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復(fù)使用中心詞(組)的方法來達(dá)到過渡。ve learned typing for many years and I think I can do it well. It39?! etting to Know the World outside the Campus With the rapid development of our society, the campus is no longer an Ivory Tower. Students must get in touch with the world outside the campus so that they can adapt themselves to society more quickly when they graduate. Almost all students keep themselves informed by TV, radio broadcasts and newspapers. Some of them even take up a parttime job in their spare time. Working as tutors, serving in some fastfood restaurants… All these have kept students in touch with society. Now the summer vacation will e and I39。范文7 Getting to Know the World outside the Campus1.大學(xué)生了解社會(huì)的必要性2.了解社會(huì)的途徑(大眾媒介,社會(huì)服務(wù)等)。s mind, especially in distant rural areas. So, mankind should take further painstaking efforts to really realize equality.評析 本文過渡詞使用較好。s social position. First, women themselves have been persistently struggling for equality. Second, men also realize that women are not born inferior to them. Women can do a great many things as well as or even better than men. Third, social development has produced a great demand for women39。文章的討論由粗到細(xì),由大到小,最后歸結(jié)到了問題最嚴(yán)重,也最為關(guān)鍵的那一點(diǎn)。第二段說環(huán)境原因又有兩種,人為的和非人為的?! ∞D(zhuǎn)折過渡句往往用在這樣類型的文章,即所有事物都有正有負(fù),正、反兩方面均提出后,再尋找解決辦法。第二段卻一轉(zhuǎn),說道:人口的過分增長威脅了人類社會(huì)生存,第二段段首句引出的問題,是第一段討論內(nèi)容的又一方面。過渡句的使用既表達(dá)了各段之間語義上的轉(zhuǎn)折,又使文章各段銜接自然。文章第一段說現(xiàn)代化給中國人民帶來許多益處,第二段一開始就由however引出過渡句,指出現(xiàn)代化也同樣帶來新的問題。第一段的第二句即主題句是從提綱發(fā)展而來的,第二段的首句,即主題句也是由提綱中的第二點(diǎn)發(fā)展而來。s health a lot. So one should always keep in mind that a certain amount of exercise is not a waste of time. As for me, I like playing tennis in the morning. I also attach much importance to enough sleep and relaxation. I believe this will ensure my good health for the rest of my life.評析 這篇文章語句通順,語言流暢,句式變化多樣,用詞面比較寬。 3.我自己的實(shí)踐。范文1 Good Health1.身體健康的重要性。 2.保持健康的途徑。 Good Health The desire for good health is universal. In our petitive society it is important to maintain good health. On the one hand, people with good health can do work with full confidence and their progress in work in turn contributes to their health and happiness. On the other hand, a sick person is usually not interested in everything around him and therefore he loses many opportunities to bee successful. There are many ways to keep it. First, those who are always on the go from morning till night should find time to relax because too much stress will affect their health. Second, enough time should be left for sleep because that will help o