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the fundamental principle of human ideology and material ,we should seek the solutions through setting foot on this principle. Due to the depth and width of its harmful influence,we should draft our solution scientifically and systematically on the basis of deep analysis of its must acquire our power from technology,management,law and culture to tackle the problem,effectively eliminate the shadow of___________,and ensures ourselves a bright future. How enlightening and pelling the above drawing is!It is so funny that whoever sees it cannot help thinking:_____.(這句自己加完整,從宏觀上描述一下圖畫(huà)就可以,籠統(tǒng)的,大體的)______while_______.(這句從微觀上具體說(shuō)明一下圖畫(huà)要描述的矛盾點(diǎn),必須找到矛盾點(diǎn),用到while這個(gè)單詞)Simple as it looks,its intended meaning goes far deeper what on earth does the drawer really aim to convey. 第二段 What the image above vividly mirrors goes far more than a simple image,instead,it carries a thought provoking social phenomenon:____.(本文的主旨)There are upsetting(如文章不是諷刺性的,就把upsetting刪除)parallels today in our contemporary example,______.(舉2個(gè)例子,如果字?jǐn)?shù)夠就舉1個(gè)) 第三段: Much can be begin with the schools and the mass media should develop,guide and cultivate noble and worthy values and qualities among people,doing their utmost to awaken people of the growing threat of this worsening situation.(of this worsening situation自己可以換成主旨的詞,如果不換,這樣也可以?! 钸x擇觀點(diǎn)兩種相互促進(jìn)的事物或現(xiàn)象(正面意義傾向) A A A happiness BBB money AAA and BBB are nothing strange for us,because increasingly more argumentations about them can be found in TV programs,newspapers,university classes and many aspects of our everyday always confront the dilemma of choosing whether AAA or BBB. We can never separate AAA from BBB,because they two have close but plicated one hand,in some sense,BBB is the foundation of AAA,creating favorable condition for AAA’s ,it is