【正文】 狂熱）4）第一句的第四種寫法：社會(huì)趨勢(shì)（一般都寫在“有越來(lái)越多的人干什么去了”這樣的社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀）There is a growing tendency nowadays that?graduates in mounting numbers can hardly find an ideal job（就業(yè)難）people in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for volunteer works/ various talent shows（選秀熱）students in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for students leaders selection（競(jìng)選班干部熱）people in mounting numbers participate in the test for national civil servants.（公務(wù)員熱）undergraduates in growing numbers take the postgraduate entrance examination（考研熱）people in mounting numbers try their luck to buy lottery tickets（買彩票熱）people in mounting numbers use credit card.（信用卡熱）注：people in mounting numbers 都表示“越來(lái)越多的人”，切忌寫：more and more people，找死！5）第一句的第五種寫法：某個(gè)現(xiàn)象人盡皆知（一般寫比較大的，比較嚴(yán)重的社會(huì)問(wèn)題）No one in China has failed to notice the phenomenon that?that goods in mounting numbers are wrapped in flaring boxes or bags（過(guò)度包裝問(wèn)題）that there has been a steady rise in the number of rural laborers who swarm into big cities.（農(nóng)工進(jìn)城）The economy has been developing at a considerably high speed at the expense of living environment.（經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展以犧牲環(huán)境為代價(jià)）文章第二句話：（溫馨提示：陳述正反觀點(diǎn)；你只要說(shuō)，針對(duì)某個(gè)事情，人們看法存在不一樣就行，不要再第一段就開(kāi)始具體論述雙方的觀點(diǎn)各是什么?。〥oes anyone hold the same attitude towards this issue ？Definitely not，actually，opinions vary from person to ：對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)論述段（溫馨提示：文章的第3,4,5,6四句話，都寫在第二段；這是字?jǐn)?shù)最多，內(nèi)容最豐滿的一段，稱為“豬肚”）文章第三句話：（提出正方觀點(diǎn)，比如說(shuō)他支持什么；總體來(lái)說(shuō)，有兩種表示支持的說(shuō)法）Some maintain that(表示“認(rèn)為”的單詞，打死都不寫“think”；maintain/argue/hold/claim都可以寫)1）某物是有好處的：something is beneficial to sth.（練習(xí)：跳槽對(duì)學(xué)生有利）2)某物優(yōu)點(diǎn)缺點(diǎn)：The merits of outweigh its demerits.（練習(xí)：用手機(jī)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)缺點(diǎn)）文章第四句話：(上句提出了論點(diǎn)，這句就必須要用論據(jù)來(lái)證明，論據(jù)可以寫一個(gè)，也可若干個(gè)；個(gè)數(shù)的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo))Firstly,?secondly,?last but not least,?.（萬(wàn)能理由：這個(gè)只能在新東方小虹的六級(jí)寫作課堂聽(tīng)啦！）文章第五句話：(既是正反對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)作文，第三句提出正方觀點(diǎn)，那么這句當(dāng)然要提出對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)啦！)However，quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that（反方觀點(diǎn)），1)某物是有壞處：something is detrimental to )某物缺點(diǎn)優(yōu)點(diǎn)： The demerits of outweigh itsmerits.（merits 代替advantages）文章第六句話：(上句提出了論點(diǎn)，這句就必須要用論據(jù)來(lái)證明，論據(jù)可以寫一個(gè)，也可若干個(gè)；個(gè)數(shù)的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo))For one thing，? for another,?第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)段（文章的第7,8,9句；四六級(jí)作文，包括考研作文，都要求寫essay議論文，短評(píng)，所以，寫了上述對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)的目的，其實(shí)就是為了最后提出自己的觀點(diǎn)?。┪恼碌谄呔湓挘篢o my way of thinking，? From my perspective, + 個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)句（參見(jiàn)第三、五）文章第八句話：(上句提出了論點(diǎn)，這句就必須要用論據(jù)來(lái)證明，論據(jù)可以寫一個(gè)，也可若干個(gè)；個(gè)數(shù)的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo))In the first place，? in the second place,?（萬(wàn)能理由）文章第九句話：(再次重申自己的觀點(diǎn)，和第七句話正好構(gòu)成“總分總結(jié)構(gòu)”)Given all the factors I have outlined，I strongly mit to the notion that（觀點(diǎn)句）或者是：Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the idea that?模板二：?jiǎn)栴}解決作文 {3段9句話}（溫馨提示：全文寫3段共9句話；第一段提出問(wèn)題，第二段分析問(wèn)題，第三段解決問(wèn)題——亞里士多德三段論?。┑谝欢危宏愂霈F(xiàn)狀段（溫馨提示：文章的第2句；主要用來(lái)寫當(dāng)前的某個(gè)社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀、趨勢(shì)；共有5種開(kāi)篇寫法，沒(méi)有固定的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)選哪種，選擇一種容易下手的去寫，下文將相關(guān)話題都舉出來(lái)了）文章第一句話：（溫馨提示：第一句話的功能，就是介紹文章寫作背景，社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀；所以呢，寫法和“對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)作文”的文章第一段，第一句的寫法是完全一樣的?。㏕he past several years have witnessed a not unmon phenomenon that?(社會(huì)現(xiàn)象).文章第二句話：具體描述（將文章第一句話所講的抽象的、大體的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，用具體的文字描述一下，增加字?jǐn)?shù)，只能這么做了?。┡e例：（第一句）Nowadays, the phenomenon of drunken driving has arouse wide concern among the public.（第二句）Especially the young generation living in metropolis, tend to drive after drinking, ignoring the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat totheir precious life and may even endanger ：原因或危害陳述段（分析問(wèn)題）文章第三句話：（過(guò)渡句，引發(fā)討論某個(gè)社會(huì)問(wèn)題、現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因）Ample reasons can account for this phenomenon，and the followings might be the most critical ones:文章第四句話：（提出某個(gè)社會(huì)問(wèn)題、現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因；具體寫幾個(gè)原因，根據(jù)字?jǐn)?shù)情況斟酌）Firstly，? secondly,?.（萬(wàn)能理由）文章第五句話：（提出如果我們不關(guān)注這個(gè)問(wèn)題，后果很嚴(yán)重?。㏕he problem mentioned above will bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it.（翻譯：如果我們對(duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題視而不見(jiàn)，聽(tīng)而不聞，將產(chǎn)生嚴(yán)重后果）文章第六句話：（危害和后果分別是什么呢？）On the one hand, ? on the other hand,?第三段：原因或危害陳述段（解決問(wèn)題）文章第七句話：（號(hào)召句，“放空話”！號(hào)召大家趕緊采取措施，投入關(guān)注等等）Effective measures should be adopted before things get ：（采取什么措施呢？這個(gè)在考前你都可以背下來(lái)，考試的時(shí)候用上去就好！）First and foremost，（措施）.1）揚(yáng)善去惡：（兩面性問(wèn)題，比如手機(jī)，彩票等等）What we should do is to encourage the merits and diminish the demerits to the least extent2)大家聯(lián)合起來(lái)：（一般用在解決學(xué)生的問(wèn)題，心理健康啊，網(wǎng)癮啊等等）It is high time that parents，educators，and the authorities make bined efforts to put an end to this )個(gè)人意識(shí)：（提高環(huán)境保護(hù)的意識(shí)等等）The public should enhance their consciousness of the significance of ?4)采取行動(dòng)：（這句話純粹就是湊字?jǐn)?shù)的）We must press forward on deeper research，but research alone is inadequate, actually，any one of us has good reason to take actions to?5)加強(qiáng)教育：（一般用在涉及面比較廣的社會(huì)問(wèn)題）A public education campaign should be launched to inform the public of the importance of6)政府出臺(tái)：（一般用在比較大的，比較嚴(yán)重的社會(huì)問(wèn)題，如節(jié)約問(wèn)題，浪費(fèi)問(wèn)題等等）It is essential that the authorities should make and implement relevant laws and regulations to impose a heavy penalty on those who(contaminate the environment deliberately)7)呼吁相關(guān)部門加強(qiáng)監(jiān)管：（一般用在比較大的，比較嚴(yán)重的社會(huì)問(wèn)題。我們要從內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言兩個(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過(guò)語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)，要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達(dá)思想，也要考慮是否用英語(yǔ)清楚而合適地表達(dá)思想，也就要考慮語(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤是否造成理解上的障礙。也就是說(shuō)，在真正實(shí)際批改中，如果你出現(xiàn)i is, you am等現(xiàn)象，或者一個(gè)單詞少了