【正文】 【英語】九年級下冊英語書面表達易錯剖析含解析一、英語書面表達1． 如今，很多城市出現(xiàn)了一種綠色出行方式――共享單車（bikesharing），它因環(huán)保、便捷而備受青睞，但同時也引發(fā)了一些問題。請你根據(jù)提示以＂Bikesharing＂為題寫一篇英語短文，表達自己的看法和建議。要點提示：AdvantagesBe convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（減緩交通壓力）Take exercise…Problems Throw away, damage（毀損）, be stolen…Advice Civilized（文明的）, follow the rules, take good care of…注意：1. 短文應(yīng)包括以上要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名及地名；3. 詞數(shù)：80100（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。Bikesharing Today, as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. It39。s known that it has many advantages. So it39。s enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, it39。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bikesharing. Besides, bikesharing helps people take more this way, it39。s helpful to people39。s health.（優(yōu)勢） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（難題） In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建議）【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富，表達了所有要點，語言表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語，為文章增色不少，.如: It39。s known that it has many advantages.，F(xiàn)irst of all, it39。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。【點睛】本文要求以“Bikesharing”為題，根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文，表達自己對共享單車的看法和建議。寫作時，考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個要點：首先，闡述共享單車的優(yōu)點；其次，列舉共享單車帶來的問題；最后，根據(jù)問題給出個人建議。2．假如你是班長李華，今天你們班對即將到來的暑假計劃進行了討論。你們班的外教David對此很感興趣。請你根據(jù)以下信息，給 David寫一封電子郵件，告訴他討論的情況及你自己本人的計劃及原因。比例計劃原因50% 去國內(nèi)外旅游。30% 多讀一些書；20% 參加社會實踐。你的計劃? （至少一個）？（請你補充）注意：（1）郵件應(yīng)包含所有要點（2）詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）；（3）不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分注：社會實踐 social practice activitiesDear DavidI39。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear DavidI39。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends. I39。m going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如how to do，spend a meaningful summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abro