【正文】 n pop or rock music.3. 圖表below displays/indicates the average earnings per week, in pounds sterling, of people of different levels of education living in the UK between the years 1965 and 1995.改寫：練習(xí)劍4第一段。作業(yè)：改寫劍5第一段。第三章 主體段（23段）一、展開框架：1） 不描述所有數(shù)據(jù)。2） 遵循時(shí)間、最高原則。A..若出現(xiàn)一組時(shí)間，以時(shí)間為切入點(diǎn)進(jìn)行描述，比如1998年2008年期間，可以從1998年開始描述。，可從最高值為切入點(diǎn)，如1998年出現(xiàn)不同領(lǐng)域的數(shù)據(jù)，可從最高值開始描述。，以最高值為切入點(diǎn)來描述3）隨后描述最低數(shù)值和有特點(diǎn)的數(shù)值4）線圖：描述趨勢(shì)而非單個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)；另外三種中，將數(shù)據(jù)分組描述。二、主題段句子寫作寶典：將數(shù)字逐一寫出是一種讓閱卷官嘔吐不止的寫法，But, 好句子一般有三個(gè)部分1）文字信息2）數(shù)字信息3）比較例子1： The average US family had people in 1919, in 1967 and in 2006. （吐）改后：Average family size in the US has been shrinking, from people in 1967 to people in 2006, pared with people in 1919.例子2：Nonmetropolitan counties had a property crime rate of 1,250 per 100,000 people, and metropolitan counties experienced a rate of 2,529 offenses per 100,000 inhabitants. 改后: The property crime rate in nonmetropolitan counties was relatively low, 1,250 per 100,000 people, less than half the rate in metropolitan counties(2, 529 offenses per 100,000 inhabitants).好例子: The lowest wages are found in Hong Kong and Athens: 3 and 4 pounds respectively, but while taxes are a little higher in Athens than in Hong Kong (% vs. 15%), rents are by far cheaper (700 vs. 2400 pounds).更多例子可參考104頁(yè)《套路剖析》，熟悉這種寫法。三、寫好主題段落的關(guān)鍵！Task 1 小作文詞匯分類詳解 amp。 例句：我們可以使用的套用結(jié)構(gòu)有：動(dòng)詞：increase/rise/climb/ expand/ swell名詞：increase/rise/climb/expansion/swell△ Big Increase1. The biggest change occurred in the period 1985 to 1995, when high school graduates enjoyed the greatest increase in earnings.2. Over the thirtyyear period, there was a big increase in earnings amongst people with high school certificates(￡85).3. China experienced/saw a significant rise in puterrelated work.4. There was a dramatic increase, in 1970, in the number of university graduates.5. Japan experienced a massive increase in car ownership in the 1930s.6. There was a significant difference in the money people spent on CDs in the Northern Territories between August and September, from 25% to 48%.7. A slight increase occurred between 1940 and 1950 in Brazil.8. After 1940, there was a significant increase in the number of imprisonments, reaching 90 thousand in 1980, a threefold increase from 1930.9. In Great Britain, in 1930, imprisonment figures stood at 30, they increased threefold, to 90,000 by 1980.10. Three years later, in 1996, both countries saw a marked increase.11. In fact, 1997 saw a huge increase from 329,000 accidents in the first quarter to a massive 764,000 accidents during the second quarter.12. It increased substantially at the beginning of the year.△ Small Increase1. During the same period, people with a Doctoral degree increased their earnings by the least amount.2. The Northern Territories, during the first part of the year, experienced a slight increase from 10% in January to 15% in March.3. People holding a Bachelor’s degree only managed a modest increase of ￡5 per week, reaching a level of ￡145 in 1995.4. The number of men in the sector rose only marginally from 425,000 to 480,000 in the same period.△ Gradual/Steady Increase 1. There was a gradual increase in earning amongst people with a university degree.2. While women showed a steady increase, male smokers dropped sharply after 1980, but began a steady increase again after 1990.3. There was a steady increase in puter use in all categories. 4. India experienced a steady rise between 1940 and 1960.5. Following a slump in sales during April to June, Queensland saw a steady rise in spending between July and October.In 1990, the number of male smokers diminished significantly to only 13%, whilst the number of female smokers rose steadily to 22%.6. Apart from a decline in the 31 to 45 age group, overall, America saw a steady climb after about 21, from 18% to 40%.△ Sharp Increase1. There was a sharp increase in the USA in 1970 from 5 million to 8 million. There was a second significant increase in 1990 to 11 million, followed by a massive leap to 24 million in 2000.2. Mobile phone use increased in big leaps in Japan, reaching a peak of 32 million in 1990.3. Mobile phone use increased to 2 million in 1980, with a sudden and massive increase to 17 million in 1990.4. Earnings in general rose sharply between 1965 and 1995.5. Japan remained much lower than othe