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作文 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 2 分 — 條理不清,思路紊亂,語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤,且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。 5 分 — 基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚,連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 8 分 — 基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚,文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多,其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。 11 分 — 切題。表達(dá)思想清楚,文字連貫,但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 14 分 — 切題。表達(dá)思想清楚,文字通順,連貫性較好,基本上無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。字?jǐn)?shù)不足應(yīng)酌情扣分: Part One 背誦范文 1. 觀點(diǎn)類作文 對(duì)命運(yùn)的兩種看法 自己的觀點(diǎn) 結(jié)論:命運(yùn)掌握在自己的手中 My View on Fate Different people have different views on fate. Some people think that fate is predestined and nobody can change it, while others argue that everybody is the master of his fate and he can change it with his own hands. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe all men are born equal and nobody is destined to always succeed or fail in his life. For another, if a person is diligent and determined, he will realize his dream no matter how poor, humble or unlucky he may be. Just think of Nobel, who invented dynamite after countless experiments during which lost his brother and got seriously injured himself. Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely e to the conclusion that there is no such thing as destined fate in our life. Only if we hold on to our dream can we turn it into reality, just as the saying goes, ― Everybody is the architect of his own fortune.‖ 2. 利弊類 家教的好處 家教的壞處 結(jié)論 Advantages and Disadvantages of Family Tutoring Recently more and more people begin to engage family tutors for their children. They argue that family tutoring brings several advantages. First, family tutoring can help weak students to keep up with others in class. Second, the society is developing at a high speed and family tutoring can help the child make preparations for the future petition. Family tutoring also brings many problems. Firstly, students may not wele family tutoring at all because many of them are already overburdened. Secondly, the quality of the teacher and teaching remains a potential problem, as the main aim of most tutors is to earn money. Finally, the student may depend too much on family tutoring and ov