【正文】 ou, and hope you could accept my yours, liming 考研英語作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下： dear , to make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next friday? if so, i promise i will finish the task and send my report to you via do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my yours, liming 8分同學(xué)你好，作文寫的很好，但要注意時(shí)態(tài)的選擇?？佳杏⒄Z小作文批改例文：道歉信 8分同學(xué)你好，你的作文寫的不錯(cuò)。第一篇dear , to make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next friday? if so, i promise i will finish the task and send my report to you via do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my yours, liming dear , to make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next friday? if so, i promise i will finish the task and send my report to you via do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my yours, liming 810分第二篇dear david, i am truly sorry that i cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next tuesday reason is that i am going to take a business to shanghai by plane that day, so i will be unavailable for the , considering the importance of the meeting, i will be grateful if you could send me a brief record of the project progress by will check the record and send my feedback to again, i am sorry for any inconvenience you can accept my apologies and understand my sincerely, li ming dear david, i am truly sorry that i cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next tuesday reason is that i am going to take a business to shanghai by plane that day, so i will be unavailable for the , considering the importance of the meeting, i will be grateful if you could(刪除)send me a brief record of the project progress by will check(用詞不當(dāng))the record and send my feedback to again, i am sorry for any inconvenience you can accept my apologies and understand my sincerely, li ming篇三：考研英語寫作小作文之道歉信考研英語寫作小作文之道歉信在考研英語的part a 小作文部分，書信作為考查的重點(diǎn)所在，種類繁多。今天中公考研英語教研組的張玉環(huán)老師就對(duì)考研英語小作文中的第六類書信——道歉信——進(jìn)行深入的分析。寫作時(shí)，一定要態(tài)度誠懇，提供合理的理由，并需在解釋完原因后，盡可能提供一個(gè)合適的補(bǔ)救辦法。作為英文應(yīng)用書信的一種，道歉信非常符合考研英語的考查要求，既可考查考生的英語書面表達(dá)能力，尤其是應(yīng)用文的英語表達(dá)能力，又可考查到考生對(duì)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的歸納、概括、表述能力。接下來就以題目為例，具體解析一下這個(gè)策略。根據(jù)上面所提的道歉信寫作“三步走”策略，具體操作如下： 首段：i am writing to express my apology to you for my failing to return your music cd before i came “三步走”策略中，第一步就是要表明寫信目的并且簡述事由。既然這是一封道歉信，那么寫信的目的自然就是向收信人表示道歉，而這也正是題目所給出的寫作要求之一。對(duì)于以上兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，簡單來說，可用一句話表達(dá)，即i am writing this letter to express my apology to you for my failing to?? 在道歉信中，本段的主要內(nèi)容就是首先就上面所道歉之事進(jìn)行詳細(xì)的陳述，包括事情是如何發(fā)生的以及自己為什么會(huì)犯這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤而給對(duì)方造成不便。做補(bǔ)償時(shí)務(wù)必要記住的是態(tài)度一定要誠懇、真摯，所以補(bǔ)償方案需要實(shí)虛結(jié)合：既要有具體的、實(shí)實(shí)在在的解決方法，還要為可能造成的損失做出將會(huì)彌補(bǔ)的承諾，以在最大限度上獲得對(duì)方的原諒。之后，第二句話用一句非常簡單的please accept my apologies表達(dá)了自己的期待，期待收信人接受道歉，進(jìn)而原諒自己。英語復(fù)習(xí)到這個(gè)階段，最重要的就是作文?？佳杏⒄Z中大作文的要求是內(nèi)容切題、表達(dá)清楚、文字連貫、句式多變和語言規(guī)范。其中小作文占10分，分為求職信、祝賀信、道歉信、詢問信、推薦信、感謝信、邀請信、辭職信等等二十多種應(yīng)用文。道歉信是指因過失或疏忽做錯(cuò)了事，給別人帶來了麻煩或損失，發(fā)覺后要立即寫信給對(duì)方賠禮道歉時(shí)寫的信件。道歉信通常包括三部分內(nèi)容：表示歉意，道歉的原由。請求原諒。好的道歉信不僅會(huì)取得對(duì)方的諒解，還會(huì)增進(jìn)彼此的感情。注意：理由要盡量合理，違反生活常識(shí)將導(dǎo)致扣分。范文解析： directions: you were unable to attend ’s examination on international business english writing because you got sick that a letter to express the reasons for not being able to attend it and the letter with no less than 100 not sign your own name at end of the “wang hua” not write the , i am indeed very sorry that i missed the examination on international business english writing you gave last feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the find enclosed a copy of the medical yours, wang hua ◆常用句式：i am writing to apologize for ? /i am writing to say sorry for 我寫這封信是因??向你致歉。please accept my sincere apology for? 關(guān)于??請接受我真誠的道歉。但請相信，我并非故意要??please forgive me for a stupid choice of 。please accept my apologies for my 。i sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my ，并接受我的道歉。篇五：2016考研復(fù)習(xí)：考研英語道歉信萬能寫作模板更多精彩，復(fù)制打開鏈接：/kaoyan 2016考研復(fù)習(xí)：考研英語道歉信萬能寫作模板相信各位2016考研的同學(xué)，大部分都會(huì)將作文放到最后的沖刺階段來復(fù)習(xí)。所以，不管你的英語寫作能力怎么樣，多背一些模板和佳句總是有好處的。第一段首先亮出寫作目的并簡單闡述該物品的狀態(tài)：i am writing to make an apology to you for+句子(表明事件因由)。要想在考研英語作文上獲得高分，也不能完全依靠模板，平時(shí)還是要多多練習(xí)一下寫作，背誦的一些模板、寫作佳句等，要學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用才算是真正掌握，才能在2016考研英語的考場上用得恰到好處。我一直都渴望能在那個(gè)特殊的日子為你獻(xiàn)上我誠摯的祝福.(第一段一定得簡單說明下你做了什么對(duì)不起主人公的事情，即為什么道歉，順帶為其損失表達(dá)下遺憾。The afternoon I got a call from my parents telling me that my sister has been hospitalized 今天下午，我父母打電話告訴我，我妹妹生病了.(妹妹生病了，自行車壞了，作業(yè)沒帶，路上遇見老奶奶，各種理由，各種用)Both of my parents are busy at work I have to go home in a harry to take care of am sure you can understand would like to say sorry again and wish you a happy birthday as well as a successful party我想再次表達(dá)我的歉意，以及祝你生日快樂， sincerely , Li Ming 補(bǔ)充：可以加上第三段內(nèi)容，如下：Please accept my heartfelt apology I hope to obtain your forgiveness for my ，我希望能夠獲得你的諒解PS : 根據(jù)樓主考研的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，小作文對(duì)于格式的要求并不是那么死 板，越靈活越好，比如 15 年英二考了一個(gè) notice，70%的考生都沒注意，開頭仍然是寫 dear student，但依據(jù)最后的分?jǐn)?shù)來看，大家并沒有質(zhì)的區(qū)別，只要意思大體正確，單詞不拼錯(cuò)，閱卷老師不會(huì)為難你，小作文不需要花太多時(shí)間