【正文】 the heavy burden they have to teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden students have to 、形容詞、副詞錯誤1)What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look is more, the change of the weather will make the place look )Surprising enough, he faces the failure very enough, he faces the failure very 、分詞誤用1)Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy )Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewing through my spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewed through my 、修飾語誤置1)Spoken English is an important part for learning English English is an important part for people learning )To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the keep the air clean, we must move to the countryside the factories which give off poisonous gases to the 、垂懸修飾語1)Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has been greatly carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved their living )To tell my friend the good news, the letter was posted at tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at 、平行錯誤1)While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be we reduce the number of vehicles, we can increase the speed of )Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty and length of the course./ Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me how difficult the course was and how long it 、搭配錯誤1)In the past the price of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford )Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city 、破句1)Nowadays, if you want to find a you must pass the job , if you want to find a job, you must pass the job )First you should show good the first impression you leave on others is you should show good manners, because the first impression you leave on others is important.第二篇：英語四六級作文評分標準及錯誤總結評分標準2分……條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴重錯誤。5分……基本切題。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴重語言錯誤。8分……基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當多，其中有一些是嚴重錯誤。11分……切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。14分……切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性好?；旧蠠o語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。(注: 白卷, 作文與題目毫不相關, 或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達思想,則給0分。)寫作中要注意的問題最后十天應該怎樣復習？四級話題、六級話題：把過去兩到三年的題再寫寫，最好準備出一套文章，對于任何題目都適用。四級偏向日常生活中的話題，六級關于環(huán)境或社會發(fā)展的方