【正文】 we are in trouble.In my opinion, we should spend a little time developing our hobbies like reading or doing sports while working hard. In this way, we can get relaxed and reduce the pressure.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，主要講述如何減壓放松。（2）開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以How Can We get relaxed為題，寫一篇短文。上周我班學(xué)生對(duì)如何減壓、放松進(jìn)行了討論。3．（用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。用一般過去時(shí)。第二部分：文章主體——根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，依次介紹我進(jìn)初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。”要求可知，本文用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱是第一人稱。m happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently. In the past , I had a lot of free time. In my free time , I used to take more exercise to lose weight. My life has changed a lot since I got into a good high school. I have more pressure . I have much homework to do every day . I have less free time to do leisure activities. In my spare time , I join in the English corner to practice my spoken English. This improves my English a lot . I learn more knowledge . My life is busy but it is colorful and meaningful.Best wishes，Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文是一篇材料作文。Dear David，Thank you so much for your mail. I39。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示及你的實(shí)際寫封回信。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。特別是I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festivalthe Dragon Boat Festival./ we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family./ I hope that you can e to celebrate it with us in the near ，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給她寫一封電子郵件。初三英語英語書面表達(dá)匯編技巧 閱讀訓(xùn)練策略及練習(xí)題(含答案)一、中考英語書面表達(dá)匯編1．（廣東實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)農(nóng)歷五月初五，我們學(xué)校將舉行“弘揚(yáng)中華傳統(tǒng)文化——端午節(jié)The Dragon Boat Festival”一系列主題活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你邀請(qǐng)外國友人Amy來校參加。內(nèi)容包括：時(shí)間：農(nóng)歷五月初五地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校操場(chǎng)目的：深入了解中國傳統(tǒng)文化內(nèi)容：文化展覽歷史介紹：兩千多年，紀(jì)念屈原體驗(yàn)民間活動(dòng)：賽龍舟，包粽子活動(dòng)意義：1．2．參考詞匯：農(nóng)歷：Chinese Lunar calendar Dear Amy,I am writing to tell you a piece of good news, there will be an exciting event next ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Ming【答案】Dear Amy,I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festivalthe Dragon Boat Festival. I’m happy to share what I know about it with you.The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragonboat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can e to celebrate it with us in the near future.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如learn from，want to know something，the Chinese traditional festival，the Dragon Boat Festival，share with，more than 2000 years，according to，a kind of，in memory of，In a word，look back on history，get together with family，in the near future等。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。2．（，你最近認(rèn)識(shí)的美國筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，向了解你進(jìn)初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。 提示：less free time，much homework，more pressure，get into a good high schoolmore exercise，lose weight join the English Comer，improve English a lotcolorful and meaningful，learn more knowledge注意：1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2）回復(fù)須包括所有藥店，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順；3）文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。m happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently. 【答案】Dear David，Thank you so much for your mail. I39?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題干“假如你是李華，你最近認(rèn)識(shí)的美國筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，向了解你進(jìn)初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。英語作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：開篇點(diǎn)題——介紹我進(jìn)初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。這里要分為三個(gè)小節(jié)：小節(jié)1：過去我的學(xué)習(xí)和生活是什么樣的——有肯多課余時(shí)間做自己喜歡的事情。小節(jié)2：進(jìn)初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面發(fā)生了變化。小節(jié)3：介紹現(xiàn)在的生活狀態(tài)——忙碌的學(xué)習(xí)。第三部分：總結(jié)全文——我的生活很忙但是很有意義。天津中考模擬）書面表達(dá)86. 如今，中學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長，壓力大。大家提出了許多種減壓、放松的方法。詞匯：壓力pressure要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個(gè)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮How Can We Get RelaxedThese days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure. 【答案】These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。上海市澧溪中學(xué)初三期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Yesterday once more”.（以“昨日重現(xiàn)”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。記憶中有沒有讓你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對(duì)你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。（注意：段文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意選取一個(gè)給你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對(duì)你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。：例文采用三段式：用第一人稱來敘述故事內(nèi)容：時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去式為主，敘述過去的經(jīng)歷，敘述完整清晰。句型：such…that…；so…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句；whenever…引導(dǎo)的從句；used to do。天津中考模擬）假如你是李明，5月18日星期六這一天，你與幾位同班同學(xué)一起參觀了水上公園 （Water Park）。（1），游客多；（2）上午劃船，下午看了許多動(dòng)物，例如…：（3）碰到幾位外國朋友并與他們交談：（4）看到了亂扔垃圾、插隊(duì)等不良現(xiàn)象：（5）你的感想…參考詞匯：.插隊(duì)cut in line要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80?100個(gè)。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)和關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。同時(shí)注意時(shí)間狀語與時(shí)