【正文】 Important as it is to you, you really shouldn39。Use the following points as a reference Are you glad to be a member of ……？What do you do in it?How do you feel as such a member? 例文：1I’m a Member of the Singing and Dancing ClubHello, everyone! I’m very glad to be a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. I’m an actor in the club. I like singing and dancing very much. I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day. It makes me feel very happy.2In this world, every family has a mother, a father, a daughter or a son. For plenty of people, families are very important .when you are very said, you can found one or two persons to make you feel happiness, this is you family. I am very gold to bee my family member, because I have a pretty good parent and a fairly younger brother. When I e back, I always feel freedom and relaxed. My mother is a kind cook。t think so. Our teacher said, School is your home, you should keep it clean. But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?2 One possible versionI want to do something for my school I39。)(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。 There’s no need to do 沒必要做意思也能更流暢地表達。 5. 都是簡單句，缺少復合句。 應當多描述提示的內容或加以想像，不能只翻譯了事。先劃檔次：A檔 18~15分 B檔 ~12分 C檔 ~8分 D檔 ~0分然后再仔細批閱看有否語法錯誤,最后給出總分。首先是字數(shù)，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。以下為上海中考英語作文官方評分標準：。內容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚完整。，也就是我們常說的文采分。： 1. 內容空洞，沒有清晰的思路，表達能力不強，總是用一些不合適的句子內容來表達，所以可能讓老師覺得理由或是內容太假，當然也就得不了高分。 3. 總是使用同一個主語寫句子，重復太多。多用狀語從句，賓語從句，定語從句及一些重要的句型，也 人教版新目標初二下英語同步輔導（一）初中二年級下un...初中二年級下Un...可以用用被動語態(tài)。四． 中考寫作高頻使用詞組、句法As we all know, As it is known to all, It’s known to all that… It’s mon knowledge that… It’s monly accepted that… There is no denying that… How time flies! In a blink of an eye, Time flies like a speeding arrow, Time goes like the flowing water. 中間分層部分的有用結構: 分正反兩面論述:On one hand, On the other hand 分兩點：For one thing, For another, 分三點：Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least 結尾部分 All in all, In a word, In conclusion, In brief, In short, To put everything in a shell, 概括的說，簡單的說 Last but not least 組織語言 發(fā)表觀點的 In my opinion, From my point of view, In my eyes, As far as I am concerned, Believe it or not, 表示遞進的 In addition Furthermore More importantly What’s more Moreover 其他與“我”有關的寫作材料 重點句型 It`s+a. for do sth. So +a./ad. That such a +a.+n. that too…to do Not….until That’s why+句子 那是。 It goes without saying that+句子 毫無疑問 Intend to do/plan to do Be going to do Decide to do Determine to do=be determine to do Make up one’s mind to do 表示想/希望 Want to do=would like to do Hope to do Expect to do Wish to do Consider doing 其他有用的短語 From now on/sooner or later/in the near future Have positive attitude towards/enrich my knowledge/learn…by heart/ Meet with various kinds of difficulties /face difficulties bravely/overe the difficulties Play an important role/part in…. 其他有用的句式 For the reason above,/After all/As for me,/Frankly speaking/Generally speaking/Believe it or not,/As a Grade Nine student,/The reasons are as follows, People’s view on…vary from person to person 增添亮點 使用復合句和諺語 諺語舉例 I firmly believe that “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”. As a famous saying goes, “A man bees learned by asking questions.” It’s mon knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. An old saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.” 五．20022013 上海中考英語作文題目集錦2002 My favorite thing(s) 我的心愛之物 2003 To be a lovely Shanghainese 做一個可愛的上海人 2004 Leave School 畢業(yè)時分 2005 Growing pains and gains 成長的煩惱 2006 I have a dream 我有一個夢 2007 A Story about My Parent(s) 一個關于我父/母的故事 2008 Love Around Me 愛在我身邊 2009 I want to do something for my school 我想為我的學校做點什么 2010 I39。)Use the following points as a reference. (以下內容僅供參考)l What do you want to do for your school?2m leaving my school. I want to plant a tree in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. If I plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will do as me. In their spare time, the students can read under the trees.2010命題作文上海中考英語作文題:I39。 she has lots of experience in cooking, so my brother and I are healthy. As a daughter， I shouldn39。t care too much about the result and get yourself overly upset. Remember all the hard work you have put in! As long as you go with a calm mind and a positive attitude, I39。請談談你在生活中怎樣進行自我保護(可 結合生活中的某一個情景或具體事例，如：面對災難如何自救，如何預防受騙或侵 害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等)。t panic and calm down. Secondly, find some safe place to stay and don39。 How to protect/save our environment/world? As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse /more and more seriously today. Water is polluted。 參考詞匯：禁令 ban 意識 awareness 提倡 advocate The problem of white pollution caused by used plastic is being increasingly serious, in which plastic shopping bags play an important role. In China about three billion plastic shopping bags are consumed every day, which results in a great waste of resources and heavy environmental pollution. Luckily, the government has put a nationwide ban on the use of free plastic bags, demanding that all stores and supermarkets not provide customers with free plastic bags after June 1. I agree with the rule, which people can?t get the free plastic b