanks to will work harder in the future to live up to your hope you can be happy and healthy xiaoming點(diǎn)評(píng):這篇修改后的作文無論在語言表達(dá)以及文章內(nèi)涵方面都是相當(dāng)優(yōu)秀的。文章的幾個(gè)過渡語也是恰到好處: to be honest, little by little等,均在一定程度上增強(qiáng)了文章的連貫性。在北京,xx有兩個(gè)家,一個(gè)是小小的家,爸爸、媽媽和xx。每次送孩子都挺晚了,我們都不好意思。當(dāng)女兒穿著漂亮的衣服,站在寫滿了祝福語的小黑板前,站在插了四支蠟燭的蛋糕面前,滿臉激動(dòng),站在那里驚訝的享受著幼兒園為她準(zhǔn)備的慶祝儀式,小朋友們真摯的言語,老師會(huì)心的鼓勵(lì)和旁邊媽媽的祝福。在這里我們要特別感謝陳老師、y老師和小z老師。是你們認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)的工作作風(fēng)一直幫助著我們地方企業(yè),也感染著企業(yè)員工,正是你們這種嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)墓ぷ髯黠L(fēng)為地方穩(wěn)定、社會(huì)和諧提供了有力保障。信的開頭和落款已給出,不計(jì)詞數(shù)。:書信:You, I:因?yàn)槭腔貞洠砸砸话氵^去時(shí)為主。結(jié)尾處,對(duì)于老師的感謝和祝福也就水到渠成,感情真摯、自然。第二段首句的設(shè)問句How kind and responsible can a teacher be? 更是精彩。第三篇:給老師寫感謝信給老師寫感謝信1親愛的父母朋友:你們好!我是李陽,瘋狂英語的創(chuàng)始人。在未來的歲月當(dāng)中,我們將一起研究和實(shí)踐更加科學(xué)、更加有效的家庭教育方案。給老師寫感謝信2X老師:老師,我想對(duì)您說一句:謝謝。那時(shí),就連我們班的最調(diào)皮的男生,都覺得您不在沒有能依靠的肩膀。您從來沒有罰過我們站,更沒有打過我們。我們真的好開心??!老師,您就像一個(gè)家庭中的家長,而我們,就是您的孩子。老師,你曾為同學(xué)討回過公道。老師,您是我們的蠟燭,是我們的園丁,與此同時(shí),您,更是我們的老師!祝:工作順利!幸??鞓?!此致敬禮!學(xué)生:xx時(shí)間:xx給老師寫感謝信3尊敬的學(xué)校領(lǐng)導(dǎo),徐老師,你們好:首先,讓我代表一年級(jí)二班全體家長向你們表示最衷心的感謝!我的孩子是精忠街小學(xué)一年級(jí)二班的一名學(xué)生,從去年九月份入校以來,在學(xué)校各位領(lǐng)導(dǎo)、老師特別是班主任徐老師的辛勤培養(yǎng)教育下,孩子得到健康 快樂的成長,從孩子的言談舉止看得出孩子的學(xué)習(xí)和道德品質(zhì)都得到極大提高。退一步徐老師她也可以坐在辦公室,讓別的老 師照看孩子,是她的那份執(zhí)著和敬業(yè),那份對(duì)孩子的全心全意的愛,讓她做出 這些。俗話說,有良師指導(dǎo),如浴春風(fēng),一邊聽著朱老師風(fēng)趣幽默的課,一邊遵循朱老師的方法一步一步推進(jìn),拋棄掉原來復(fù)習(xí)時(shí)不知所措一團(tuán)亂麻的無序狀態(tài),感受到春風(fēng)般的輕松和自如。在大方向明確的前提下,朱老師還不停地講述各種范文,對(duì)學(xué)生進(jìn)行開導(dǎo),而且20節(jié)課中每一篇講義中都有一篇范文,其中第八講是作文的專題講座,詞句結(jié)構(gòu)文學(xué)藝術(shù)非常精彩,中英文都有,按照朱老師的方法,我把講義中的所有范文背得滾瓜爛熟,而且平時(shí)練習(xí)寫作時(shí)有意識(shí)地進(jìn)行了加工、改寫和范文例句的運(yùn)用,在正式考試時(shí),驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)寫作起來非常自如,一下就把平時(shí)好的例句運(yùn)用進(jìn)去了,整個(gè)文章一氣呵成。時(shí)光太窄,指縫太寬,三年無聲從指縫溜走,留下滿滿一手心的回憶。還記得您帶著我們進(jìn)行讀書報(bào)告會(huì),鼓勵(lì)我們參加校內(nèi)外比賽,課前二分鐘演講,鍛煉我們的演講能力。我,以及八班所有考上五十八的同學(xué),都將竭盡全力,沖刺名校,希望我們能成為您的驕傲。中秋節(jié)快樂。此致敬禮!Xxx20xx年x月x日給老師寫感謝信6xx幼兒園及中二班xx老師及各位老師:你們!我們是xx的父母,時(shí)間真快,轉(zhuǎn)眼間xx在幼兒園已經(jīng)度過了近三年的時(shí)間了,通過這三年的集體生活,我們的孩子能夠適應(yīng)幼兒園生活,各方面都有了不少的進(jìn)步,這是我們一家人最感開心的事,十分感謝幼兒園中二班全體老師們對(duì)xx的愛心、關(guān)懷、辛勤的付出和幫助。她們一天10多個(gè)小時(shí)連續(xù)工作,而且整天與孩子們相伴左右,不僅要教授教育教學(xué)課程,而且是吃喝拉撒睡全照顧,工作量很大,真是太辛苦了,但你們毫無怨言,總是滿面笑容的把快樂帶給孩子,是他們的“媽媽”。