【正文】 中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)測(cè)試題（A）﹙含答案﹚一、中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1．書(shū)面表達(dá)假定你是李華，最近你們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行了討論，你的英國(guó)朋友Peppa向你來(lái)信詢問(wèn)討論情況。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)封回信，簡(jiǎn)單介紹以下討論結(jié)果：1．節(jié)水節(jié)電． 2．垃圾分類(lèi) 3．少用紙巾，重拾手帕4．步行、騎自行車(chē)或公交出行、參考詞匯：low carbon低碳；tissue紙巾詞數(shù)：100詞左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on lowcarbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on lowcarbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，向我的英國(guó)朋友Peppa寫(xiě)信，介紹我們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行的討論情況?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：We can do……，we’d better……，we suggest……，which contributes to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭我要介紹我們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行了討論，接下來(lái)介紹我們?yōu)榈吞忌羁梢宰龅氖隆４颂巃sk about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。2．書(shū)面表達(dá) 初三的學(xué)習(xí)生活繁忙中有困惑、淚水，也有進(jìn)步、喜悅。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提示，寫(xiě)一篇題為“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介紹九年級(jí)的學(xué)校生活，并提出希望和建議。在校老師工作認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)，充滿愛(ài)心學(xué)生…… （至少發(fā)揮兩點(diǎn)）周末作業(yè)作業(yè)多．舍棄愛(ài)好其它活動(dòng)鍛煉，電視愿望…… （發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)）要求：1．所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：2．文章不少于90詞，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3．語(yǔ)意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now. 【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can39。t afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more