【正文】 多種表達(dá)，正如在數(shù)理化學(xué)習(xí)中我們要注重一題多解一樣。二．避免重復(fù)使用詞匯有時(shí)一篇作文里需要多次使用相同意思的詞，這時(shí)，表達(dá)方式的變換，用不同的單詞或詞組表達(dá)相同的意義就顯得非常重要。如： makes is said than there is a will, there is a before you is helps those who help is impossible to a willing ，無(wú)事不成 ’s never too old to ，學(xué)到老 pains, no in a blue make the impossible is the mother of friend in need is a friend things minds think was not built in a that glitters is not or west, home is the and tide wait for no 原理：要想更有說(shuō)服力，就應(yīng)該用數(shù)字來(lái)說(shuō)明。,例如：Does food affect your health? And if so what kind of effects does it have?這兩個(gè)問(wèn)句就是一篇短文“food”的開頭段。起始句用得好，可以很快吸引讀者的注意，吸引閱卷老師的眼球。在教學(xué)中，除了加強(qiáng)英語(yǔ)寫作訓(xùn)練基本功外，還應(yīng)該給予寫作技巧的指導(dǎo)，尤其是在考試時(shí)間不很充裕的條件下，如何在短時(shí)間內(nèi)寫出好的文章，離不開一定的寫作技巧。③廣告詞的含義——水很重要，應(yīng)保護(hù)和再利用(寫作意圖)。Jinyun mountain is a famous place of day a lot of tourists e here to enjoy its a few years ago，some of them paid no attention to protecting the threw their rubbish，such as plastic bags，fruit skins and waste paper on the they broke trees，picked flowers and killed even made fires in the woods to cook dangerous it ，great changes have taken place are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins，and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the these changes make us very .[思路點(diǎn)撥]：①夾敘夾議(說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀，談?wù)劯邢?。采用正反對(duì)比的寫作手法，增加感染力。a.[思路點(diǎn)撥]：①文體：記敘文。提示：。，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。寫作要求：。五、備考演練a縉云山是重慶著名的游覽勝地，每天有大量的游客。，請(qǐng)求老師指點(diǎn)，尤其是怎樣潤(rùn)色。四、培養(yǎng)途徑，獨(dú)立完成一篇寫作。其實(shí)這些表達(dá)同學(xué)a也會(huì)，只是缺乏技術(shù)加工。選用這兩篇學(xué)生真實(shí)習(xí)作，一是因?yàn)樗麄冞x材相同，二是因?yàn)樗麄兌际怯⒄Z(yǔ)成績(jī)優(yōu)秀的同學(xué)。③時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過(guò)去時(shí)，一般將來(lái)時(shí)的自然變化。[高分突破]①文體：記敘文。②語(yǔ)言表達(dá)靈活多樣，字里行間流露出真情實(shí)感，文章有感染力。[點(diǎn)評(píng)]：檔次1314分。②真情流露，理由充分。③有少量錯(cuò)誤。①要點(diǎn)不全，漏掉最后一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。②also的位置應(yīng)放在can之后。﹒about your hopes and plans for the ：，適當(dāng)拓展想象空間，靈活地將提供的信息體現(xiàn)在文章中。﹒when and how you became interested in this hobby。，后抄寫。確定文體后，根據(jù)不同文體的特點(diǎn)和要求進(jìn)行組織材料；同時(shí)確定出該篇文章的總時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)態(tài)的變化。審題包括要點(diǎn)、格式、詞數(shù)以及此篇文章要傳遞給讀者什么樣的信息，告誡讀者什么(即寫作目的)。那么怎樣才能寫出一篇優(yōu)秀作文，而在中考中獲取高分呢？一、寫作訣竅總體把握，要點(diǎn)齊全；人稱時(shí)態(tài)，邏輯清楚；關(guān)鍵詞匯，動(dòng)詞第一；組詞成句，結(jié)構(gòu)完整；組句成文，連詞增色；此路不通，繞道迂回；字跡工整，留好印象；從句適量，高分有望。第一篇：中考英語(yǔ)高分作文如何寫如何寫出中考英語(yǔ)高分作文英語(yǔ)寫作是學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的一個(gè)盲點(diǎn)，缺乏對(duì)寫作的專門訓(xùn)練和反思，老師的工作量大，造成作文講評(píng)大多數(shù)時(shí)候只談現(xiàn)象，因此學(xué)生學(xué)得也不具體、不深入，忽略寫作技能的提高，甚至誤認(rèn)為只要句子結(jié)構(gòu)正確，無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤就應(yīng)該得滿分。同學(xué)們應(yīng)該走出對(duì)英語(yǔ)寫作認(rèn)識(shí)上的誤區(qū)。二、寫作步驟。，但不隨意發(fā)揮。三、習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng)[2004年全國(guó)中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)能力競(jìng)賽初賽初三組](14分)Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about the magazine readers.﹒what exactly your hobby is。﹒why you enjoy your hobby。，語(yǔ)句通順，書寫清晰、規(guī)范。[學(xué)生習(xí)作a]My hobby is read i was seven years became interested in reading like needing booksBecause there are a lot of useful things in can learna lot of knowledge from also can teach mehow to be a good even can solve manyproblems for will read more good books to improvemyself.①改為reading books，動(dòng)詞作表語(yǔ)時(shí)應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞。[點(diǎn)評(píng)]：檔次911分。②句子基本無(wú)誤，能正確傳遞信息給讀者但文章不流暢，句子與句子之間過(guò)渡不自然，給讀者感覺在回答上述① ② ③問(wèn)題。[學(xué)生習(xí)作b]My hobby is books is very I was young, my mother used to tell me a story beforeI went to bed e