【正文】 第一篇：英語六級(jí)作文訓(xùn)練一、1 目前很多人報(bào)考研究生我認(rèn)為形成這股熱潮的原因是?? 3 自擬標(biāo)題 題目分析：研究生，作為找到一份好工作的有力籌碼，更是處于經(jīng)濟(jì)危機(jī)水深火熱中畢業(yè)生們的一個(gè)熱門選擇，因此本文可圍繞考研的種種好處以及結(jié)合經(jīng)濟(jì)危機(jī)進(jìn)行討論。引用參考例文：The Postgraduate CrazeEach year, millions of college students will sit in for the postgraduate entrance and more students have regarded the pursuing of a master degree as an indispensable part of their is to account for their enthusiasm for a postgraduate diploma? First, it is the demand of the an age of knowledge updating and information explosion, what you have learned in college can hardly meet the demand of of high quality who are equipped with the latest knowledge and skill will be needed more than is why many students will further their , we all recognize that the more education you have, the more likely you are to with those without a master degree, masters will enjoy more preferential treatment, for example, better salaries, more opportunities for promotion and postgraduate degree can guarantee a more promising but not least, with the graduation of a large number of college students, petition for jobs bees more and more way to gain some advantage over others is to have a higher wonder millions of students will consider pursuing a postgraduate ：postgraduate entrance examination 研究生入學(xué)考試 入學(xué)考試有很多 如高考。college(or university)entrance examinationpursue vt 追求 名詞格式 pursuit 有部電影不就叫 The Pursuit of Happyness當(dāng)幸福來敲門indispensable, 必需的，在討論某種積極事物時(shí)候都可以用到!account for說明〔解釋〕?原因an age of knowledge updating and information explosion 一個(gè)知識(shí)不斷更新和信息爆炸的時(shí)代 同樣，也可作為套語使用。preferential treatment 優(yōu)惠待遇No wonder millions of students will consider pursuing a postgraduate ，別嫌老土，實(shí)用拿分才是王道啊~~從文章結(jié)構(gòu)看，首先闡明考研熱現(xiàn)象，然后分析考研熱并羅列三點(diǎn)原因，尾巴點(diǎn)睛!注意套語的熟練使用，此類文章層次感極為重要，要讓改卷老師對(duì)你的文章結(jié)構(gòu)一目了然~二、Relationship Between Major and Future Job 現(xiàn)在很多人工作的具體內(nèi)容和其在大學(xué)所學(xué)的專業(yè)知識(shí)相關(guān)性并不大。出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因。我的看法題目分析：被迫學(xué)習(xí)自己不喜歡的專業(yè)絕對(duì)是種痛苦，Chance對(duì)此略有體會(huì)。寫作可先從所學(xué)專業(yè)和未來工作之間關(guān)系開始討論，接著羅列出現(xiàn)該現(xiàn)象的原因，如盲目報(bào)考熱門專業(yè)，未真正找到自身興趣所在等等。最后，給出自己觀點(diǎn)，本文最好采用正面觀點(diǎn)：盡管專業(yè)不對(duì)口，自己也要適應(yīng)。引用參考例文：Relationship Between Major and Future JobIt’s a striking fact that there isn’t necesary relationship between one’s major and specific job duties for majority of people condemn this on outdated education system an some even plain that textbooks are phenomenon exists for a number of of all , it’s a mon sense that there alwasys exists a gap between theory and gap needs to be bridged by continuous exporation of similarities and differences between these two factors and accordingly corresponding , due to the rapid development of technology, the knowledge from textbooks bees behind the times it will lead to the disassociation between what one acquired in college education and what he does at my point of view, when faced with the disassociation, one should adapt himself to working environment as soon as possible by adjusting his own information ’s more important, lifelong learing is essential to one’s career after one reached the required levels from college education curriculum, pursuit of knowledge should never be but not the least, we should bear this firmly in mind that one’s ability is valued much more than one’s academic 、Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position on the topic Employment Pressure Facing College should write at least 150 words, and base your position on the outline(given in Chinese)below:1)目前大學(xué)生面臨就業(yè)難的問題2)分析導(dǎo)致該問題的原因3)大學(xué)生應(yīng)該如何應(yīng)對(duì)該問題Employment Pressure Facing College Students ______________________________________________________________【行文思路】本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)提出一個(gè)問題，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析該問題產(chǎn)生的原因，提綱第3的要求說明應(yīng)該如何解決該問題，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問題解決型作文。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的問題。分析導(dǎo)致該問題的原因。從大學(xué)生的角度說明應(yīng)該如何應(yīng)對(duì)該問題?！緝?yōu)秀范文】Employment Pressure Facing College Students[1]About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after their graduation.[1]But now, things are ’s university students usually experience great difficulties finding satisfactory often plain that graduation means joblessness.[2]What is the cause of this phenomenon?[3]Firstly, with the enrollment extension of universities, [4]the supply of university graduates exceeds social results in a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job.[3]Secondly, university students [5]tend to spend most of their time at school in studying academic subjects and lack relevant job experience.[3]Thirdly, some students don’t study hard during the four years of university life, they haven’t gained the knowledge those fairly good jobs or positions require.[6]Facing the increasingly fierce petition, we university students should try our bests to change this situation.[3]Above all, when in school, we should make the most of our time and [7]put our heart into our studies.[3]What’s more, we can take parttime jobs and attend social activities in our spare time to [8]accumulate relevant practical experience.[3]Besides, when we apply for jobs after graduation, we should [9]attach more importance to accumulating experience than to the starting salary.【作文點(diǎn)評(píng)】[1]過去和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行對(duì)比。[2]設(shè)問句引出原因，容易引起注意。[3]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。[4]“大學(xué)生供過于求”。[5]“傾向，趨于”。[6]“面對(duì)日趨激烈的競(jìng)爭”，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。[7]“用心學(xué)習(xí)”。[8]“積累相關(guān)的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)”。[9]“更加關(guān)注”。佳句臨?。篎acing the increasingly fierce petition, university students should try their best to change this ：經(jīng)歷過艱苦，我們就會(huì)更懂得如何應(yīng)對(duì)危機(jī)。：They should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to their starting salary臨?。汉茱@然，我們應(yīng)該更加關(guān)注一個(gè)人的能力，而不是他的學(xué)歷?！綤EY】 experienced hardships, we will know better how to survive