【正文】 our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使語(yǔ)言表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。s more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （習(xí)慣于）queuing up （排隊(duì)） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下所 給要點(diǎn),寫(xiě)一篇 100 詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。”自創(chuàng)建文明城市文明鄉(xiāng)村以來(lái),淄博人民萬(wàn)眾一心,眾 志成城,讓人點(diǎn)贊的行為隨處可見(jiàn)。when you read是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎o it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的視力對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。注意作文中必須包含表格上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。主要從原因和建議兩個(gè)方面去介紹。t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eyeexercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eyefriendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from being nearsighted.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)表格中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下如何保護(hù)視力。t read in the sun。t keep your eyes work for a long time. Don39。原因1. 不良的看書(shū)習(xí)慣，如在床上或陽(yáng)光下看書(shū)……2. 長(zhǎng)時(shí)間玩手機(jī)、看電視、玩電腦……3. 學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，作業(yè)多……建議1. 認(rèn)真做眼保健操2. 多吃胡蘿卜等對(duì)眼睛有益的食物3. ……參考詞匯： 近視 nearsighted 注意： 1. 內(nèi)容須包括所提示的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；3. 詞數(shù)：80100，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。以下表格是學(xué)校針對(duì)本校學(xué)生近視問(wèn)題做的調(diào)查表，假如你是校報(bào)編輯Jack，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提供的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告，陳述學(xué)校調(diào)查結(jié)果，并表明你自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)和理由。中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)易錯(cuò)題集錦名師教育經(jīng)典一、中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1． 世界衛(wèi)生組織的一項(xiàng)研究報(bào)告顯示，我國(guó)青少年近視率居世界第一。2019年全國(guó)兩會(huì)當(dāng)中“小眼鏡”成關(guān)注重點(diǎn)，防控青少年近視迫在眉睫。我校學(xué)生的近視問(wèn)題調(diào)查情況60%的本校學(xué)生戴眼鏡。According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in 【答案】According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, don39。t spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and puters. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don39。 don39。所提供的表格中列舉了近視的原因和建議。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。寫(xiě)作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。本題運(yùn)用句型：It is +形容詞+for sb. to so sth. 【高分句型二】And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 當(dāng)你讀這本書(shū)的時(shí)候，你應(yīng)該把它從你的眼睛里移開(kāi)一英尺。2．書(shū)面表達(dá)“小手拉大手,同做文明人。作為中學(xué)生,我們也做出了自己的努力。；；；；（自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點(diǎn)）參考詞匯: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in 39。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what39。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What39。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封回信給Danny。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點(diǎn)，可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮，是短文連貫，通順。 參考詞匯: civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.