【正文】 r, my teacher Mr. Li always smailed to me. She offen talk to me. You like athletic,like jodan. I feel happy. She tall me when class is over, don39。s Day, my teachers.In the evening, all of my classmates and I make a party for our teachers. In the party, each of us give prerents to teachers and hope them feeling happy and heathy. Then, teachers and us play together. All of us feel very happy.s home. What he made us known are not only some difficult questions but also the core for science, the love for science and the courage to think and to ask questions. In berief, Mr. Wang made us enjoy scince rather than work just to win the game.Today I am studying in university. I39。窗體底端窗體頂端t focus on the books. I wasn39。11 points 清清楚楚型d like to express my innermost appreciation and gratefulness to all the teachers in the world!Teachers are the elevators of human souls. I still remember how my teachers pulled me through a critical moment. I did a bad job in the first preparation test for the college entrance examination and I was considerably depressed. Then my teachers came to my rescue! Patiently, my English teacher analysed the paper word by word and encouraged me to carry on. My Chemistry teacher also gave me a precious gift. He told me not to be obsessed with the test results and encouraged me to find fun in learning. Their help enabled me to survive the petition and will surely benefit me in the future.Perhaps I39。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2分——條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤5分——基本切題。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：本題滿(mǎn)分為15分閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過(guò)語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)。評(píng)分原則1． CET是檢查考生是否達(dá)到大學(xué)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)大綱規(guī)定的四、六級(jí)教學(xué)要求，對(duì)作文的評(píng)判應(yīng)以此要求為準(zhǔn)則。2． CET作文題采用總體評(píng)分(Global Scoring)方法，閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分(Reward scores), 而不是按語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤數(shù)目扣分。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達(dá)思想，也要考慮是否用英語(yǔ)清楚而合適地表達(dá)思想，也就是要考慮語(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤是否造成理解上的障礙。各有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣卷一至二份。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。11分——切題。[注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無(wú)法表達(dá)思想，則給0分。 Teacher39。ll never have a chance to repay all that I have received from my teachers. But I39。Teacher39。t confident about my ability. The idea of giving up even occurred to me. My teacher noticed my anxiety. Then she encouraged me and advised me a lot. She told me how she overcame the obstacles of life when she was faced up with important affairs. Her words touched me a lot. And I began to face the exam with full courage and confidence. Luckily I achieved my exams successfully. I know it’s the result of my teacher39。8 points 馬馬虎虎型Today is teacher39。ll always remember what Mr. Wang taughter us, I will work hard on my studies and remind myself to work for the benefit of humans.I also remember when I was in my midschool, my English teacher help me to study English. At that time, my English is very very poor. Although I studied it day and night, it seemed worthier and worthier. Then my English teacher told me that the way I studying is worry. He told me the right way and help me friendly everyday. With his help, my English became better and better. Teachers are also friends for us. I think I must study hard to repay my teacher.t do it in class. We can play together when our class is