【正文】 t.中文用“因?yàn)椤币龅木渥涌梢元?dú)立， 而英文不行，用Because, since, as從句，只能附屬主句：because we cannot live without it。這幾句中的the都應(yīng)去掉。而 a great amount of, a great deal of, less, much等須與不可數(shù)名詞配用。6． 可數(shù)名詞與不可數(shù)名詞方面的錯(cuò)誤information, evidence, advice, knowledge等是不可數(shù)名詞，不能用復(fù)數(shù)。如：Sometimes a teacher will inform students of the difficulty they will meet with in studies.b) People have been fighting against the influence of TV mercials, but it often proves useless.It指什么？指 influence ，在often proves useless句子中顯然不通。5． 代詞用法方面的錯(cuò)誤a) Sometimes teachers will inform students of the difficulty they will meet with in studies.They既可以指代 teachers，也可以代students，明顯的是指代不清。b) Participating in class discussion is not only good for the pursuit of knowledge, and through it we can also develop our analytical skills.同樣， 在說同樣的事時(shí)， 相鄰的句子在語法結(jié)構(gòu)上盡可能要保持一致。4． 語法結(jié)構(gòu)平行方面的錯(cuò)誤a) With the puter, one can do shopping, banking, and read at home.用語法平行結(jié)構(gòu)原則來衡量。3． 修飾語的位置錯(cuò)誤a) Without television, people can’t get information which es from other parts of the world immediately.Immediately既可以修飾 es：“得到迅速從各方面?zhèn)鱽淼南ⅰ?，也可以修? get：“迅速得到從各方面?zhèn)鱽淼南ⅰ?，意思含糊不清，所以要把它放到can’t的后面。只有舉例，提到過去的事才會用到過去時(shí)。 our determination makes him determined。 have a great passion for..2）使用同一個(gè)詞的不同詞性，在句中作不同的成分，帶來新穎性，形成變化。 foster one’s confidence in..施加壓力：put/exert a pressure on..提供機(jī)會：provide/offer/furnish an opportunity/chance for sb.抓住機(jī)會：grab/seize/take the opportunity/chance獻(xiàn)身于：devote/dedicate/mit oneself to a cause/career提高技術(shù)，能力：sharpen/improve/enhance/boost one’s skill/ability加快，促進(jìn)發(fā)展：accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boost the development of…開闊眼界：broaden one’s outlook。 make up for the damage解釋現(xiàn)象：account for the phenomenon。 take the place of sth.。 have an interference with studies產(chǎn)生影響：have/exert a profound influence on…。提出觀點(diǎn)：advance/put forward/e up with ideas作出努力：make tremendous/persistent effort to do sth.。 the growing number of..接觸新思想：be exposed to new ideas。 large numbers of重視：assign/attach much importance/significance to..強(qiáng)調(diào)：place/put much emphasis/stress/value on..越來越：be increasingly +adj.。 many a。 cause great damage to妨礙：stand in the way of..。如：好學(xué)生：top/gifted/superior/excellent/outstanding students損害：have a negative effect on。四級英語作文技巧及范文1．文章結(jié)構(gòu)：（ten sentences, 120words）Para. 1. S1 General talk of the topic S2 Thesis: the writer’s attitude towards itPara. 2. S3 The writer’s reasons to have this attitudeS4 Support IS5 Detail IS6 Detail IIS7 Support IIS8 Detail IS9 Detail II S10 Conclusion: restate the thesis2. Development Paragraphs:段落特征：統(tǒng)一，完整，連貫常用的連接手段：1． 每段的內(nèi)容要圍繞主題句，保持內(nèi)容的一致性，并從不同的角度來充分發(fā)展段落的主題思想。2． 使用代詞來代前面提到的人，物或觀點(diǎn)3． 重復(fù)段落中的關(guān)鍵詞，短語或句子4． 使用同義詞5． 使用轉(zhuǎn)折詞語和句型：1． 用于段落開始的詞語：of all, to begin with, nowadays, with the development/invention/progress of…,generally speaking, recently, etc.常用于段落開始的句型:1. People’s views/ideas/opinions on…vary from person to person. Some people think that…2. Different people have different views on …3. It is held that…4. Just as/As the proverb/old saying goes…5. It is monly believed that…6. Is….? Answer to this vary greatly. Some people think that…7. When asked about…, different people will offer different opinions. Some people say that…8. Nowadays, …play(s) an important role in…/…is popular around us. Like everything else, …h(huán)as/have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.9. …Many ways can contribute to solving this serious problem, but the following ones may be most effective.10. …There are many reasons/causes for…, but in general, they e down to two/three major ones.11. There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.2． 用于舉例的詞語：for example, such as, for instance, to illu