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Three times resettlement by Meng39。s Mother 孟母三遷孟母: 孟柯:第一幕:A: B: C: D:第二幕:A: B: C: D:第三幕:A: B: C: D: A: B: C: D: T: 孟母 : Hello,boys and girls . I’m a motherMengzi’s mother. I like my he is very naughty. I want to teach my son how to be a helpful man. 孟柯: I’m Meng Zi. I like my mum,too. I am going to my school! 蹦蹦跳跳,歌曲起來:小呀嘛小兒郎呀,背著了書包上學(xué)堂,不怕太陽曬也不怕那風(fēng)雨狂.....一遷 第一幕Ken: Look,what are they doing now? 一群孩子圍在一個桌子打牌A: 老K B: 2王 C: 小王 D: 我的是大王!哈哈,I’m a winner! HahaChildren A: Hey! Are you new here? I39。ve never seen you here before.Ken: Yeah. Mm...My mom and I have just moved here yesterday. My name is Ken.Children B: I am you!A: You can call me Danny.B:We are playing an interesting game, do you want to join us?Ken: What kind of game?Children: Play cards!Please join us!Come here,e here!Ken: OK! 起牌后說:三帶一,B:5炸! C: 我8炸!D: 我王炸~!Haha,give me your money!Ken: Oh,It’s time to go home!Mom: Ken, why your classes over so late?Ken: Oh, We leave school very early . I went to play games. It39。s really fun.Mom: Oh? Is it? What did you play?Ken: Mom, I am so hungry, let me have something to eat, then, I will tell you.Mom: Ok, Ok, Ok, meal first~ 母端飯上。孟軻狼吞虎咽吃飯。Ken: I am full.Mom: So can you tell me now?Ken: Well, we play cards! I’m the is my money!hahaMom: There is so many kinds of game, why do you prefer this?Ken: My friends like to play this game together ,so I like it,too.室外。三個男童歡快上。一齊呼喊孟軻。A:Ken,let39。s play cards!B:Year~Let39。s have fun.Ken: I am ing. I am ing~Mom: Hey! Ken! Don39。t play that game. Come back! 四個兒童歡快下。Mom: We can39。t live here any more, we have to move as soon as possible.二 遷 移動另外一個地方第二幕Ken: Mom, I have to go for school now.Mom: Be careful on your way to school. Listen carefully on class. Don39。t fight with others. Back home early. Remember?Ken: Mom, don39。t keep chattering.(啰嗦,嘮叨)Mom: Back home as soon as your classes over. Don39。t play here and there, got it?Ken: Ok, I got it. No play.Mom: I will buy some meet for you!Ken: Wonderful! We haven39。t eaten any meat for half a year !Mom: If you study hard, I surely buy some meat for you.Ken: Of course !I will study hard. I am dying to eat meat. Oh~ I am going to eat meat!柯背書包歡快下。孟母仍織絹。Mom: Since we had move here, Ken has not play cards any more. It seems that I made a right decision.Mom: It39。s time to cook the meal.(下。)柯背著書包去上學(xué)時看見:一群孩子圍著桌子喝lA: OK,let’s drink,let’s drink!B: Great,感情淺,舔一舔,感情深,一口悶! 碰杯后說大家齊聲說cheers!C:各位,我先干了!D: Hey,who are you?Ken:I’m new here!My name is Ken. A:B: Wele ! First time strangers, second time friends! Please join here! Mom: Evening is ing, where is Ken ? I have to go and find him.(出屋)Mom: Ken!Ken! Where are you?Ken Ken ,Where are you ? (驚奇狀)咿 What are they doing? It’s too noisy. Oh,They are drinking! Is this my sonKen? 柯醉倒在椅子上呼呼大睡!Oh,My god! He is drunk! Mom: Ken,Ken!邊輕輕拍怕兒子的臉邊喊!Wake up ! Wake up! Ken :有點醒了,但嘴里念叨著:喝,我們繼續(xù)喝,哥兩好,一口干??!被母親拖回家了。Mom:We can39。t live here any more, we have to move as soon as possible.三遷 第三幕母與柯一起搬家,背著書和一把椅子。走了一圈后,發(fā)現(xiàn)一群學(xué)生朗朗讀書不絕于耳(播放學(xué)生誦讀國學(xué)錄音帶)。Mom:Good,good! Here is a nice place . Mum:Hey,the girl,Where we are?Girl: This is my Zhilan school! I like my school! It’s very good!全體齊聲:Yes!We like our school!Ken,please join us!孟軻歡快上,和同伴們一起讀起書來。Mum: 看了一會兒,終于滿意地笑了說:We finally move to a right place. So much the living environment affects the child.Teacher:There is an old saying that He that lies down with dogs must rise up with fleas.” 近朱者赤近墨者黑! 齊聲唱芷蘭的校歌,音樂減小,演員謝幕下臺!請以“冬日暖陽”為題,寫一篇不少于800字的記敘文?!敬鸢浮? 冬日暖陽周六的陽光,比往日燦爛,此刻的心情,更是陽光明媚。初冬的天氣,這個時節(jié)反倒比起那秋雨綿綿的深秋,斷斷續(xù)續(xù)淅淅瀝瀝時更讓人感到了些許冬日陽光的溫暖。陽光從窗戶穿過,把溫暖灑進房間,飄窗上那盆蘭花在陽光下似乎也比往日翠綠了許多。房間在陽光燦爛中比秋日里亮堂了不少,一個人,在周末遲到的早餐后,靜靜地懶散在彌漫著陽光的空間。往日的時光匆匆,這一刻,都已在秋風(fēng)里飄逝于綠意再顯的鄉(xiāng)間。默默無語,也沒有什么干擾。身邊的收音機里若有若無的聲音傳遞著遠(yuǎn)方的信息,把寂靜悄悄地擠出。這個愜意的時刻,一個人在這冬日的陽光明媚里,放松著每每緊繃的身心,靜靜享受陽光與悠然。獨處,獨處一室,獨自悠閑,遠(yuǎn)離工作、遠(yuǎn)離喧囂,不必遠(yuǎn)足、任思緒在陽光充沛的空間飄蕩。留外陽光下拂過的初冬的風(fēng)只是這思緒的伴舞。很久沒有這樣享受過陽光燦爛,心情明媚于天氣的時光了。不由自主地回想起多年前鄉(xiāng)村秋冬時節(jié)農(nóng)閑之際,一起從小玩耍、上學(xué)的小伙伴們可以在這樣的周末或是放學(xué)的午后,場院里漫無目地游蕩、懶洋洋地沐浴陽光下。也會村前村后、溝里涯上穿梭在落葉滿地的林間,踩著枯黃的落葉,欣賞陽光下,風(fēng)里兀自挺立的樹木迎風(fēng)昂首。過去的好時光,遠(yuǎn)去的無憂童年,已經(jīng)成為心底美好的回憶,每每于空閑時憶起,心中總會漾起淡淡的甜蜜。冬日的陽光,向來都是溫暖、溫柔的,天氣晴朗的日子,找個背風(fēng)的角落,一杌、一凳,一磚、一墊就是休閑的時光。你可以如我此刻一樣獨自而處,也可以邀三五好友,閑諞、吹牛,更可以帶一副撲克,把陽光盡享。時光靜靜地流過歲月,歲月悄悄地把痕跡刻在曾經(jīng)青春無限的額頭。冬日的陽光還是那樣燦爛,還是那樣溫暖,沐浴著初冬的陽光,心境已不再是當(dāng)初的無憂無慮,只是多了放松、多了幾份悠然。冬日的陽光,緩緩從窗口向西挪去,室內(nèi)的陽光漸漸淡去,我知道陽光只是正在外墻上踱步。心中的陽光一直在溫柔地溫暖著。身邊收音機里的聲音依然傳送著遠(yuǎn)方的訊息。靜靜的,我享受著冬日暖陽,感受周末的悠閑時光……【解析】試題分析:這是一道比喻性的作文題目,首先要明白其寓意是什么,然后展開自己想象的翅膀,尋覓可以表達(dá)其寓意的材料。一個比喻,多個本體。審好題:從生活體驗和成長感悟中為題目喻體找出多個本體,“冬日”可以指遭受打擊而陷入失意、痛苦之中的日子?!芭枴笨梢灾竵碜圆煌说?、不同形式的理解、支持、關(guān)心、照顧、鼓勵等等,寫出一段艱辛,道出一份溫暖。一個本體,多維立意。立好意:作文只有一個立意,可腦海中“一意”孤行不會產(chǎn)生最佳思路,應(yīng)該優(yōu)中選優(yōu)。多維立意,立意之間進行競選,讓最好的立意主宰全文。如,一般以為送溫暖是單向的,不如雙向解讀,送人玫瑰手有余芳,“幫助別人快樂自己”。 一個立意,多材給力。選好材:“冬日暖陽”,可以是失意時父母為你端上的那一杯熱熱的牛奶,是沮喪時老師向你投來的那一束鼓勵的目光,是迷茫時偶像為你帶來的那一股榜樣的力量,是痛苦時書籍為你呈現(xiàn)的一篇鎮(zhèn)痛的華章……可以敘述一個事例,也可多個素材并舉。點睛:命題作文常用化實為虛法立意,尤其是以一些比喻性的句子或詞語做題目。有些作文的題目是生活具體可感的事物,寫起來很難出彩,這樣就可以化實為虛,把真實事物變?yōu)榫唧w的事件來立意,立意的關(guān)鍵是找到真實事物和虛擬的內(nèi)容的相似點。如此題“冬日暖陽”可以看做是“一句讓人警醒的話語”“父母的關(guān)懷”等。這樣就降低了難度。閱讀下面的材料,根據(jù)要求寫一篇不少于800字的文章。請以“為你喝彩”寫一篇不少于800字的記敘文?!敬鸢浮繛槟愫炔示酃鉄粼谖枧_中央為他灑下淡淡陰影,樸素而純真的裝束與其他表演者全然不同。開口間,恬靜的聲音中帶有些許灑脫,誠摯而自然,穿透了每一縷光,每一絲空氣。他的臺風(fēng)隨意放松,從不會可以抑制自我,歌中的情感總能毫無遮掩的表達(dá),唱出最真的自我,他是《快樂男聲》的冠軍——華晨宇,在這個夏天,教會了我們太多。他第一首歌特殊的曲風(fēng)遭到了外界的質(zhì)疑,但他從來沒有放棄,我們明白,雖然他依然用最溫暖的笑容面對他人,當(dāng)記者詢問時告訴大家他不在乎外界質(zhì)疑,但在付出努力后換來失敗又何曾沒有失望。時間在減少,唯一不變的是他真摯稚氣的笑。人生像在故意刁難他,一首用盡精力花盡心力的演唱換來卻是與付出完全不成正比的評價,連微笑幅度都比別人大的他流下了淚水,大大的黑框眼鏡下累積了多久,在離開與停留的邊緣忍耐著一次次創(chuàng)傷,紅紅的眼眶攔不住情感的沖刷,半忍著,顫抖了聲音。他也曾懷疑過自我,也曾迷茫,但他知道,有更多的人看著他,關(guān)注他,再累也要走下去,要想成功,只有受得了孤獨,耐得住寂寞。大賽那晚,或許冠軍本就與他無緣,比賽前的他還在醫(yī)院治療,沙啞著嗓子唱下每一首歌,我們能感受到,他堅持著牽動每一個音。忘我地感受每一個節(jié)奏。但神態(tài)中卻隱藏著苦,將最完美的自我留給他人。冠軍即將宣布,或許他并不是最完美的,但在我眼中,他一定最優(yōu)秀的,我默默等待著聽到熟悉的名字。當(dāng)主持人的宣布與其對應(yīng),在放松的同時,興奮的沖動將原先的緊張擔(dān)憂抹去,他的一次次堅持努力浮現(xiàn)于眼前,他的投入讓他在唱到高潮時吶喊,流淚,不能句句平穩(wěn),但卻字字用心。人生也正如此,挫折危險在奮斗勇敢面前只能成