【正文】 ove,Amy【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do some housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，make the bed，take care of，how to do等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by you feel unfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。3．隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，通訊的方式從遠(yuǎn)古時(shí)代的書信到當(dāng)今的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，經(jīng)歷著巨大的變化。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)現(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法。內(nèi)容包括：1. 你喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些？2. 它們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么？3. 你認(rèn)為使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么？要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱和姓名；2. 語意連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me,【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by munication software, such as WeChat and .Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face munication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍?duì)現(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些；接下來介紹它們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么，以及使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么；最后呼吁號(hào)召大家合理使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具。此處prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。4．書面表達(dá) 初三的學(xué)習(xí)生活繁忙中有困惑、淚水，也有進(jìn)步、喜悅。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提示，寫一篇題為“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介紹九年級(jí)的學(xué)校生活，并提出希望和建議。在校老師工作認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)，充滿愛心學(xué)生…… （至少發(fā)揮兩點(diǎn)）周末作業(yè)作業(yè)多．舍棄愛好其它活動(dòng)鍛煉，電視愿望…… （發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)）要求：1．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：2．文章不少于90詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3．語意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now. 【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can39。t afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將