【正文】 行文技巧中國學(xué)生的寫作重點(diǎn)往往不是提供個(gè)人資料，說明自己的基本情況，而是一味強(qiáng)調(diào)自己申請(qǐng)的原因和自己的需求。例如：We lack the technology, we need is carrying out reform……So we need his 。寫作時(shí)申請(qǐng)人應(yīng)把自己的實(shí)力、專長(zhǎng)、特點(diǎn)等闡明清楚，以此來說服讀者，讓對(duì)方感到你值得他們?yōu)槟闾峁┻@次求學(xué)機(jī)會(huì)，要知道對(duì)方是不會(huì)因?yàn)槟阈枰蜑槟闾峁┣髮W(xué)機(jī)會(huì)的。語言表達(dá)在介紹個(gè)人情況時(shí)，為了引起讀者的重視，中國學(xué)生頻繁地使用形容詞最高級(jí)來評(píng)價(jià)自己。例如：I am your best candidate and I had been granted an excellent ，對(duì)自己的評(píng)價(jià)應(yīng)本著實(shí)事求是的原則，充分說明自己的客觀情況，不要夸大其詞，過分標(biāo)榜，要能使人閱后感到真實(shí)可信，否則只能適得其反。另外，中國學(xué)生偏好以情感人，喜歡用一些私人化的非正式的表達(dá)方式。例如： I would be very happy and hope we will be able to keep in touch in the 。寫作時(shí)語言表達(dá)應(yīng)該正式，譴詞造句要平實(shí)具體。說服勸誘策略求學(xué)申請(qǐng)信的目的在于是收信人了解申請(qǐng)人的要求和與此相關(guān)的情況，以便對(duì)方做出有利于申請(qǐng)人的決定，為了達(dá)到這一目的，一般采用自我推銷或自我評(píng)價(jià)策略（selfappraisal），而中國學(xué)生常常采用自我美化（selfglorification）、吹捧對(duì)方和自我貶低策略（selfdegradation）自我美化策略：申請(qǐng)人極力美化自己。例如：I am a graduate in mining engineering having a shining academic record in my have been given admission in the graduate school, university of…,USA… 這種自我評(píng)價(jià)主觀性強(qiáng)，缺乏可信度。吹捧對(duì)方策略：申請(qǐng)人極力吹捧對(duì)方學(xué)?；蛘咂渌鶎賴?。例如：I have secured first division marks(Grade B)in the said exam and on the above basis I intend to plete my further studies in the field of Medicine in My loving great country, ，對(duì)對(duì)方百般恭維，這樣反而給人留下不好的印象。自我貶低：申請(qǐng)人常常希望通過對(duì)其經(jīng)濟(jì)困難的描述來博得對(duì)方的同情。例如： I belong to a third world country…Due to this feeling of immense kindness and generosity of Americans both literally as well as practically, I a needy student is able to pen down this request for financial assistance in education.… the education abroad is very expensive and we cannot afford it… So, I request your honor to please support a poor student financially, so that he can bee a bright mind for humanity…申請(qǐng)人企圖以情感人，不是對(duì)對(duì)方百般恭維就是對(duì)自己妄自菲薄，這都不會(huì)給對(duì)方留下好印象。所以在寫申請(qǐng)信時(shí)，申請(qǐng)人在態(tài)度上應(yīng)坦誠真摯，不卑不亢，這樣才會(huì)起到積極的效果。以上簡(jiǎn)述了中國學(xué)生在寫求學(xué)申請(qǐng)信時(shí)常犯的錯(cuò)誤，希望能引起大家的重視?？傊?，在寫求學(xué)申請(qǐng)信時(shí)，既要按照一定的格式，遵循一定的要求，又要避免落入俗套，同時(shí)寫出個(gè)人的優(yōu)勢(shì)和特點(diǎn)。附：求學(xué)申請(qǐng)信樣新正文部分 Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing to apply for a place in the MA program in Economics of your university for the 20032004 academic am presently a fourthyear student at the Department of Economics, Beijing the past three years, I have done well and have received quite a number of scholarships and I graduate and take my Bachelor’s degree in June 2003, I wish to work for my Master’s degree in Economics at your Graduate would be grateful if you could send me an Application Form for Graduate Admission and a Financial Aid From as well as information about your am looking forward to hearing from you sincerely, Jia MingDirections: the following paragraph carefully and write a letter of about 200 name is Li Jin, a student of the Department of Applied Physics, Tsinghua hope to further your study in Boston University(Massachusetts, USA)upon your graduation next you are writing to the office of graduate admissions to ask for the Application Form and other relative following points should also be covered by letter: personal information reason why you choose Boston University brief study plan essay must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET ：Department of Applied Physics Tsinghua University Beijing, China, 1999 Office of Graduate Admissions Boston University Massachusetts, USA Dear Sir or Madam，I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in Applied Physics toward master degree in your name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of Applied Physics, Tsinghua University(China).Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get my BS plan to continue my study and research in this field under the instructions of firstclass professors and in a dynamic academic chose Boston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array of databases and research projects in your School of believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, a detailed introduction to the School of Physics, and other relevant mailing address is shown on the top of this am looking forward to hearing from you yours Li Jin求職信/求學(xué)信：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter applying for a position of a should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese：申請(qǐng)職位，簡(jiǎn)要介紹自己的情況，期待回信。Dear Sir or Madam，I am senior from the Department of Business Administration of Beijing am writing the letter in purpose of applying for admission into your esteemed institution/your recently advertised position for a staff am sure that I am qualified for , enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work , not only do my qualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my cheerful personality is well suited to studying in your prestigious university/working as a staff , my hobbies include sports and fail me when I try to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you rendered prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly sincerely，Li MingDirections:You want to study at a certain foreign a letter to ask about the situation there as regards acmodation and fees, possible scholarships, and what qualifications one needs for Sir or Madam，I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential , what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I already have a bachelor39。s degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any further academic , how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be selfsupporting, I would be interested to hear if there