【正文】 e care of，how to do等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by you feel unfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。3．安全對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語(yǔ)小短文。提示：1. 體育鍛煉2. 上下樓梯3. 交朋結(jié)友4. 食品衛(wèi)生要求： 1. 語(yǔ)句通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容連貫；2．短文可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；但要包含以上要點(diǎn)。3．詞數(shù)：80—100詞。短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us _____________________________________________【答案】Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.In a word, it39。s important to remember these for us all.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。結(jié)合要點(diǎn)提示，可知本文主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述，注意圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時(shí)態(tài)，及句式等重要內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。4．近來(lái)，美國(guó)總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說(shuō)一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅”。你的美國(guó)朋友Sam 看過(guò)相關(guān)報(bào)道之后也很想學(xué)好中文,但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一封郵件給他,提一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)的建議。要點(diǎn)提示 :,做好筆記。,與同學(xué)們用中文交流。、報(bào)紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語(yǔ)言類(lèi)節(jié)目。注意 :。,以使行文連貫。,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam ,I39。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】Dear Sam,I39。m happy to hear from know you want to learn Chinese are some suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫(xiě)一封信，告訴他如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)，題目中從四個(gè)方面提出了建議。通過(guò)審題可知，這是要求寫(xiě)一封建議信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)方面：首先應(yīng)和Sam先做一個(gè)交流，然后引出寫(xiě)信的目的；接下來(lái)給出具體的建議，依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條，用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，還應(yīng)注意補(bǔ)充一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)；最后寫(xiě)一個(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾，如希望建議對(duì)你有幫助等。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q(chēng)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能按照漢語(yǔ)的思維逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫(xiě)完整的句子。如可以較常見(jiàn)的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主，簡(jiǎn)單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡(jiǎn)潔。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫(xiě)了一封信，對(duì)他的漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個(gè)部分：第一段是與Sam之間的問(wèn)候以及引出Sam學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)這一話題，并介紹寫(xiě)信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話對(duì)整篇文章做了總結(jié)。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣