【正文】 【英語】人教版英語專題訓練 中考英語書面表達1一、中考英語書面表達（含答案詳細解析）1． 最近一份學生體質(zhì)健康調(diào)查結(jié)果顯示，學生近視率仍維持在高位水平，且越來越低齡化。請根據(jù)下表所提示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表自己的觀點?，F(xiàn) 狀大約70%學生眼睛近視主要原因1. 睡眠不足2. 長時間看書、做作業(yè)、用電腦等預防方法1. 做眼睛保健操，多進行體育活動2. 養(yǎng)成正確的用眼習慣你的觀點… ….（至少一條）參考詞匯：近視的 shortsighted要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個。（2）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use puters for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。根據(jù)題干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時寫作，人稱用第三人稱復數(shù)和第一人稱。內(nèi)容包括：學生近視原因：（not enough）、做作業(yè)、用電腦等（for a long time）防止近視的方法：，多進行體育活動（eye exercises）（have the good habit of）個人觀點：如：我認為，我們應(yīng)該了解保護眼睛的重要性，盡最大努力保護我們的眼睛。（I think ???；try one39。s best to do sth.）。常用的重點句型和短語有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。2．書面表達社會需要愛，時代呼喚愛。對善行、對愛心的感動，存在于每個人的心中。但很多人缺乏的不是感動，而是一種顯示感動的勇氣。請為你身邊的人或事點贊，讓“點贊”成為傳遞正能量的一種行動吧！是什么行為讓你點贊？講述一件你點贊的事情。你從他/她身上可以學到什么？讓我們一起分享吧！請根據(jù)以下提示要點，寫一篇文章。注意：1．詞數(shù)：80左右；2．不要出現(xiàn)真實的人名及校名。Make a list of the persons that you should give a “l(fā)ike” buttonTell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “l(fā)ike” buttonWhat could you learn from him/her? 【答案】I should give my uncle a “l(fā)ike” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，講述一件我點贊的事情，我從他/她身上可以學到什么。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我要點贊的人，接下來介紹他的情況，最后指出我從他身上學到的東西。此處give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。3．安全對每個人都很重要。請根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語小短文。提示：1. 體育鍛煉2. 上下樓梯3. 交朋結(jié)友4. 食品衛(wèi)生要求： 1. 語句通順，表達準確，內(nèi)容連貫；2．短文可以適當發(fā)揮；但要包含以上要點。3．詞數(shù)：80—100詞。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us _____________________________________________【答案】Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we sh