【正文】 brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（難題） In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建議）【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富，表達了所有要點，語言表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。【點睛】本文要求以“Bikesharing”為題，根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文，表達自己對共享單車的看法和建議。s our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.Love,Amy【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do some housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，make the bed，take care of，how to do等。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。提示：1. 體育鍛煉2. 上下樓梯3. 交朋結(jié)友4. 食品衛(wèi)生要求： 1. 語句通順，表達準確，內(nèi)容連貫；2．短文可以適當發(fā)揮；但要包含以上要點。s important to remember these for us all.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。要點提示 :,做好筆記。注意 :。Dear Sam ,I39。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。寫作時應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能按照漢語的思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達流暢。這一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話對整篇文章做了總結(jié)。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。提示：1）What’s the benefit （好處） of outdoor activities? （12 opinions）2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （12 examples）3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練、要點齊全。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。提示詞語：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問題：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39?！驹斀狻?，用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己堅持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時，描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以“向時代楷模學習”為主題的英語征文活動。高分亮點：短語：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。所以在學習和生活中，我們要滿懷希望、努力奔跑、追逐夢想。Dream ChaserAs we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream e true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇材料作文。：高分短語：feel satisfied；feel upset；e true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。目前數(shù)量在減少，因為：1）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。參考詞匯：哺乳動物mammal。文章共分為三個方面的內(nèi)容，首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護的大象我們應該如何去做。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。請據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論，并闡述你的觀點。注意不要遺漏要點，所寫的句子應該符合英語語法，不能是漢語式的句子，要使用一些高級詞匯及句式。用了賓語從句，如：Most students believe it’s n